For some reason this is my most popular card of mine. And I don't know why?! What makes it interesting? Is it because it has five colors? Oh, and please suggestions to make it better.
@Faiths_Guide Thank you for the great feedback! I kept the cumulative upkeep cost though as I believe cards with downsides should still exist when they have such extreme value. Although, I don't want them printed frequently.
Lore: Gallius is a knight who has always needed to greatest. He believes himself above all others, and demands the recognition he thinks he deserves. However, his physical talents do not outshine the many valiant warriors on his plane. This has lead him to more underhanded means. He will do anything to be the best, the most honored and respected knight on the entire plane. He would sacrifice anyone, kill any who would presume to be above him, exploit those who are below him. This has brought him into much power, but should his deceit be discovered, he would have a long way to fall.
That's a card featuring Noel, our tomcat that died of cancer a few weeks ago. He was adorable and a really great companion. That's why I wanted to make this card for him an show you.
"Forga! What a remarkable resemblance you have to your father. If it weren't for your wanton coin hoarding, which you acquire by merciless headhunting, I might just mistake you for Domri himself! You serve nothing but you own whims and care for none besides yourself. It's an arrogant and foolish lifestyle that could easily get you into trouble so deep that you'd never surmount it!" - Ohnia Rade
"Go bother someone who'll listen auntie! I've got a job underway, which, should it go to plan, might get me another job shortly thereafter. My love of the hunt far surpasses my love of wealth, but it definitely adds incentive." - Forga Rade
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I've commented on Rob.
I made a meam
It's the Highest Quality card I've made.
Here's a Figment Card
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/grand-dad-4
Thank you for the great feedback! I kept the cumulative upkeep cost though as I believe cards with downsides should still exist when they have such extreme value. Although, I don't want them printed frequently.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/mande/cards
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fire-wheel
Lore: Gallius is a knight who has always needed to greatest. He believes himself above all others, and demands the recognition he thinks he deserves. However, his physical talents do not outshine the many valiant warriors on his plane. This has lead him to more underhanded means. He will do anything to be the best, the most honored and respected knight on the entire plane. He would sacrifice anyone, kill any who would presume to be above him, exploit those who are below him. This has brought him into much power, but should his deceit be discovered, he would have a long way to fall.
The name would be "Osvius, the Slave Master" or "Osvius, the Slavemaster"!
Preferably the first one!
Edit: Also, seems cancerous due to the excessive use of Phyrexian mana!
Hahahaha! I commented about that earlier.
How many notifications did you get from it earlier, if you don't mind me asking?
Of course!
Should it be increased to a casting cost of {1}{U}{B} (3 CMC) ?
Are there any other ideas you have for the card?
Tome of the Mindreaver
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Thanks for all the help so far everyone!
Knight of the Holy Flame
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Edit: Updated as of 6:00PM January 24, 2017
Thanks for all the help so far everyone!
The wording for the first ability is wrong. It should be "...enchantments, enchanted players..."
The card itself is nothing too special or unique, but the art is freaking amazing!
You should check the actual version which is posted now! (I was just testing things earlier to see what I could come up with.)
Knight of the Holy Flame
Edit: Updated as of 6:00PM January 24, 2017
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/pine-kraken
Their Dad - http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/domri-impulse-absorbed
Their Aunt - http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ohnia-rade
"Forga! What a remarkable resemblance you have to your father. If it weren't for your wanton coin hoarding, which you acquire by merciless headhunting, I might just mistake you for Domri himself! You serve nothing but you own whims and care for none besides yourself. It's an arrogant and foolish lifestyle that could easily get you into trouble so deep that you'd never surmount it!"
- Ohnia Rade
"Go bother someone who'll listen auntie! I've got a job underway, which, should it go to plan, might get me another job shortly thereafter. My love of the hunt far surpasses my love of wealth, but it definitely adds incentive."
- Forga Rade
Knight of the Holy Flame
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Edit: Updated as of 6:00PM January 24, 2017
Thanks for all the help so far everyone!