Zerexia Beta Abilities

Expansion_SmithExpansion_Smith
in Custom Card Discussion
I'm currently working on a set and made some abilities for each color. I would like to get the community opinion on them. This can apply to if there over powered, under powered, confusing, wording is wrong, and if there just strait out horrible.

Abilities
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White

Glory: This is a pseudo ability that becomes active if you have ten or more life than your you starting life total.

Wording (Glory - If you have at least 10 life more than your starting life total, )
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Blue

Offering: This ability give you the opportunity to give your opponent a permanent you control. This will ofter trigger other abilities such as exploit mechanic in DTK.

Wording (Target opponent gain control of target permanent you control.)
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Black

Secrecy: This ability exiles your creature at the end of your combat step if it attacked this turn. Then you can pay its Secrecy cost to cast it from exile. Casting it from exile ofter activates a bonus or answers to exile.

Wording (Secrecy - At the end of each combat step, if this creature attacked this turn, exile it. You may cast it from exile for its secrecy cost.
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Red

Death Wish: This ability is simple. When the creature dies, something happens.

Wording (Whenever this creature dies, )
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Green

Still working on this ability. (Will be added later)
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Comments

  • Faiths_GuideFaiths_Guide
    edited July 2016
    (Glory - As long as you have 10 or more life than your starting life total, )

    I like Secrecy! I made a similar ability:
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    That card's a remake of an even older one of mine.
  • Expansion_SmithExpansion_Smith
    I suppose your form of glory is better then chalice of life's text.
  • Faiths_GuideFaiths_Guide
    edited July 2016
    No, I just think for the keyword (depending on what use it will have), that my phrasing is clearer. It's all up to you! :D The portion of Chalice of Life that you referenced is the middle of something, to me it doesn't sound that great as a stand alone.
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