Make a Card you Already Made (Closed)

Decaldor · October 2016

This contest is where you remake the first card you made on MTG Cardsmith. If you already have, then remake the second card you made on MTG Cardsmith. If you already have, then remake the third card you made on MTG Cardsmith. If you already have, which I don't think is likely, but whatever, just choose a random card you made and remake it.
So, you must post the original, and the new version of it. I know that you premium members can just go in and remake it, but I want to see the original.

Ends November 11th, 6:30 AM, Central American Time Zone

Rules:
1. You may remake your remade card any number of times before the end of the contest.
2. No joke cards, and correct MTG wording.
3. The cards must share the same name, color, rarity, and CMC.

PRIZES!!!!
1st place: 4 target custom cards each get 1 favorite counter, and target player gains 1 follow.
2nd place: 3 target custom cards each get 1 favorite counter.
3rd place: 1 target custom card gets 1 favorite counter.

TrippleBoggey3 · October 2016

Just to let you know, my first card got recognized on whymtgcardsmith.tumblr.com

Biblio3 · October 2016

http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/maxwell-smart
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/maxwell-smart-1

MaverickGV · October 2016

Well my real first card I deleted so I'll just use the first one that still exists.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/angered-ruins

http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/angered-ruins-1

The first one just turned out as a bad version of forbidden orchard so I decided to scrap that idea and make the land itself become a creature.

dashdo101 · October 2016

hi

MaverickGV · October 2016

@TrippleBoggey3 You didn't even spell Unggoy right.

TrippleBoggey3 · October 2016

Shhhhhhh... Nothing happened!

DragonFaceEater · October 2016

Before:

After:

As you can see, the first one was very unbalanced, so I nerfed it. Also, I added a more interesting ability to it, making the saplings grow, since it needed some of that "Mythic Flare".

Links:
Before: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/elaque-dryad-of-balance?list=user
After: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/elaque-dryad-of-balance-1

IanLowenthal · October 2016

This is my first card:

Here it is, revived:

TheFriendlyGeek · October 2016

@TrippleBoggey3 I just found that one of my really old cards is on there (Prints).

TheFriendlyGeek · October 2016

My first card: Goldfish

TheFriendlyGeek · October 2016

Remake:

bubbly221 · October 2016

First card I can look at without cringing:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/colossal-reclamation-1?list=user

Remake:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/colossal-reclamation-2?list=user

Corwinnn · October 2016

The first card I made... now reborn...

camick · October 2016

First card: (this one was actually planned first) http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/demonic-poison?list=user

Remake: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/demonic-poison-1 (It's supposed to be a rare...)

UndeadZombie22 · October 2016

First card: slightly broken planeswalker with bad art:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/soul-of-the-reaper?list=user

New card: less broken planeswalker with good art:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/soul-of-the-reaper-1

Uhhh..... common rarity planeswalkers *cringe*

Funny thing is, I actually DID create a remake of Soul of the Reaper in July after noticing how bad it was, but the remake is completely different from the original and therefore not eligible for this contest.

Emeraldragon17 · October 2016

All grown up, this is my second card.

UndeadZombie22 · October 2016

@Emeraldragon17

Rule Number 3:
"The cards must share the same name, color, rarity, and CMC."

You have followed a grand total of ONE of those guidelines XD

DomriKade · October 2016

I still like this card. Really the only updates on this one were templating and a slight adjustment to toughness. If you feel that this is too close to the original I'll pick a different early card.