My first entry for Option 1. The original is by @LastJustice.
old >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>new
My basic concept was to add devotion to her (as she is a god), and rework her abilities to fit with devotion. So instead of X being the number of creatures, it's devotion. Likewise, as she is a god, she can rid your creatures of defender herself, but at the same cost as casting her again. I also changed it from Elemental's to Avatars both for space on the card, and because Elemental's are part of the power of the Earth (or plane/planet/etc), where as Avatar's are a representation of power (Celestina's power). My inability to add flavor text bothers me, but just didn't have the space.
I think there is a problem though. The two abilities are each on their own far too powerful. Additionally, 4 mana for a 4/8 without a drawback is far too little.
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https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/complete/full/2018/4/20/1524263007862002.png
Here is my version:
http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/discussion/3478/cards-of-mtgcardsmiths-the-saga-continues#latest
This is the card from Animist:
And this is new card made by me:
My card
Oryinthin The Shining One by @Oryinthin / Oryinthin, Enlightened One by Me
On my version I used Vised by @Scott_Anderson, redubbed Sage. His original version https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/vised-homarid
Remade Captain Lannery Storm.
Original:
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=435386
Original Legendary card:
Eclavdra the Beastseeker by @AustinSmith
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/eclavdra-the-beastseeker-2
Familiar:
Option 1
The Vile Dragon by @sorinjace /Detox, Cleansing Wind by me, before he became an evil zombie , he cured people and absorbed their poisons.
http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/discussion/2584/brief-guide-to-uploading-linked-pictures-images-in-comments-w-visual-aid/p1
Original by TheMechanix____________New Version
Mine:________________________________Original:
The original card!
https://scryfall.com/card/arb/124
Original by @RayearthIX/ Revamp by Me
Original by @Scott_Anderson/ Revamp by me
Old------------------------------------------------New
old >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>new
My basic concept was to add devotion to her (as she is a god), and rework her abilities to fit with devotion. So instead of X being the number of creatures, it's devotion. Likewise, as she is a god, she can rid your creatures of defender herself, but at the same cost as casting her again. I also changed it from Elemental's to Avatars both for space on the card, and because Elemental's are part of the power of the Earth (or plane/planet/etc), where as Avatar's are a representation of power (Celestina's power). My inability to add flavor text bothers me, but just didn't have the space.
(The younger less powerful version.)
I think there is a problem though. The two abilities are each on their own far too powerful. Additionally, 4 mana for a 4/8 without a drawback is far too little.
I made this for 3 contests actually. This one, Mechanix 29 http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/discussion/3621/mechanix-challenge-29#latest, and Bobman111's Blast from the past, remaking Scourge set cards. http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/discussion/3614/a-blast-from-the-past#latest
Original /remake
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/karona-false-foegod