Clever card! If anything, I would change"When your life total is reduced to zero," I would change it to "When your life total is reduced to zero or lower." Does that make sense?
Clash (Each clashing player reveals the top card of his or her library, then puts that card on the top or bottom. A player wins if his or her card had a higher converted mana cost.)
Originally it was to be more complex- Reveal top cards: If both are creatures, higher power create Gold- If both are noncreature, higher CMC create Gold - If one creature one noncreature, players draw.
@Faiths_Guide, I would highly advise reducing Arabaz's toughness. Even with the chance of an opponent winning the clash, I think that a 2/5 lifelink hexproof creature is just too good. Maybe make it a 2/3?
Celebrating the demotion of the Return to Ravnica symbol, now available for all! What do you think of this card?
@Gelectrode Yes! I think it should be worded like this though: If a player would draw one or more cards, that player puts the top two cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard instead.
This will stop them from just milling themselves and being unable to draw anything to stop it in the meantime.
@Gelectrode I provided input on your card's page to help you find a way to fix the minor issues as well as the major exploits that make the card unfair.
Edit: When you fix these issues, please post your card to the following contest as it's really cool being a Commander. Twin Nations Contest: Custom Commanders
I really enjoy the concept of Witherbrand! It would be cool if it could only equip with your commander.
Initially, it was hard to see the color identity of Bheld, but the more I look at it, the more clear it becomes. My only suggestion would be to change the name, which confused me at first.
What are everyone's opinions on the following card we've made?
Inspired by a song about D.I.D. (We like psychology and are disappointed we couldn't fit it in during high school!) In the Wings by Mother Mother (Lyrics)
Update: This post has been updated as of 6:53PM March 31st, 2017 according to Central time in MB, Canada.
Thanks for the feedback @Gelectrode, I updated the cards above. Witherbrand already has too much text so I don't think I can work in the idea of having it be exclusively equippable but it would be cool!
Comments
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/nissa-carrot-animist?list=user
Opinions?
Well, um...
I don't know if you knew this, but...
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Search/Default.aspx?output=spoiler&method=visual&sort=color+&action=advanced&text=+[provoke]
Any thoughts on these?
See:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/excite-valor
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/earnest-arbalests
Clever card! If anything, I would change"When your life total is reduced to zero," I would change it to "When your life total is reduced to zero or lower." Does that make sense?
Can I please have advice on this card?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tuathan-sage
Alright baws.
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Clash (Each clashing player reveals the top card of his or her library, then puts that card on the top or bottom.
A player wins if his or her card had a higher converted mana cost.)
Originally it was to be more complex-
Reveal top cards:
If both are creatures, higher power create Gold- If both are noncreature, higher CMC create Gold - If one creature one noncreature, players draw.
Celebrating the demotion of the Return to Ravnica symbol, now available for all! What do you think of this card?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/circus-mindsplitter
Thanks for the much needed feedback!
The Mindsplitter seems a little "un-fun" and too exploitable.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/circus-mindsplitter
Yes! I think it should be worded like this though:
If a player would draw one or more cards, that player puts the top two cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard instead.
This will stop them from just milling themselves and being unable to draw anything to stop it in the meantime.
I provided input on your card's page to help you find a way to fix the minor issues as well as the major exploits that make the card unfair.
Edit: When you fix these issues, please post your card to the following contest as it's really cool being a Commander.
Twin Nations Contest: Custom Commanders
I really enjoy the concept of Witherbrand! It would be cool if it could only equip with your commander.
Initially, it was hard to see the color identity of Bheld, but the more I look at it, the more clear it becomes. My only suggestion would be to change the name, which confused me at first.
Thoughts?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/abyssal-conscript
Make sure to post your cards side by side when possible. As such just remove the spacing between each of the cards html code.
I really enjoyed creating. I think it turned out quite well!
Thoughts @Anyone?
Inspired by a song about D.I.D. (We like psychology and are disappointed we couldn't fit it in during high school!)
In the Wings by Mother Mother (Lyrics)
Update: This post has been updated as of 6:53PM March 31st, 2017 according to Central time in MB, Canada.
Nice!
We're looking for opinions on the following. We'd be grateful if someone would provide criticism!
(Image enlarged due to compact rules text.)
Update: This post has been updated as of 4:57PM March 31st, 2017 according to Central time in MB, Canada.