Jarn'Karna Rise of Eb'yoggvol
Greetings everyone! I've started to create a new themed set of cards based around a plane I came up with called Jarn'Karna. It's a plane based on Sci-fi elements with the typical Magic the Gathering Flare. I'm creating lore and some backstories to tie it all together and I hope you enjoy it! I will add more cards to this discussion in the future as for now, here are some cards that will help explain more about Jarn'Karna, its factions and its provinces.
P.S. If you would like to post card concepts, ideas and suggest card abilities feel free to post in the discussion below.
Jarn'Karna Intro:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/jarnkarna-1?list=user#.VcPrKM6pr8s
City of Aura'clea and the Court of the Alurius Sun:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/spires-of-auraclea?list=user#.VcPtRc6pr8s
Sylvan Province and the Meadow's Clutch Guild:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/meadows-grace-temple?list=user#.VcPtjs6pr8s
Naadhira City and the Minds of Naadhira
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/naadhira-skyline?list=user#.VcPt1c6pr8s
Kera Province and the Kerius Legion
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kera-skyport?list=user#.VcPuCs6pr8s
Morbspine Province and the Deathborn Cult
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/chrysoberyl-citadel?list=user#.VcPuKM6pr8s
Caverns of Yogg'veil and the darkness that lies within...
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/caverns-of-yoggveil?list=user#.VcPucs6pr8s
Ashenside Mountain and the Slaghearts
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ashenside-fortress?list=user#.VcPup86pr8s
Folkvangar Provice and the Silver Blade Covenant
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/folkvangar-city?list=user#.VcPu386pr8s
Stone Arc Province and the Arawn
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/stone-arc-frontier?list=user#.VcPvCM6pr8s
Enidzar and the Enidzar Pact
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/enidzar-revival-chambers?list=user#.VcPvWc6pr8s
P.S. If you would like to post card concepts, ideas and suggest card abilities feel free to post in the discussion below.
Jarn'Karna Intro:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/jarnkarna-1?list=user#.VcPrKM6pr8s
City of Aura'clea and the Court of the Alurius Sun:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/spires-of-auraclea?list=user#.VcPtRc6pr8s
Sylvan Province and the Meadow's Clutch Guild:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/meadows-grace-temple?list=user#.VcPtjs6pr8s
Naadhira City and the Minds of Naadhira
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/naadhira-skyline?list=user#.VcPt1c6pr8s
Kera Province and the Kerius Legion
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kera-skyport?list=user#.VcPuCs6pr8s
Morbspine Province and the Deathborn Cult
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/chrysoberyl-citadel?list=user#.VcPuKM6pr8s
Caverns of Yogg'veil and the darkness that lies within...
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/caverns-of-yoggveil?list=user#.VcPucs6pr8s
Ashenside Mountain and the Slaghearts
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ashenside-fortress?list=user#.VcPup86pr8s
Folkvangar Provice and the Silver Blade Covenant
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/folkvangar-city?list=user#.VcPu386pr8s
Stone Arc Province and the Arawn
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/stone-arc-frontier?list=user#.VcPvCM6pr8s
Enidzar and the Enidzar Pact
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/enidzar-revival-chambers?list=user#.VcPvWc6pr8s
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Comments
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/auraclea-fairy-1#.VcQOim5VhBc
I have not made a futuristic card in a while, so this card may not be all that great.
I think the best way to balance the ability and make it match the theme of a blue card is to make the ability "When Aura'clea Fairy enters the battlefield, put a Lock On counter on target creature an opponent controls. (1)(b): Target creature with a Lock on counter gets -4/0 until end of turn. Then move a Lock on counter from target creature onto a second target creature." It's obviously not as powerful but It matches the card better as a blue uncommon and it can be played both aggressively or defensively.
Otherwise nice work! I think the flavour would match the Court of the Alurius Sun nicely.
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kerius-scout?list=user#.VcTtxs6pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/silver-blade-invoker?list=user#.VcTt3c6pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/vicious-bearhog?list=user#.VcTt586pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/slagheart-bruiser?list=user#.VcTt8c6pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/unstable-shock-droid?list=user#.VcTuA86pr8s
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mark-of-slag?list=user#.VcTuVc6pr8s
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/press-the-assault-1?list=user#.VcTubM6pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flashpoint-2?list=user#.VcTuf86pr8s
Sorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/blast-radius?list=user#.VcTup86pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flailing-magma?list=user#.VcTusc6pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/commune-with-slag?list=user#.VcTuvc6pr8s
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/radiant-blaze?list=user#.VcTuyM6pr8s
I thought most of the cards were pretty well balanced as far as cost, etc. I can't say that about most of the card ideas I've seen here. the only two I wasn't sure about were the last two sorceries. I'm not sure what commune with slag does, in fact you might want to reread it. And radiant blaze seems a little overpowered for a common, as there was a similar card several years ago that cost twice as much (don't remember the cards name, and couldn't find it on gatherer). But overall I thought they were well designed cards, flavorful too.
