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Jonteman93

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  • @EnvyReaper A sword and a rose. An arrow through a heart. A dog and/or cat. Nuclear radiation symbol. Half-face symbol. A hand.
  • @TenebrisNemo Thank you friend! I have just finished the prologue of the story. Since I this time seek to make a real book and story out of this, I would like to ask you guys if anyone is willing to read it and give feedback on the writing and s…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 14
  • “Friyena, you must stop them! They are about to send Basil! Janet shouted as she jumped off Nadja and continued to ran towards Friyena who stood in front of her chair. William stepped before Janet and grabbed her while the guards streamed into the d…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 30: Nameless Where had he gone? The sun was heading down in the west. Janet had been searching through the harbor, the barracks, the training grounds, the order’s library, stables and any other location she coul…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • Black smoke and dim black flames began to arise around William’s blade. William moved forward determined with his sword in hand. He raised it and struck down towards Basil who swung up his own sword. The flames of the swords collided and sparks and…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • Friyena lost her smile and looked upon Basil with concern. “Basil, I…” ”I spoke to Terrodus as well. He said that you had created another monster after the Margeficus. He said that even more innocent people had died because of you.” Basil said as …
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 29: William The sun began to rise up over the snow covered Crastine. Basil sat at the side of his parent’s bed looking at Janet who was sleeping deeply. He let his hand stroke over her shoulder and her soft blon…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 28: A night to remember It was an unusually cold winter in Crastine. Snow was falling gently over the city that rarely has to see any frost at all. The streets and inner water canals were covered in thin layers …
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 27: The gate to the abyss When the ship docked at the island of Swadgena, The priests led him far up and into the island. The island was not controlled by any Dormanian kingdom and was home to most of the priest…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 26: Truth “erd’ar avie aliono osh artna oh mana asnie lev’ashi-...” Some voices were mumbling. The voices echoed dull around Basil. He coughed and comforted his fragile body. He felt for the wound but there was …
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 25: Malumion – the monster slayer Days later. Basil was walking over a field with tall grass. He did not know what to do anymore. He should have traveled home to Lisakdonia with his friends by now. He still did …
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The man who was a Laldenien general that had been at Lalden minor turned around calmly and asked Basil something in eastern Dormanian. Basil drew his sword and grabbed the man by the throat and pushing him into a wall. “Did you betray us!” Basil sai…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The first gatehouse of Beldon led to a wide path that led up on between and lightly around the mountains. The path led to another gatehouse that was as large as the first one. This gatehouse led to a long and huge stone bridge. “The iron bridge” tha…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 24: The mountain fortress, Beldon part 1/3 “South and east? From Lalden minor.” For weeks that turned to months, Basil traveled from town to town, searching and asking as well as he could. The words he knew in…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • Many of the captains very close or already had broken down. The discussions were made by only a few by this point and lead nowhere. Zenaida was sitting down in a corner. She did not know what to do either. The time passed by fast or maybe slow. She …
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 23: The hero of Fodarla Zenaida rode as fast as she could through the snow covered forest. She did not know what she could accomplice against such monster but what would she otherwise do? Listen to that shamef…
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  • One seemingly normal but cold day, they turned off the road for a little longer than normal. They headed towards a village named Fodarla, which was strange since it was not long ago that they had left the last town. What was so special about this on…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • Even though Zenaida had shown a gentle side of herself that evening, she continued to show disgust towards Basil long thereafter. She continued to feed him poorly to keep his energy low and have him sleeping on the ground. During multiple times occ…
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  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 22: The dragonless dragon rider, part 1 “Velhanano, estul on almin kapan fertol!” “Zeburh ombru erus almin” “Dacken!!” Basil woke up in some lit room. His head was in pain and his vision and hearing was somewhat…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 21: Alone in hostile land Once again Basil stood over the endless field of countless white flowers. In the distance stood the colossal tree mighty above its surrounding. There was some old and powerful magic imb…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The next day the streets were crawling full with people that all were heading to the central plaza. Victor Qentimus would today speak to the people. Janet, Aelia, Leonard and Andre were all on their way there as well both by interest and by order as…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 20: Victor Qentimus Cold winds drew in from the sea over Crastine. The city was unusually silent except for a few people that praised the people to raise up in arms. Most of the citizen did not listen. The peopl…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • It was apparent that this boy did not know much or anything about where or anything of this was. She spoke to Basil again but this time without the anger but still some of the pain. “What where you doing here? Basil was afraid to answer the question…
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  • Basil was as frozen in place as he looked at the storm which was now in plain sight before him but still one or two kilometers away. The storm was nothing like anything Basil had seen or even imagined before. Just the kilometers before him was a hug…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • A couple of days passed just as they had done earlier without any sign of sentient life except for the winged woman on the mountain. Basil had set up camp for the on a large field beneath a lonely tree. even though it was very late in the evening th…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 19: Heventos & the celestial egg, part 1 Basil lied with his face down on the grass. He could feel the smell of flowers around him. He wanted to look but he was tired and his arm and head was in pain. Someo…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • One of the dragon riders flew a little too low so a commander at the archer line ordered fire. The archers released a volley towards the dragon and some hit it at the neck and one in the eye. The rider tried to escape but a ballista had already shot…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • Basil sat in his tent fully armored. In his hand he held his mother’s emblem necklace. He let his thumb sweep over the silver fox as he thought back. Magnus who lied down on his bedroll stood up and put his hand on Basil’s shoulder before he stepped…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The boy who met seven gods – Chapter 18: Lalden Minor, part 1/2 Liemen was a small trade town surrounded by huge farm lands just east of the old Lalden proper. The army stayed nearby the town for the night which gave those that wanted an opportuni…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8
  • The fighting was now over and the soldiers were busy trying to save those houses that had not been set aflame yet. The air was filled with ash and smoke from the many burnt down and still burning houses. But the city still stood. Basil had to ask ar…
    in Avelaide Comment by Jonteman93 August 8