WinnerIsTheJudge (Week 4) "20 words or less"
OFFICIAL 'WinnerIsTheJudge' RULES:
1) This contest will last exactly one week.
2) Limit of 2 entries max per person. Cards can be swapped out any time before the contest ends.
3) No old cards.
4) Top 3 winners will be announced, whose names shall be forever engraved in the HALL OF FAME
5) After the contest is judged, the first place winner gets to decide what the next weekly challenge is and become the new judge. So only enter if you are willing to host the next challenge.
Check out all WinnerIsTheJudge challenges:
http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/search?Search=WinnerIsTheJudge
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( ^ @NextJudge Copy this part to your new challenge thread. )
This challenge is to make a card with 20 or less words in its rule texts.
Examples:
*Keyword ability counts as one word, including "first strike", "double strike"..
*"Enchant _____" counts as one word.
*"+N/+N" counts as one word.
*Number after a keyword, Mana symbol, {t], {ut}, {e], hyphen "—", period, comma, colon, semicolon, ability word, reminder text, flavor text don't count. So..
"Reinforce 1 — {1}{r} ({1}{r}, Discard this card: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature.)" counts as one word.
"Landfall— Whenever a land enters the battlefield under your control, this creature gets +1/+1 and gains double strike until end of turn." counts as 20 words. ("Landfall" is an ability word. "double strike" counts as one word.)
CRITERIA
Presentation, art selection, templating, spelling, balance, creativity and flavor.
Deadline: April 18
Prizes:
1st Place
- 3 favorites of my choice.
2nd Place
- 2 favorites of my choice.
3rd Place
- 1 favorite of my choice.
Also, top 3 winning cards will get a super amazing -TROPHY-, and added to -HALL OF FAME- !
1) This contest will last exactly one week.
2) Limit of 2 entries max per person. Cards can be swapped out any time before the contest ends.
3) No old cards.
4) Top 3 winners will be announced, whose names shall be forever engraved in the HALL OF FAME
5) After the contest is judged, the first place winner gets to decide what the next weekly challenge is and become the new judge. So only enter if you are willing to host the next challenge.
Check out all WinnerIsTheJudge challenges:
http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/search?Search=WinnerIsTheJudge
_______________
( ^ @NextJudge Copy this part to your new challenge thread. )
This challenge is to make a card with 20 or less words in its rule texts.
Examples:
*Keyword ability counts as one word, including "first strike", "double strike"..
*"Enchant _____" counts as one word.
*"+N/+N" counts as one word.
*Number after a keyword, Mana symbol, {t], {ut}, {e], hyphen "—", period, comma, colon, semicolon, ability word, reminder text, flavor text don't count. So..
"Reinforce 1 — {1}{r} ({1}{r}, Discard this card: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature.)" counts as one word.
"Landfall— Whenever a land enters the battlefield under your control, this creature gets +1/+1 and gains double strike until end of turn." counts as 20 words. ("Landfall" is an ability word. "double strike" counts as one word.)
CRITERIA
Presentation, art selection, templating, spelling, balance, creativity and flavor.
Deadline: April 18
Prizes:
1st Place
- 3 favorites of my choice.
2nd Place
- 2 favorites of my choice.
3rd Place
- 1 favorite of my choice.
Also, top 3 winning cards will get a super amazing -TROPHY-, and added to -HALL OF FAME- !
This discussion has been closed.
Comments
Flavor text doesn't count.
@Lastjustice
I had no idea what your weakness is and this is definitely not me every time I see your submission
jk I like your cards!
@shadow123
I'm a terrible flavor text writer too, so I'm not going to give anyone minus point for the flavor. (But cards with inappropriate flavor texts for this site will be reported.)
Or you can fill the text box with reminder texts like this^^; https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/eternal-owl?list=set&set=24940
First Entry
Beautiful!
2nd Entry
I decided to nullify them in a completely different manner.
There's my two, some the rest you need help Tomigon out and make this contest a hard decision for him.
I noticed that you only post cards' images when you submit cards to contests, and we can't click them. I think if we can go to your cards' pages, you'll get more feedbacks/favorites on your card.
<a href="Page URL"><img src="Picture URL" width="35%"></a>
Also I commented on your card.
This card contains 8 words of rules text.
I hope you have a good rest of your Knight
first:
second:
Yeah, I think the wording has no mistake. Nice card!
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/devoid-of-time-and-space
Wuhh... Gives me the chills!
It should say.. "Create a 1/1 black Shade creature token." And the card doesn't have P/T. Also you forgot to put periods on like.. every cards you made..
@HeroKP
Wow that seems very powerful.
One question: Which one is what you want to do with that card?
"Exile all noncreature cards from all graveyards."
..or..
"Exile all noncreature permanents."
You can't exile all noncreature cards from players' hands and/or libraries unless you reveal them, so I thought the card exiles noncreatures from the battlefield or graveyards.
Also if I correct the other parts, it becomes "All creatures become 1/1 colorless Warp creatures. Each player's life total becomes 15."
@Everyone this contest ends tomorrow!
Thanks I will correct that in a jiffy.
There! All better!
Thanks for updating the card, but you didn't fix the other parts I pointed out. You missed it or I misunderstood your card.
Normal creatures can't become tokens. I think you should choose either of these:
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=398463
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=OVINOMANCER
Or do I have to remake it AGAIN?
"Exile all noncreature permanents. All creatures become 1/1 colorless Warp creatures. Each player's life total becomes 15."