Renaissance Set — Design Phase

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  • Unstoned... Laughing so hard I cant breathe... Finally managed to kick his crack addiction...
    If we did do Elspeth where would we find art of her with an Underworld mask?
  • @Everyone
    To highlight a slightly different topic, let's think about our legends in addition to our 'walkers:
    - All five Muse-touchers. I think that if only one is a Planeswalker, it wouldn't make sense in the set.
    - The big baddie (unless he or she is a 'walker)
    - A couple slots for cool legends that aren't quite as central to the story
    - The Muses

    Just the Muse-touchers and the Muses bring us to 10 legends. We don't have very many slots, so we need to be careful :)
  • @MagicChess It's a discussion we had at the very beginning actually if you remember ^^ Basically, this is one of the many reasons why it's probably a good idea not to do 5 Muse-touchers:
    - Doing one muse-toucher emphasizes how crazy of an idea this is to try and poke the embodiment of an emotion.
    - Avoiding the five-colour cycle makes it less predictable.
    - Avoiding the five-colour cycle allows us to make less than five heroes (five is really a lot to follow.)
    - Avoiding the five-colour cycle allows us to make multicoloured heroes.
    - Avoiding the five-colour cycle prevents the Gatewatch comparison.
    - Avoiding the five-colour cycle prevents the problem you mentioned of having way too many legendaries in the set.
    - Avoiding the five-colour cycle prevents the heroes from competing for the same slot of exciting legendary cycle than the Muses.

    Basically, everything that's good about the story of someone touching a Muse and getting a spark from it, and the story of the person replacing a dead Muse not only works with one single character instead of five doing the same thing, but actually works better since it feels much more natural! ^^
  • Here's a random design based off the design story behind Walk the Plank that you can read here: https://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/making-magic/dinosaurs-and-vampires-and-pirates-and-merfolk-oh-my-part-2-2017-10-02

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  • @ningyounk, whoops! I totally blanked out there and forgot our whole discussion about that. XD
  • I'm slowly dissecting how the commons articulate themselves around each archetype in a set by taking Amonkhet as an example. Basically, the magic number seems to be four: there should be *at least* four commons in each colour of each archetype that are meant to support it. It can be more or less obvious, for instance Binding Mummy is obviously destined primarily to the WB Midrange Zombie archetype, but a when you see a card like Sparring Mummy you don't always think GW Midrange Exert at first.

    Now, the most important part here is that Sparring Mummy also happens to be a Zombie which naturally helps the WB archetype, so the more archetypes a single card can help the better—especially at common. I'm probably coming up with a first design skeleton of commons in a few more days, but meanwhile here are some random "glue" designs that are meant to work with different archetypes at the same type. I'm starting with White, feel free to jump in with other ideas for White or pursue with other colours ^^ Just remember they are commons ^^

    WHITE

    WU Control Long-Game vs. GW Midrange Rebirth
    2W
    Creature
    2/2
    Rebirth 3WW
    As long as CARDNAME is reborn, it has flying and vigilance. (= Serra Angel)

    WU Control Long-Game vs. WB Midrange Psylian Life
    1W
    Enchantment
    Enchant creature
    When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, you gain 3 psylian life.
    As long as you have psylian life, enchanted creature can't attack or block.

    WU Control Long-Game vs. RW Aggro Go Wide
    2W
    Sorcery
    Choose one —
    • Create two 1/1 creature tokens with vigilance.
    • Create a 2/2 creature token with lifelink.

    GW Midrange Rebirth vs. WB Midrange Psylian Life
    W
    Creature
    1/1
    When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, you gain psylian life equal to its power.
    Rebirth 3W

    GW Midrange Rebirth vs. RW Aggro Go Wide
    3W
    Creature
    2/2
    When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, create a 1/1 creature token with vigilance.
    Rebirth 4W

    WB Midrange Psylian Life vs. RW Aggro Go Wide
    2W
    Creature
    3/2
    Whenever you gain life, untap CARDNAME.

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    Mostly unrelated, this is me trying to play with weird rebirth costs:
    - Rebirth—Reveal a card named CARDNAME from your hand.
    - Rebirth—Sacrifice three creatures.
    - Rebirth—Pay 7 life.
    - Rebirth—Discard your hand.
    - Rebirth—Skip your next turn.
    - Rebirth—Tap three untapped Art you control.
    - Rebirth—Reval the top card of your library. (With additional effect depending on it.)
  • Demise of the Unsightly is one of the Lorwyn elves, but without a body. I don't remember which one it is, though.
  • edited October 2017
    Yeah it's actually Gilt-Leaf Winnower, the card that inspired the GB archetype ^^ I know it from Origins though, is this a reprint frim Lorwyn? :o (I'm at work and can't check ^^)

    But it just seemed to fit an uncommon two-mana conditional black removal spell really well ^^
  • I know it's flavourfully from Lorwyn. I call it a Lorwyn elf because it's on Lorwyn the plane, not Lorwyn the set.
  • Something we'll want to establish at some point is geography of the plane. I know we've kinda settled on an archipelago, but we need locations for card names and flavor text. (e.g. Thraben Doomsayer, Hope of Ghirapur, Sea Gate Oracle, Flames of Yavimaya)
  • @NokiSkaur Ah ok ^^ So yes we're talking about the same one ^^

    @Lujikul For the location, here's an arbitrary list of places we could use and would need a name:
    - The capital (should probably sound italian)
    - The royal court inside the capital (do you know of High Garden in Game of Thrones? Maybe a name along those lines?)
    - The rogue district inside the capital
    - At least two other rival archipelagos that compete for best art and discoveries and are more tied to other European countries so they bring a different flavour? (UK, France, Germany, or Spain probably?)
    - A flavourful name for terra incognita? (To name the undiscovered territories)

    Anyway other idea as a starting point?
  • Capital: Forentina (Or something else vaguely related to Florence.)
    Royal Court: No idea.
    Rogue district: Everything I had for this sounds so, so Russian.
    Rival archipelagos: Galenio, Zalentinas, maybe?
    Undiscovered territories: No idea.

