Recurring Artwork Challenge #3 - Horror

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  • NokiSkaurNokiSkaur
    Thank you, Koover! I really like the concept of this contest, and I can't wait to enter in more like it.

    I read through the card again, and I'm pretty sure it follows syntax. Would you be okay with showing me the problems so I can fix them in the future?
  • TezzeretofCarmot21TezzeretofCarmot21
    Oh No! I forgot to enter my card!
  • JyagaimasuJyagaimasu
    @koover, give @atrus159 a HM then.
  • TenebrisNemoTenebrisNemo
    Congratulations to other @Winners! My only regret is that I didn't have time to create a card from the 3rd artwork, but I'm glad you liked the ones I did create, @koover!

    Thank you for this challenge!
  • kooverkoover
    edited August 2017
    @NokiSkaur
    Glad you liked it, there'll definetly be more challenges like this in the future :)

    Maybe "some wording issues" was a bit exaggerated :D I would reword the last ability like this:
    At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player puts the top three cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard, then that player may return a card from his or her graveyard to his or her hand.

    Explanation:
    - return...into your hand -> return...to your hand (Proper MTG language)
    - Cards you own are always put into your own graveyard, so the clause isn't needed
    - if you use "then", I wouldn't create a new sentence (like on most magic cards that use then)
    - "return up to one" implies a target, so "may return" (which basically does the same in this context) is the better choice imo

    @Jyagaimasu
    I kinda did an HM for him with the shoutout, but you're right, an official Hohorable Mention for Cultural Exchange by @atrus159 seems appropriate ;) I'll fave another card from your collection that I like!
  • atrus159atrus159
    @koover why thank you
  • kooverkoover
    Prizes have been distributed, this dicussion can be closed :)
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