Animist's Custom Character Flavour Text Challenge **Circuit Challenge**

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  • saveria201saveria201
    edited April 2017
    1st entry

    This is intended to characterise Bjeldor by representing colors and effects that work directly against what I felt were his strengths.

    Bjeldor's Bane
    http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/bjeldors-bane-1
  • pstmdrnpstmdrn
    edited April 2017
    Second Entry, for Thavra Vash:

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  • AnimistAnimist
    @saveria201 - thanks for the entry! It's great to see an interpretation from an 'enemy' point of view.

    @pstmdrn - just a couple of tweaks. Words after colons are capitalised, so "Add {g} to your mana pool." And the last ability would be "Activate this ability only if a Forest card is in your graveyard." Thanks for the entry!
  • pstmdrnpstmdrn
    Thanks, I'll fix it up later. I have been playing since The Dark and sometimes I get old wordings stuck in my mind.
  • Faiths_GuideFaiths_Guide
    edited April 2017
    Sixth. For Lorius of the Revellers:
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    Lorius' motley crew seems mostly comprised of Assassins. Assassins are vile, culturally speaking, so I assume there'd be one or more that's mentioned that within earshot of Lorius and he'd be none too pleased at the statement. He'd want to show the vocal chap just how useful assassins could be in a permanent kind of fashion, but he'd be more inclined if someone else'd be willing to pay in addition.

    The card reflects this process in game mechanic terms. Someone else has made that creature a target, the assassins can take it from here. To be even more in flavor, the spell/ability would have to be one you don't control, but then the spell would become decidedly bad outside of the sideboard. This is the design I stuck with.
    Hope you like it @Animist!
  • sanjaya666sanjaya666
    edited April 2017
    Changed due to errors.

    For Bjeldor:

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  • JyagaimasuJyagaimasu
    @Animist
    It was supposed to be like that, is there something wrong with that?
    I can change it if you like.
  • AnimistAnimist
    @Jyagaimasu - I just wanted to check that that was what you intended. It's your design!
  • JyagaimasuJyagaimasu
    Thanks :)
    Because discarding cards is not always good, I was happy to keep allowing it to happen.
  • Superman101Superman101
    edited April 2017
    First entry, for Jixxa:
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    Edited slightly.
  • Superman101Superman101
    Second entry. This is for Julessa.
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  • CrediusCredius
    Third entry, this time for Bjeldor Haerkenlaer

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  • saveria201saveria201
    2nd entry

    Thavra

    I liked making an anti-bjeldor card so I kept up that theme for thavra.

    Thavra's Reckoning
    http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/thavras-reckoning?list=user
  • CrediusCredius
    edited April 2017
    Let's do something I haven't done yet (and apparently no one else either) for Julessa:

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  • JyagaimasuJyagaimasu
    edited April 2017
    My Fourth Entry (Bjeldor)

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  • JyagaimasuJyagaimasu
    edited April 2017
    My 5th entry for Thavra:

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  • saveria201saveria201
    3rd entry

    Jixxa Sedai

    Jixxa's Beguilement
    http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/jixxas-beguilement
  • KJMartinKJMartin
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  • pstmdrnpstmdrn
    Fixed that card. People have Favorited the old version. Is there a way to migrate the favorites and delete the previous one?
  • TenebrisNemoTenebrisNemo
    @pstmdrn Nope. If you have premium membership you can edit the card which already has faves. Otherwise, nope.
  • pstmdrnpstmdrn
    @TenebrisNemo Wow! The most useful perk yet!
  • JyagaimasuJyagaimasu
    edited April 2017
    My last entry for Julessa.
    I noticed that she seemed to like having creatures entering the battlefield, So I will enter this card:

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  • Faiths_GuideFaiths_Guide
    @Animist
    Changed a word in the rules text for Assassin's Warrant to make it a little easier to understand.
  • R0b0amR0b0am
    edited April 2017
    My first, for Lorius:

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  • GelectrodeGelectrode
    edited April 2017
    Another card, this time for Volkir. The Prince of Krovmir is obviously callous and uncaring, prioritizing personal gain over the comfort and safety of his worthless servants. Volkir also dabbles in -1/-1 counters, and seems drawn to death. My card has combined as many aspects of Volkir as I could, including -

    - Callousness
    - Ruthlessness
    - -1/-1 counters
    - Personal gain
    - Arrogant vampire flavor text!

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  • TenebrisNemoTenebrisNemo
    @Animist Can we have an extension? I would like to create entries to this contest, but I fear that I may not be able to if this ends in four days. I have other things in my way ATM.
  • AnimistAnimist
    @TenebrisNemo - Sure


    **Attention Please!**

    The deadline is now the following Sunday, 23rd April. If you haven't entered yet, there's plenty of time to do so and, if you have, there's plenty of time to remake or replace your entries if you want!
  • TenebrisNemoTenebrisNemo
    @Animist Awesome. Thank you.
  • ClassClass
    edited April 2017
    Lorius
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    Thrava
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    Jixxa
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    Julessa
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    Bjeldor
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    Volkir
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  • LatinasLatinas
    edited April 2017
    Julessa:

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