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Chapter Eleven - Tower Visit Imilia had won. Though even the Soundweaver had managed to give Imilia great difficulty. Lyuben thought of the dagger Imilia held. The horrific scene of her stabbing the bard’s neck replayed over and over in his mind. A…
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Chapter Ten - Warning Clouds filled the morning sky as Lyuben woke up late the next day. The sun's rays filtered through the tiny holes within the thick shield of clouds that tried to hold the light back. Lyuben smiled. Nothing could stop the sun. …
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Chapter Nine - The First Victory Lyuben’s eyes fluttered open as he laid on a bed in the healing tent. The fuzzy outline of a girl faded into view as he woke up. His hand immediately flew to his stomach where he had been shot. The wound had disappe…
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Yeah, all of the characters eliminated so far feel like they shouldn't have been eliminated in the first round. The competition is quite tough.
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Wow that was really close! Thanks for letting Lyuben through @TenebrisNemo ! Ytsix was also one of my favorite characters, so I’m also sad to see him go. I’ll write a follow up story sometime today or tomorrow.
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I have not forgotten about this! I'm just still a tad bit busy.
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Chapter 8, Part 2, back to Lyuben's perspective (Thanks for waiting for me to finish!! This is the last part before my fight.) ---- After the training with Imilia, Lyuben was sore, yet thankful. Maybe I can trust Imilia after all...we'll see...m…
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Chapter Eight - Family History Lyuben looked out the window as the sun rose early in the morning. Something about the golden color of the rising sun called to him. The rising sun’s rays swept through the quiet fortress, cleansing the town of nightt…
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I should have my part posted in about 30 minutes if that's okay with you @TenebrisNemo ! I've had some work to do today that got in the way of finishing this earlier. Sorry about that. I should be done by 16:35 (4:35) CST
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@AboveAndAbout Thank you! My intent was to attach all equipment (including opponents’ equipment) to her. I’ll fix the minor wording error too. Again, thanks for the awesome feedback!
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@TheGamingBolasChannel I know what you mean by that, but the first ability doesn’t work since Emblems don’t go to the battlefield. You’d need to say “for each emblem in the command zone” for that ability to work. I honestly don’t think this warrant…
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@TheGamingBolasChannel This looks good to me! I'd probably drop it down to rare and change the wording in the second ability to say "all graveyards and exiles" you don't need "players'". I also think emblems go into the command zone, so the first ab…
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(I'm really sorry for posting this after you started the second match again! This is meant to take place after the first match, but I finished writing this right after you posted the intro to the second match) --- Chapter Seven - Training Lyuben …
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Let's not talk like that about other people's characters. Everyone is putting a lot of work into their champions. If you have feedback, try and frame it in a way that will help them improve their character and story, rather than just criticizing it.
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(I'm really sorry if this is disrupting the flow of the first match! I meant to get it in earlier but I've been really busy this past week. This takes place before the start of he 1st match) --- Chapter Six - Une amie mystérieuse Lyuben awoke earl…
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With everything presented now, I feel like Lyuben vs Ytsix is a tossup. I haven’t been posting much story recently due to some other conflicts, but I should be able to be a little more active after today
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Chapter Five - Arrival “Wake up!” *BANG* “We have arrived!!” *BANG* Lyuben was rudely awoken by a tournament guard upon arrival. He instinctively jumped back, nearly crashing into the Soundweaver. Hopefully he didn’t know that was me… They opene…
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@Tonysparks There are multiple other accounts of these actions. A lot of us have tried to give him second chances, but he continues to do the same things over and over. I don’t think anyone wishes to mention all the other things that he’s said or do…
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Oh ok that makes sense
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@Tonysparks I only said Arn and Conscience in my story bit, I didn’t say the sound weaver gave Lyuben weird looks unless I’m missing something.
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Chapter Four - The Journey, Part II For the most part, the rest of the journey was silent except for the quiet strumming of a peaceful tune from the blind musician. Lyuben could feel himself within the soft melody. He could feel the pain and longin…
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Cool! I might take a little while, but I'll definitely try to enter.
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This looks pretty interesting! Are you assigning a color combo to us or are we supposed to choose one? I’m a little confused on the rules, but I’d definitely love to join
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Chapter Three - The Journey Lyuben sat down on the dirty white sheets of the old bed in his room. All the curtains were closed and the room was pitch black except for a small lantern that glowed like a single firefly in the vast night sky. The dark…
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@TenebrisNemo Oooh! Very fun! @ChoyBoi Would it be okay if Lyuben interacts with your character? If so, is there anything important need to know when writing her?
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@TenebrisNemo Would we get to decide which character is riding with another one or are you deciding that?
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Chapter Two - Acceptance Lyuben woke up early in the morning. The rising sun shone like a bright gemstone, painting the dawn sky with its fiery light. Lyuben walked over to the window of his room, staring longingly into the horizon. Lyuben could al…
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Congrats to everyone who made it in! I’m excited to see how this plays out
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Chapter One - The Tournament of Champions Lyuben walked through the outskirts of the city. He was alone. Lost. He had never been to this part before. Lyuben had left rather unexpectedly too. All he had was a beautiful rose that he kept close to his…
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Yeah, I’m super excited!!