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Iseabel & Steaphan The wood of the old ship squeaked as it turned and twisted with the motion of the sea. Beneath deck in a dark corner stood a woman, looking out through a hole in the wall. She scanned the morning sky but all she could see w…
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Usaername shadow123 Thank you for your feedback. I think I must have not been clear about my own feedback. I don't blame any of you for how this tournament went neither in time nor in story. I got mostly what I wanted from the world building…
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(8) - Your opinion Here I want you to be honest. It will help me more in the long run. How do you think I have been as host and writer? Have my ways of writing been interesting? Was there one style that was more interesting than another? Have it fel…
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Some points of criticism regarding this tournament This is meant for everyone. All 16 contestants and all readers. @Bowler218 @CassZero @TerryTags @HeroKP @Abu_Jafar @SpellPiper2213 @Fallen_Lord_Vulganos @Ydoplus_of_Forduuath @kandra127 @UsaernameL…
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Rewards! place 1-4, I have given each of you a follow and a place in the HALL OF FAME in addition to the rewards beneath. It is not much in relation to the time spent on this tournament, but neither is it a contest based on the rewards. 1st place…
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Check out the winners of Tournament of Champions 3! Champion! @Shadow123 with Nilani, the Hopebringer 2nd place! @MonkeyPirate2002 with Niran, Runaway Virtuoso 3rd place! @CassZero with Aeryn, Fervent Knight 4th place! @Usaername with Akuma, Sol…
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Tournament of Champions 3 - Champion! @shadow123 with Nilani shadow123 @MonkeyPirate2002 Finally it is over. I do not lie when I say that it was very even results between you in both card quality, story telling and amount of w…
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The Final Match, part 8 - You shall not die "Fallen, you shall not live. Fallen, you shall not die. Fallen, you shall serve." The eyes are watching, waiting to claim its prize. Between them in the water, a calm silver light. A shadow shivering in…
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Something felt strange, almost as if she was dreaming. A ghostly spirit came into existence to Niran's symphony. The invocation and the spirit got into battle only moments after they had been created. The spirit rose up against the invocation but …
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The Final Match, part 7 - A dream of fall Soft, so soft. Niran rolled over digging her face into the cotton pillow. She moved her bare feet around so she could feel the mattress and the blanket. She felt she could stay in bed forever. She moved her…
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The dragon roared at Nilani and the invocation. It spewed flames upon the knight who ducked behind cover. The dragon flew up into the sky. Nilani ran into one of the buildings. She searched the memories for something or someone that could deal with …
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The Final Match, part 6 - Ashes of Yesterday and Tomorrow Nilani felt something soft beneath her fingers as she woke up. She opened her eyes. A white beach in the black world. She looked at her hands, they were different than before. They were sti…
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The Final Match, part 5 - Descend the abyss A black sun is burning in the eternal black sky. A large stone bridge stretches through the darkness never reaching land nor end. A black sea is resting far beneath. It ripples as black drops falls from t…
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The Final Match, part 4 - Whispers "I would do anything for you." "Please save me, I'm being attacked by an evil dog. Eh I mean, zombie cow." ""Who are you? Why are you doing this to me?" "Look, dad. Look what I made!" "Get them out, get the…
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Ashes and ruin (part 2/2) Vallerielle stepped out onto the balcony of the manor. She revealed a smile as she saw the devastation that the silver steed left upon the Medirnian army and their dragons. Thirty or so dragons swarmed around the steed, at…
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Fire and Silver (part 1/2) The sky was violently twisting and rotating over Ovan Nova. Impulses of quakes shook the ground that even caused some burning buildings in the city to collapse. King Zallados turned towards a dwarf that stood not far be…
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@shadow123 MonkeyPirate2002 In about 20 hours, I would like to know if you are going to write your sections or not. So I know if I can begin writing the conclusion of the match or if I should wait further. If I haven't gotten any answers by then i …
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@shadow123MonkeyPirate2002 I would want to finish this tournament by this Saturday. It would thus be great if both of you had written your parts by this Friday. It is still up to you when the tournament actually ends but I would want to move on to…
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@shadow123 MonkeyPirate2002 I leave this to you now. I'll be back for the concluding part(s) when you are finished. Good luck!
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The Final Match - Introduction 2 Niran - A chase of revenge After some time in the abyss, Niran stepped through the portal which a strange shadow had seemingly walked through. She appeared in a small room with wooden walls. Niran recognized the roo…
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The Final Match - Introduction 1 @shadow123MonkeyPirate2002 "How many innocent will you kill in your pursue of revenge!?" "Out of my way, you have not seen what he have done!, what he will do!" VS …
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The final Match! [Reserved]
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MonkeyPirate2002 If you want to begin writing, including the introduction, you may do so. I have nothing in particular that I want to include in the introduction though I will write the presentation tomorrow. I'll reserve a comment so you may begin…
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The Silver Steed A legion of torches spread light through the hallway walls. Valierielle followed her guards further down the old hallway. Gravel and sand fell as quakes shook the roof. Valierielle starred forwards into the distant darkness with…
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shadow123 @MonkeyPirate2002 Of course, as I said earlier, it is you guys who decide the deadline. I will write the next story segment soon, probably today. However nothing of the story will have any significant impact on your stories. Medirna w…
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Surrounded by flames The first day after the Arkanai had been defeated, another Medirnian army appeared in the north. As the night fell over Vosanova, a tall pillar of smoke and flames spread light from the north. Ovan Forra was being attacked. …
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Awoken The first light of the day painted the clouds red and the sky blue. Valierielle could barely keep herself straight where she stood at the balcony to the temple, watching the black beast's corpse burn in white flames. Her arms and legs were …
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Usaername I only plan as far as I could expect, and loosely a little further. I assumed it would be Nilani vs Aeryn before I made up the fights for the semi-final since that felt most probable and it would have been a nice way to end the tournament,…
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MonkeyPirate2002 If you feel that Niran's story turns out for the worse by not having another seed, we could assume that she actually never took the third seed. She only took since it was supposed to be her last fight after all, but since she did n…
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@MonkeyPirate2002 It supposed that she took the last seed between the time of your last story segment and this one. I did this because I needed her to summon the Terror Arkanai instead of a Dread Arkanai. @Everyone To begin with, I'm sorry that I…