Phase Beta - Operation: Box, Contest Two

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• IanLowenthal

  October 2016

  Major overhaul on Selevdra:
  
  
• IanLowenthal

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  You know what? I'm dropping Selevdra. Say hello to Lestin!
  
  
• IanLowenthal

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  Does

  ✧

  count as a color?
• Corwinnn

  October 2016

  @IanLowenthal - I'm gonna jump in here and say

  ✧

  does NOT count as a color.
• cgannon

  October 2016

  I updated The Great Karu-Ma. I'm scared he might be too strong now though, so feedback is appreciated! I'm trying to make my entries fun but balanced.
  
  
• cgannon

  October 2016

  I appreciate the feedback @IanLowenthal !
  Here's my updated version.
  
• Faiths_Guide

  October 2016

  Just so everyone is aware, the official ruling indicates that cards that transform from one color to another (such as Civilized Scholar) have the color identity of both. Food for thought.
• Corwinnn

  October 2016

  For current and future reference, all extraneous comments will be removed from this thread, so we can keep it for Contest Entries only. Comments about cards would be better on the cards themselves.
  XD
• cgannon

  October 2016

  
  
  Thank you to @DomriKade for even more feedback!
• Termite1

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  My second entry:
  
  
  Feel free to comment and give your opinions on it's balance and other stuff.
• TheFriendlyGeek

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  Here's my second entry because I am ditching Bor, Savage Berserker:
  
  
• Faiths_Guide

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  Quideem Updated:
  
• MaverickGV

  October 2016

  First Entry
  
  
• pewnd

  October 2016

  
  
  My Submissions Good luck to all the participants!
• MaverickGV

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  Second Entry
  
  (Revoked)
  
  New Second Entry
  
  
• SuneEnough

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  I decided to enter. Judgement! Not a commander you need to build around, but definitely a fun one.
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/judgement-14
  Please, give feedback.
• barchae

  October 2016

  My first entry, be gentle
  
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/minati-hidden-council
  
  How do you post a picture?
• KJMartin

  October 2016

  Arcanum, Blood Sculptor --TO-- Arcanum Unbound
  
  Arcanum, Blood Sculptor:
  
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/arcanum-blood-sculptor?list=user
  
  Arcanum Unbound:
  
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/arcanum-unbound?list=user
  
  I'll probably write some story later. I'm going out now, so I can't, sadly.
  
  
• barchae

  October 2016

  And my second entry, Pala
  
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/pala-the-blinding-light
  
  Feedback is welcomed! thank you.
• Tutlaschk

  October 2016

  
• barchae

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  reposting with images
  
  first entry:
  
  
  and second:
  
  
  Hope that worked
  
• barchae

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  deleted
• Aedhyn

  October 2016

  So for the two entries I posted, "Deyth, High Priest of Nath" and "Shaan, Broken Paladin"; should I revise them so that the command zone ability is worded as "in the Command Zone" instead of "in your Commander Zone"? or do you all think they're fine as is?
• Corwinnn

  October 2016

  @Aedhyn - We're not going to knock you down over a slight wording issue like that, but it's really up to you. If it bothers you, then by all means, change it, but if not... well I think we get the gist of what you're saying.
• MakingStupidCrap

  October 2016

  I'm back with a new legendary. Ditching Rada and Zichi. AND THIS ONE IF A FLIPPER!
  
  
  
  
• serpentail

  October 2016

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hemnarth-the-peaceful
• FatCat23476

  October 2016

  Entry 2: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/crexius-necrosyse
• strongbelieves

  October 2016

  In case anyone needed inspiration, I made a sample entry of my own:
  
  
  It is clearly the best card and since I'm judging I'll probably pick it for first place.
  not really
• theimmortaldeath

  October 2016

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/theimmortaldeath/sets/15448
  A commander and the three partners that would be in the deck with him.
• Faiths_Guide

  October 2016 edited October 2016

  Quideem Updated:
  
  (P/T changed just slightly.)