    It also occurred to me that this is Ixalan on the other side of the globe.
  • edited October 2017
    @ningyounk

    Capital: Prosperare
    Royal Court: The Corte Magnifica
    Rogue district: Ombra District?
    Rival Archipelago: Gallania, Remus, Valerno, Sophitia, Antares?
    Undiscovered territories: Clementine?
  • @Lujikul
    - I'm concerned when it comes to names with the For-/Fior- root that they sound too close to Fiora (the plane from Conspiracy) that kinda have that italian Renaissance feel to it.
    - Galenio is my favourite of the two because it's not too long and is easy to pronounce, though it does sound pretty italian. Sanjay just proposed Gallania as well, is there a reference I'm missing?

    @sanjaya666
    - I like the "prosperity" root for the capital, it sounds very optimistic ^^ Prosperare may be a little long though, maybe Prospera? Is it too obvious?
    - I really really like "The Corte Magnifica" it's an instant crush on this one for me!
    - Ombra District could work, it's simple and obvious enough ^^
    - A lot of good names for the different archipelagos with good length and easy pronunciation, though they all sound quite italian, it could be fun to have at least one name a little more exotic ^^
    - I was picturing something a bit mysterious for the undiscovered territories, Clementine has a funny/cute aura to it —being both a fruit and girl name, maybe it could work for a rival city actually?
  • It has nothing to do with anything but I was reading today's Magic story... I guess Gorgons could make good sculptors for Rezatta? xD
  • I dunno... Their sculpting methods may be a bit unorthodox.

    For me, the Galenio was a reference to the gaelic people.
  • edited October 2017
    @ningyounk It's fine. It's only a few ideas anyway. Make whatever you want from them.

    Also, Prospera may be a bit too obvious. But eh, that would not be a problem I suppose.
  • edited October 2017
    Also Gorgons should be the best and fastest sculptors around since they just simply petrify any real things instead of sculpting it inch per inch.
  • Oh actually, we have a GB archetype that's centered around playing with the power and toughness of the creatures, and Gorgons are GB, how good of a fit is that for a Sculptors theme?
  • Random design of the day:

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  • Gorgons, *ThumbsUp*
  • Undiscovered Territory: Philippus, Krystos (named after Filipo and Krysos, which are random explorers I plan to maybe make), and Il Puntellare Sconosciuto (The Unknown Shore).
  • And for the capital: Regina.
  • @TezzeretofCarmot21 I think naming some lands after the character that discovered them is a brilliant and flavourful idea!
    Puntellare Sconosciuto is both a bit too long and a bit too hard to pronounce I believe ;)
    Regina is an actual name, but it does sound cool and comes from the Latin rex, regis I believe which means king so it could be a good fit for a queen or princess actually?
  • I'm still trying to create a balanced set skeleton for commons and it occured to me that, since Blue needs to take a life-matters mechanic from another colour anyways for this set, instead of allowing it to gain life which white, black and green can already do naturally, maybe it was better to allow Blue to have some fogs since it naturally plays well with a tempo playstyle.

    Any thought on how to implement Fog in Blue without breaking the game? Any idea for a twist?
  • How about an instant that makes you gain life at the end of combat equal to the amount of conbat damage you were dealt? It's a more limited Fog, but it still gives your opponents on-hit effects.
  • @NokiSkaur Ah that's definitely an interesting twitch!
    I'd put it in white for this specific set though. While I think the colour pie could handle this, the problem would be that this need for a blue Fog comes from the blue "don't lose life" theme, and your reset ability doesn't work with it. Basically, to have a strong life-matters theme, one of the way is to make each colour care about it in a different way. So here's one of the propositions, based on each colour's main emotion (they're not locked, it's just one version):

    WHITE - Joy - Gain life
    BLUE - Fear - Don't lose life
    BLACK - Sadness - Lose life
    RED - Hate - Make opponents lose life
    GREEN - Love - Have two players gain/lose life

    On top of this, the WU archetype right now is set on a control defensive archetype where most of those "if you didn't lose life since your last turn" cards could end up.

    So something that helps you enable those cards would be especially useful in that blue Fog slot. Of course, one of the solutions could be to reduce the number of ways the set care about life and forget about the "don't lose life" theme altogether. But I tried a version at the beginning where there was only "life gain matters", "life loss matters" or "life changes matter" cards, and Blue is a really tough nut to crack, it's a colour that really doesn't care about life in any way ^^"

    Maybe we could use the Gazeous Form mechanic which is already allowed in Blue? (Target creature can neither deal nor be dealt damage?)
  • @ningyounk
    That's where my mind went. My thoughts had immediately gone to cards like Fog Bank.
  • Mark Rosewater says to use "Attacking creatures get -N/-0 until end of turn", we should probably do that, the gazeous form mechanic can also be used in a more traditional way at the same time ^^

    http://markrosewater.tumblr.com/post/166400034453/hi-mark-do-you-think-allowing-blue-to-have-fog
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