WIP sets

Sorins_ThirstSorins_Thirst
edited October 2015 in Custom Card Sets
Lore: In Davica, humans and zombies are in a war for control. Currently, the humans have a slight lead, having discovered a powerful necromancy that allows them to control defeated zombies. The war has come to a standstill since both sides can reanimate the dead troops of the other. In order to gain an advantage, the humans send an elite squad of Necromancers to the place where the Zombies are keeping their secret weapon with an intent to destroy it.

Timeline split:
Human Timeline: In this timeline, the leader of the elite team of Necromancers, Alec Grenwik, ended up having to fight the commander of the zombies that was present at the fort. The zombie General stabbed him through the stomach and held his dying body close to his face. Alec responded with a swift movement of his hand, which held a dagger, and decapitated the commander. Afterward, he came within inches of death and his spark woke within him. This gave the humans a greater advantage than they could have ever hoped for.
Zombie Timeline: In this timeline, Alec ended up facing not only the commander, but also 2 other zombies. The zombies made quick work of him and when he awakened as a zombie, he still obtained the gifts of a Planeswalker, and so did his adversary Sarad, the zombie who had killed him. The awakening of both Alec and Sarad as Planeswalkers allowed the Zombies to easily overwhelm the humans, causing them to recede into hidden places. The humans, being reduced to small tribes, could barely survive with the constant raids Alec, who had become the king of the Zombies, sent upon them. Not too long into the future, they were utterly annihilated.

Any feedback is welcome :P
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Humans of Davica
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/Sorins_Thirst/sets/3113

Zombies of Davica
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/Sorins_Thirst/sets/3087

Comments

  • CrucibleOfHateCrucibleOfHate
    How are the Humans winning when the Zombies have two planeswalkers?

    Patently absurd, by the way. I would make the General a legendary creature.
  • Sorins_ThirstSorins_Thirst
    @CrucibleOfHate It is 2 alternate timelines. Like Takir. The two sets are based on the outcome of a single battle where Alec either dies and becomes king of the zombies or Kills Sarad. I may as well edit the OP to explain this. The Info section was too small for the story.
  • CrucibleOfHateCrucibleOfHate
    Comment on the set then. Infinite space.
  • Sorins_ThirstSorins_Thirst
    Bump
  • CorwinnnCorwinnn
    bump bump kriss kross'll make ya bump bump
  • pyrakpyrak
    Made ons comment on one of your planeswalkers, anyways you might want to go back over your cards and clean up the text so they're clear as to whether it is until end of turn or stays until the permanent leaves the bettle field.
  • pyrakpyrak
    edited October 2015
    Cemetery Sanctum - I'd bump up the mana cost of the plus and minus counter givers by one or two mana, and also have the cemetery be sacrificed when you use the destroy target creature.
    Also I like the Tome of The Returning.

    Yet again, your planeswalkers still need work on, Alek the infected king needs a lot of revamping, you might want to figure something else for his middle ability or change it up to say "Gain control of target creature until end of turn. Untap that creature. It gains haste, infect and has zombie in addition to its other types until end of turn." That might be a bit long, but it is more clear with the rules. Also on his last ability, add indestructible as well, that's standard with creature turning planeswalkers. I'm not sure what to say on Sarad, as for the rest well I think a relook at mana cost for stuff should be a good idea.
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