@SalokinTheAllSeeing lovelovelove the flavor text, adding the rest of the mtg mythos into the set is a nice touch, I won't declare the first "winners" (as it were) until late August/ early September, but I do like your submission.
@Cardshaman, Morbli, hehe, though if I'm reading his right does this mean you could just drop it turn 1 without penalty? Seems akin to black lotus power levels, only on a land with extra utility.
@Monty, do you think it would be possible to make a womp village? Or are womps wild creatures? I was going to make a card called "Womp Village" but I wanted to get your angle on it.
@Cardshaman, balancing 3 mana lands at rare usually has severe drawbacks, the only existing example is Lotus Vale, and that drawback is massive, though it does make it a balanced card. To balance Morbli you'd have to give it a drawback that either cripples its use or synergizes negatively with the Womp archetype since it gives Womps such a boost, examples would be only being able to play it after you control X Womps, at which point the large amounts of mana would be more arbitrary since Womps are a lower CMC tribe, or removing Womp counters in order to play/ use its abilities.
@Cardshaman, getting better, at that power level I'd make it a mythic, the free "Raise Dead" ability practically reads 'Draw a Card' on a land without any additional cost, doable, but very, very strong
@Cardshaman, man, it's sooo powerful, but not overly broken, delayed non-variable mana is a nice touch and the conditional value aspect is also a good balance choice, I love it
@Blackfalcon333 Neat core concept, though it has a handful of issues to sort out first. - The mana cost and card border are mismatched. - The Power/ Toughness and color are not specified for the Womp tokens. - The Common + Legendary tag can make the design space it takes up/ creates very wibbly-wobbly.
Potential fixes: - Border/ Cost edits - Text edits - Possibly type/ subtype rewordings? A common legendary is an interesting idea, though something with an ability that value-focused might want to be rare at least (works better with the legend tag)
I do like that flavor text though, appreciate the submission
@littledemon, for which process? Uploading to the forum? Copy-pasting the "image address" from the chosen imagee will give you a .png file, which works on the forums.
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Flitterwomp!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lost-womp http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/crazed-womp?list=set&set=13311
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tiny-dragon-1
Morbli. Such a fun word to say. Morbli morbli morbli.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/complete/full/2016/8/24/1472083749386023.png
- The mana cost and card border are mismatched.
- The Power/ Toughness and color are not specified for the Womp tokens.
- The Common + Legendary tag can make the design space it takes up/ creates very wibbly-wobbly.
Potential fixes:
- Border/ Cost edits
- Text edits
- Possibly type/ subtype rewordings? A common legendary is an interesting idea, though something with an ability that value-focused might want to be rare at least (works better with the legend tag)
I do like that flavor text though, appreciate the submission