@ningyounk I think protection would go before the "Once each turn..." ability and it wouldn't have a period. I almost put that effect on my titan (completely reversed) using Power versus CMC. I couldn't figure out a way to make it look nice enough so I gave up
@Faiths_Guide Thanks for the insight, I've decided to keep the protection ability last to better match the three existing titans (expecially Emrakul's) template, but I indeed removed the dot I also powered down the first ability and the protection because I thought the previous version was overpowered. After some template changes, the new edited version is already above!
Here's my humble entry. I'm new to entering into competitions, so this may not be how you do it. Sorry if it isn't! (Actually, my entry is on my other comment below).
Hello @Undead and welcome! =D As long as anyone can see the card, your entry should be fine Though i really recommand putting the link of the specific card page on MTGCardsmith and making a small comment under your card, so people can leave comments on your card ^^
@ningyounk The reason while both of Emrakul's abilities are above keywords is because they are "when cast" abilities. Now you have "During each of your turn(s)" which I still believe should be placed after keywords:
When you cast Ybrae, the High Vanity, distribute up to nine +1/+1 counters among any number of target creatures you control.
Protection from converted mana cost 3 or less
During each of your turns, you may cast one card with converted mana cost 6 or more from your hand without paying its mana cost.
@Faiths_Guide Ooh I see, I didn't know what was the rules ^^ Now that you mention it it's true Kozilek has Menace in the middle of its rules text ^^ Do you know where one could learn about these kind of rules by the way? Some article?
@DankSoulsRager Deadline was 20th August, please don't forget to end and judge this contest Unfortunately, abandoned challenges are a serious issue on this site
@ningyounk Sorry about that. I haven't really been paying attention to cardsmith. Been really busy with school work and I can't wait for Skyrim Remastered so I'm just playing the original. :P
1st - @ningyounk with Ybrae, the High Vanity 2nd - @mintyfreshmana with Kul'Sahk, the Black Genesis 3rd - @Faiths_Guide with Argenaul, Dissensions Cause
Comments
This time, I went for something simpler, less abstract, and designed a Titan of Pride.
EDIT: Here is the previous version: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ybrae-the-high-vanity?list=user Thanks to everyone who helped for the revision! (names in the comments on the card page)
I think protection would go before the "Once each turn..." ability and it wouldn't have a period. I almost put that effect on my titan (completely reversed) using Power versus CMC. I couldn't figure out a way to make it look nice enough so I gave up
Is that an entry, or a cool bit of knowledge?
It doesn't count cuz it isn't a titan but cool bit of lore though.
Although I meant non-creature, not non-land... But that's okay.
Fixed it
Thanks for pointing that out.
Here you go.
(Actually, my entry is on my other comment below).
As long as anyone can see the card, your entry should be fine Though i really recommand putting the link of the specific card page on MTGCardsmith and making a small comment under your card, so people can leave comments on your card ^^
For instance, the card page of your "Gebbuth, the Shifting Shroud" is here: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/gebbuth-the-shifting-shroud
The reason while both of Emrakul's abilities are above keywords is because they are "when cast" abilities. Now you have "During each of your turn(s)" which I still believe should be placed after keywords:
When you cast Ybrae, the High Vanity, distribute up to nine +1/+1 counters among any number of target creatures you control.
Protection from converted mana cost 3 or less
During each of your turns, you may cast one card with converted mana cost 6 or more from your hand without paying its mana cost.
I'm sure there is an article regarding organizing and so on, but I don't know where one is
2nd - @mintyfreshmana with Kul'Sahk, the Black Genesis
3rd - @Faiths_Guide with Argenaul, Dissensions Cause
Honourable Mentions -
@KimJongMartin with Zehaldri the Great Shadow
@Yousmelllikeapumpkin with Sevaron, the Seventh Titan
Congrats to all the winners! Be sure to tell me what cards you want favorited and I'm sorry for judging this so late.
And thanks for the contest which was a lot of fun! =D For the prizes, would you be willing to like those 5 cards?
If any of them makes you cringe, feel free to replace it with any card from my gallery: http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/ningyounk/cards
Fave these two for me?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dogged-challenger
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ripplingforce-mage
Thank you for the contest! Any 1 from here:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/yousmelllikeapumpkin/sets/12717