I did have one more question: what other mechanics did you think would be key for this set? I liked flux surge, and you have some scry and prowess as well, which also make sense. Do you have mechanics that you imagine will go with specific colors?
Again, overall I think this looks like a pretty solid start for an idea.
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/alurius-dawnblade?list=user#.VckKyflViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/graces-missionary?list=user#.VckK5flViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/martyred-ancient?list=user#.VckK7vlViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kera-dualist?list=user#.VckK-vlViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/iron-born-rhino?list=user#.VckLBPlViko
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/line-of-fire?list=user#.VckLKflViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/heroic-leadership?list=user#.VckLNPlViko
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hardlight-barrier?list=user#.VckLRflViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/clash-of-endurance-1?list=user#.VckLUPlViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/reload-4?list=user#.VckLWflViko
Sorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/honor-the-innocent?list=user#.VckLi_lViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/grand-hardlight-interface?list=user#.VckLnPlViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/torben-the-skys-roar?list=user#.VcobYPlViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cosmomancer-alureed?list=user#.VcobaflViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/emperor-volcarnius-1?list=user#.VcocSPlViko
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/grand-inquisitor-adara-1?list=user#.VcocUflViko
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/meadow-strider-3?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/arawn-scavenger?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/quadruped-ooze-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/naadhira-soul-engineer?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ridge-back-cliff-grazer?list=user
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/oasis-of-harmony-1?list=user
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/stone-claw-savagery?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/visions-of-the-naadhira?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lost-to-the-ages-4?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/heroic-leap-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/regeneration-chamber?list=user
Sorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/time-to-feed-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/marroar-wildmane-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/nestra-the-mindseer?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/high-priestess-falora?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/zarl-the-hand-of-death?list=user
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/enidzar-death-priest?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/slagheart-trooper?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/spawn-of-ebyoggvol?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/decaying-necromancer?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/deathborn-reveler-1?list=user
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/prayers-of-madness?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mind-collapse?list=user
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/corrupting-tonic?list=user
Sorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/false-promise?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/automaton-waltz?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cyborg-reanimation?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/capture-essence?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/meliora-the-eternal-pact?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/zakur-mind-of-madness?list=user
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/scrap-monger-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flashfire-paladin-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/young-copilot?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lone-bounty-hunter?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/stone-pass-ripmaw-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kerius-fluxsapper?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/frenzied-lavamancer?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/silver-blade-warbeast?list=set&set=1377
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/brothers-in-arms-3?list=set&set=1377
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flame-of-banishment?list=set&set=1377
Sorceries
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rush-tactics?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/destructive-advance?list=set&set=1377
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/stardust-apprentice?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/naadhira-mad-scientist?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kerius-pilot?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/deranged-sorcerer?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ruinous-deathmaw?list=set&set=1377
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/maddening-whispers-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/eyes-of-alur?list=set&set=1377
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/aether-relocation?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/focused-dispell?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mana-overload-3?list=set&set=1377
Sorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/divination-7?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/consuming-nightmare-1?list=set&set=1377
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/faetech-aeronaut?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fluxshot-riflemen?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ominous-siren?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kerius-voltmancer?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/naadhira-fathom-seeker-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/stargaze-guardian?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/yoggveil-willbreaker?list=set&set=1377
Enchantments:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/wonderous-evocation?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/runic-power?list=set&set=1377
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/gift-of-the-cosmos?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/harrowing-will?list=set&set=1377
Scorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/command-and-conqueor?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/runic-power-1?list=set&set=1377
Creatures:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/blood-bag-goredrinker?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/enidzar-spirit-envoker?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/deathborn-scrapper-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/twisted-amalgamation?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/slagheart-headhunter?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ashenside-metalworker?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tormented-of-ebyoggvol?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/morbspine-serpent?list=set&set=1377
Instants:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/containment-breach-1?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/shadows-of-the-eternal?list=set&set=1377
Sorceries:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/entombed-demise?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mind-pierce?list=set&set=1377
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/Mana_M0nger/sets/1377