@Credius Timeless Wanderer has no indicator for power and toughness.
Fleeting Apperition has no activated abilities. So the impart does nothing. If you want to make the last ability activated, you can do something like this- "[Cost]: Until end of turn, when Fleeting Apperition becomes the target of a spell or ability, return it to its owner's(not "your") hand."
@zizick123 Can you check out your card's link? Also, the last ability should say "Elemental spells you cast cost {2} less to cast." or "activated abilities of Elementals you control {2} less to activate."
@Djayhero Undead Hydra That looks so much better! It's still a bit too good for a 6 mana uncommon though.
Apex Predetor Just for your info; Intimidate is a dead keyword now. It was replaced with menace. "Apex" is an ability name. It should be italicized. You don't need to capitalize evolve if you put it after another keyword.
Chains of Decay It should say "Enchant creature" first. I think the correct wording is "Enchant creature When Chains of Decay enters the battlefield, put two +1/+1 counters on enchanted creature. Enchanted creature has base power and toughness 0/0 and decay. When enchanted creature dies, its controller loses 3 life." Sorry if this is wrong. I'm not 100% sure
Very interesting ideas!
Btw, I can't click your cards. You post only image. Try this: <a href="Page URL"><img src="Picture URL" width="35%"></a> so that I can give you comment/favorite your cards
Also I have a new idea for Primal Primal [Cost] (If you control no artifacts, no nonbasic lands, you may cast this card for its primal cost.) ^Is wording ok? You can use this version if you want!
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@Credius
Timeless Wanderer has no indicator for power and toughness.
Fleeting Apperition has no activated abilities. So the impart does nothing. If you want to make the last ability activated, you can do something like this-
"[Cost]: Until end of turn, when Fleeting Apperition becomes the target of a spell
or ability, return it to its owner's(not "your") hand."
@zizick123
Can you check out your card's link?
Also, the last ability should say "Elemental spells you cast cost {2} less to cast." or "activated abilities of Elementals you control {2} less to activate."
Undead Hydra
That looks so much better! It's still a bit too good for a 6 mana uncommon though.
Apex Predetor
Just for your info; Intimidate is a dead keyword now. It was replaced with menace.
"Apex" is an ability name. It should be italicized.
You don't need to capitalize evolve if you put it after another keyword.
Chains of Decay
It should say "Enchant creature" first. I think the correct wording is
"Enchant creature
When Chains of Decay enters the battlefield, put two +1/+1 counters on enchanted creature.
Enchanted creature has base power and toughness 0/0 and decay.
When enchanted creature dies, its controller loses 3 life."
Sorry if this is wrong. I'm not 100% sure
Very interesting ideas!
Btw, I can't click your cards. You post only image. Try this:
<a href="Page URL"><img src="Picture URL" width="35%"></a>
so that I can give you comment/favorite your cards
Heres another card, im really liking these abilities also i fixed my other card links
https://mtgcardsmith.com/account/sets/25702
Nothing to see here.
I'd definitely love to but your link is busted!
Try this
Thanks for the link IanLowenthal, and welcome back Flatfish!
This challenge ends tomorrow at this time!
Also I have a new idea for Primal
Primal [Cost] (If you control no artifacts, no nonbasic lands, you may cast this card for its primal cost.)
^Is wording ok? You can use this version if you want!
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