Is this the correct wording, or should I do the following?
Until end of turn, target artifact or creature's base power and toughness become X/X, where X is that permanent's converted mana cost, and if an artifact was targeted by this spell, it becomes a creature in addition to its other types.
I would say that the alternate wording you put is the more MTG sounding way, but instead of saying "and if and artifact" say "... that permanent's mana cost. If an artifact was targeted this way, it becomes a creature in addition to its other types."
@fmartel77, it seems odd that a card called 'Children of the Damned' is an enchantment. In addition, I would change the text by saying "..., create that many 1/1 blue and black Zombie Child creature tokens. Exile them at end of turn."
@TenebrisNemo, unfortunately Feast of Heroes creates infinite loops because a legendary creature can be sacrificed over and over again. But I like the idea of their stories making them immortal!
These are the current cards in my 'Esper Zombies' archetype for a tribal CCS I'm working on. I feel like they might generate a bit too much value, but the Psychosis mechanic helps balance those that have it. What do you guys think? I'm mostly worried about Khalgut Archer. I might have to reduce its toughness to three in order to balance it, but I'm not sure.
I thought about making a card called 'Natural Instincts', which would give giants trample, cats lifelink, humans vigilance, etc., but then I saw this artwork. And I still can't find the artist.
@sanjaya666, be careful about repeatable removal on commanders. Sure, it may be costly, but it doesn't have any drawbacks.
I really like the concept of revenge, but I am curious about what would happen during a board wip. Would all your cards have to fight over the second card slot in your library?
@Gelectrode Also, I think your card is pretty good enough. Combine it with proliferation stuffs and you'll get a quick way to drawing a lot of cards or to simply lose. Yeah, I mean lose.
@sanjaya666, randomization might not be the flavor of Mardu. What about this?
"{4}: Destroy target creature. The owner of ~ gains life equal to it's toughness. Any player may activate this ability."
Give it shroud and you are set!
- - -
"The demons keep on giving me food! Urlp, ahh. Such tasty food. Ugh. Pumpernickel and deviled eggs and, mmhg, and wine fermented from the blood of kittens and puppies and cherubs sacrificed under the light of the blood moon, and, and..."
*Cue scene from 'Mr. Cresote Blows'. The demons cackle and lap up Obot's engorged organs spitting open with mashed potatoes and gravy*
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Is this the correct wording, or should I do the following?
Until end of turn, target artifact or creature's base power and toughness become X/X, where X is that permanent's converted mana cost, and if an artifact was targeted by this spell, it becomes a creature in addition to its other types.
I would say that the alternate wording you put is the more MTG sounding way, but instead of saying "and if and artifact" say "... that permanent's mana cost. If an artifact was targeted this way, it becomes a creature in addition to its other types."
I commented on your cards. Do you have disquss account?
Vestige (If you would leave the game, you may have this remain in the game for as long as you want.)
These two come as a pair, for those of you who know the Stephen King series, The Dark Tower, then you'll understand the references.
Can you guys gimme some advice on these cards please?
I'll post some advice in a bit on the cards that would benefit. (On the respective card pages!)
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/invoke-the-kraj
Too much, anyone?
XD
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/family-gathering
Instead of an enchantment, what would you have made it ?
@Corwinnn
Check out the other cards of the set
https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/fmartel77/sets/20091
As always, any feedback is much appreciated!
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/insightful-host
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/khalgut-vizier
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/khalgut-archer
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/khalgut-enforcer
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/assassins-husk
I thought about making a card called 'Natural Instincts', which would give giants trample, cats lifelink, humans vigilance, etc., but then I saw this artwork. And I still can't find the artist.
I really like the concept of revenge, but I am curious about what would happen during a board wip. Would all your cards have to fight over the second card slot in your library?
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/feast-of-gluttony
"{4}: Destroy target creature. The owner of ~ gains life equal to it's toughness. Any player may activate this ability."
Give it shroud and you are set!
- - -
"The demons keep on giving me food! Urlp, ahh. Such tasty food. Ugh. Pumpernickel and deviled eggs and, mmhg, and wine fermented from the blood of kittens and puppies and cherubs sacrificed under the light of the blood moon, and, and..."
*Cue scene from 'Mr. Cresote Blows'. The demons cackle and lap up Obot's engorged organs spitting open with mashed potatoes and gravy*
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tithus-horizon-seeker