@MrRansom The card idea is great ,but I have just have one suggestion. I think that whenever a player's dealt damage you only put one counter on it and have it be 13 (a classic unlucky number) to win. That way it would be a little harder for you to get. Otherwise you could just attack with Merit Lage in Commander and instantly win the game.
I think Avoid the Purge is realistic and handy, yet still simple. The only part I would change is the flavor text. To me, it just seems unwieldy and not very creative. What about these?
"You can't run, but you can hide."
"Hidden talents arise in the most dire conflicts."
Can you please give your opinions on these two cards?
@Gelectrode The one I wanted opinions on was mine, Ancient Fang. But thanks anyway! The flavor text was meant to reference the MTGCardsmith site purge, that card was created on @squee's account so that it won't (for any reason) get purged. I think it's favorites would vanish if it did and I don't want that!
@sanjaya666 - Keep in mind, this thread was created by a guy who started three discussions and who has made 10 comments since joining over a year ago. Everyone else here just volunteers their time and efforts, and there is no promise that anyone will look at these cards and comment on them... There are a few people who do try their best to offer up opinions, but they also want to make cards and have people look at their creations as well, so they don't dedicate their time to this thread.
Ideally, if someone wants an opinion on their card, they should comment on the one before theirs, and in this way every card would get at least one comment, and no card would get left behind.
Comments
Edit: Took @Karmadragon's suggestion and @modnation675's suggestion
A better name could be "Power Struggle".
I'm working on the re-designed rules text for you. So please wait on any final changes!
I posted two options for you in your card's comments.
Don't know if this is too powerful, or not powerful enough... I would like some feedback.
Edit: Made it 4 mana, as suggested by @Tigersol
Power Struggle seems a little too powerful for its mana cost. Maybe two mana?
Perhaps. Keep in mind the wording may be different when it's edited though.
I love the idea. Perhaps make it worth four mana. That would make it a easier card to play early game, while increasing its threat level.
The card idea is great ,but I have just have one suggestion. I think that whenever a player's dealt damage you only put one counter on it and have it be 13 (a classic unlucky number) to win. That way it would be a little harder for you to get. Otherwise you could just attack with Merit Lage in Commander and instantly win the game.
Yeah, that card is fundamentally broken since you could just take damage yourself for it to take effect.
What do you guys think of this unglued style card? Its not ment to be a serious card its just to be weird.
Changes Made:
1) Uncommon to Rare.
2) Added First Strike.
Thoughts?
I think Avoid the Purge is realistic and handy, yet still simple. The only part I would change is the flavor text. To me, it just seems unwieldy and not very creative. What about these?
"You can't run, but you can hide."
"Hidden talents arise in the most dire conflicts."
Can you please give your opinions on these two cards?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/staff-of-the-animist
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/xanadilius-of-the-gelectrimagi
The one I wanted opinions on was mine, Ancient Fang. But thanks anyway!
The flavor text was meant to reference the MTGCardsmith site purge, that card was created on @squee's account so that it won't (for any reason) get purged. I think it's favorites would vanish if it did and I don't want that!
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kergu-maelstrom-born
I like dragons, and most things to do with the maelstrom, so yes
Not a well known user made tons of cards = automatically ignored.
A premium and well known user made a janky card = instantly commented and liked.
Really....
I'll post some feedback on your cards.
I'm not reffering to you. Just people in general. You shouldn't feel sorry.
I think I'm gonna start a new thread that people can ask for feedback on. Then I'll reply to as many of them as I can.
Ideally, if someone wants an opinion on their card, they should comment on the one before theirs, and in this way every card would get at least one comment, and no card would get left behind.
Is this card balanced?
Edit: Took @modnation675 suggestions to make it legendary. Made it 1 more mana