Loved the ability! Very interesting. "Whenever a creature damaged by equipped creature is exiled" was a bit confusing. What I think it should say is: "Whenever a creature is dealt damage by equipped creature and is exiled during this turn..." That way you don't have to keep track of what creature has been dealt damaged by the equipped creature, because it implies that even if the creature was dealt damage by the equipped creature last turn, the ability still triggers.
RING OF KALDRA: I loved the card! It had a very interesting ability that could potentially be a really OP card! I would love to have Ring of Kaldra in one of my decks
STARSTAFF OF KALDRA: Cool card! I liked this card because you can choose between giving the equipped creature lifelink or hexproof until end of turn. Instead of saying "Whenever the equipped creature attacks, target opponent puts the top three cards of their library into their graveyard," It needs to be: "Whenever the equipped creature attacks, target opponent puts the top card of his or her library into his or her graveyard." I changed "their" to "his or her." I also took out "the" from "the equipped creature attacks." It's always "whenever equipped creature attacks." It's also usually "his or her" instead of "their."
THANKS TO ALL WHO ENTERED! PRIZES WILL BE HANDED OUT SHORTLY!
@Corwinnn, thank you for the win, and once again, thank you @LukeMTG as well. I'm feeling so motivated right now! Can't wait to see what other contests you two bring out next!
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@kltmtg29 with "Sigil of Kaldra"
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/sigil-of-kaldra?list=set&set=8369
I liked the card, not sure if you were aware there is a card similar to it?
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=398515
@Faiths_Guide with "Latern of Kaldra
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lantern-of-kaldra
Loved the card! The art was very interesting and if used wisely, this card has the potential to be a great trump card!
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3rd place is going to....
@Connor2001 with "Chalice of Kaldra"
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/chalice-of-kaldra?list=user
Loved the ability! Very interesting. "Whenever a creature damaged by equipped creature is exiled" was a bit confusing. What I think it should say is: "Whenever a creature is dealt damage by equipped creature and is exiled during this turn..." That way you don't have to keep track of what creature has been dealt damaged by the equipped creature, because it implies that even if the creature was dealt damage by the equipped creature last turn, the ability still triggers.
2nd place is going to...
@Oduda with "Mount of Kaldra"
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mount-of-kaldra-1?list=user
Loved the art! Simply fantastic art... I couldn't look away from it! Here are the things I would've liked to see changed:
a) this card doesn't seem like it should be a mythic - most of the Kaldra cards are rare
b) maybe give the equipped creature horsemanship, since flanking isn't that great of an ability (it's useful for killing 1/1 chumps though!)
c) it would've been cool if the flavour text was from Kaldra (e.g., "Together, we ride into the midst of battle." -Kaldra)
The flavour text was still nicely worded though!
I had a lot of trouble deciding here. It was very difficult to chose between these cards, so I ended up choosing them both! It's a tie for 1st place!
@Blazin_Biscuit with "Ring of Kaldra" and @AreinStorm with "Starstaff of Kaldra"
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ring-of-kaldra-1
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/starstaff-of-kaldra
RING OF KALDRA:
I loved the card! It had a very interesting ability that could potentially be a really OP card! I would love to have Ring of Kaldra in one of my decks
STARSTAFF OF KALDRA:
Cool card! I liked this card because you can choose between giving the equipped creature lifelink or hexproof until end of turn. Instead of saying "Whenever the equipped creature attacks, target opponent puts the top three cards of their library into their graveyard," It needs to be: "Whenever the equipped creature attacks, target opponent puts the top card of his or her library into his or her graveyard." I changed "their" to "his or her." I also took out "the" from "the equipped creature attacks." It's always "whenever equipped creature attacks." It's also usually "his or her" instead of "their."
THANKS TO ALL WHO ENTERED! PRIZES WILL BE HANDED OUT SHORTLY!