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Well I'll gladly hear those suggestions. What did you have in mind?
May I have a link to the set page. I forgot that your usernames are different.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria
@MagicChess got it covered! ^^
Before I get started, Archive is my new favorite card. XD
Just one thing for now. I feel like the set leans heavily towards blue. It's not a big problem, but when I think about what each color does, I get less of a white feel (for example) and more of an inclination to think WU. This is, however, part of the natural feel of the plane, which I think further mitigates the issue. It's a very blue plane, just like Innistrad is a very black plane.
@modnation675, it's on the front page
Okay then. As long as you don't feel like it ruins the set in any way. My goal is to create a realistic and enjoyable set people can draft and play. I will say I have test drafted this (mind you with AIs that just random pick each pack) and done quite a few nonblue decks so far.
Would you care to get the set for Cockatrice and play some test games right now?
Prowling Felidar goes infinite with any life gain trigger from creatures entering the battlefield.
Is this intentional?
Yes. Is it too powerful?
For how easy it is, probably.
Also, the following card has a typo in it's name. (Were just re-looking at all your cards including the old ones we've seen.)
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/sunweild
Okay, prowling felidar can only tigger on the first life gain each turn and Sunwield got the name typo fixed.
Made a change list to help you proofread your set.
Typo on instant type spelling.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/wrath-of-justice
Missing a comma.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/master-of-dreamfire
Slight re-formatting.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/moltenlands-adept
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Whenever one or more cards you own are put into exile from anywhere, Moltenlands Adept deals 1 damage to target opponent.
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I think Pyrogenesis is spelled differently.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/potion-of-pyrogenisis
Slight typo.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/beastkeeper
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Make sure to spell "card" fully.
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Slight reformatting to reduce redundancy. (I might've mixed up the ordering of the keywords, just check.)
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/deathcoil-serpent
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{g}, Exile a land card from your hand: Deathcoil Serpent gains your choice of trample or deathtouch until end of turn.
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Still looking through the cards because the set is awesome.
All fixes made except Potion of Pyrogenesis, since I'm not sure about that one. I don't think 'Pyrogenesis' is a real word anyway--correct me if I'm wrong. Thanks for the help! It's greatly appreciated!
No problem, just loving looking at your set. I want to play it so bad! XD
Thank you so much! It means a lot considering I really look up to you as a cardsmith!
Some more fixes.
Use "has" not "gain".
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/dream-of-paradise
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Enchanted creature gets +0/+2, and has vigilance and “{t}: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.”
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Replace "of" with "or".
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/roam
Could possibly use different formatting, but that is optional I think.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/rumblegrove-titan
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You may cast Rumblegrove Titan as though it had flash by exiling a land you control in addition to any other costs.
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This one seems like you were sleep card making.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/serenity
Is the name misspelled or is it thematic?
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/thoguhtwoods-sovereign
That formatting is used in instants and sorceries mostly. I'd recommend the following.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/thoughtwoods-scion
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Fantasize—As long as you own seven or more cards in exile, non-Human creatures you control get +2/+2. Otherwise, Non-Human creatures you control get +1/+1.
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Replace "cardss" with "cards".
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/dreamscape-drifter
Fixed except for Rumblegrove titan, which uses the same sort of wording as Rout's oracle text.
(Also, this won't be visible in PlaneSculptors until I update the set on the site, so right now all the fixes are saved to the set file in mse.
No problem, just couldn't help doing so while checking out some of the cards.
By the way, loving the new commander with how the set is turning out.
Well the third party proofreading is much appreciated. I try to avoid grammar and spelling errors, but inevitably there's plenty! >.<
The new commander? What do you mean...?
Silver the Daydreamer.
Ah, yeah, her! Fun fact: She was the last card I designed for the set (excluding the redesign of Stairway to the Beyond).
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/cleansing-irradation
I think it's 'irradiation.'
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/enlightened-soveirgn
'Sovereign'
I wish Shadowborn Apostle cost {w} instead of {b} so it could combo with Enlightened Sovereign XD
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/feathers-of-dawn
'Create' (not 'cerate').
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/rune-transcriber
I think it should be "Imprint—When Rune Transcriber enters the battlefield, you may exile a noncreature, nonland card from your hand or a noncreature, nonland card from your graveyard" instead of 'target' before the second 'noncreature.' You could even make it "Imprint—When Rune Transcriber enters the battlefield, you may exile a noncreature, nonland card from your hand or graveyard" to simplify it.
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/tradewind-raptor
I would make this "Tradewind Raptor can't attack or block unless you've exiled a nonland card from your hand this turn."
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/windward-eternal
Replace 'when' with 'whenever.'
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/windward-hopeful
Misplaced capital in the name (WIndward)
http://www.planesculptors.net/set/eathouria/version-11/wrath-of-justice
The card type says 'instnat' instead of 'instant.'
Hope this helped with the white cards!
As with most drafting of sets, this set has many typos being fixed overtime.
Planesculptors is sort of like an MTGCS for sets made in Magic Set Editor, the platform I used to make Eathouria since over all it just tends to be better than MTGCS for designing full sets. It also allows you to draft and host other live events using your set and any other custom sets upload and made public on the site, with all games being played using Cockatrice (with any of the customs sets being used additionally installed on Cockatrice).
If you're playing on cockatrice ever with the set. Please send us a message as we'd like to try it.
Time zone: Central Standard Time (MB, CA)
> 8:24PM as of initial posting.
PlaneSculptors
@modnation675
Of course. Once I get everything together, I’ll send it your way!