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Tera sounds very much like some sort of Simic card. I'd imagine you'd have a bunch of counter cards in your deck and then you pump up Tera and leave your opponent defenseless. Like it!
@SteampunkDragon That is actually a pretty cool idea. Imagine this in a Hapatra deck. Jeez. The cost to rarity is pretty good, and it starting as a 1/1 is solid. Great card. What say ye about these? Give constructive feedback, favorite it if you like, then post up to TWO cards of your own.
I see this card being played in a hasty torbran deck, might be a good turn if you can pull off a two drop lightning elemental, home in the combat damage, and then use this one to blast away some early opponent's critters. Sidenote though, in my personal opinion Fury would be slightly more fitting with green or green|red due to the combat damage clausule.
@Dom_Rocks Cool card! Maybe you should make the cost of copying the artifact a little bit more (like 2W) and exile a nontoken noncreature artifact. Otherwise, I like it.
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I’m kind of new to the forms, so I hope this is ok:
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Simple, useful and just one of those cards that work in their simplicity. This might actually be a real MTG card if one didn't know any better. Favoriting this xD
@Faiths_guide, thank you for the heads up, and also for your feedback on my card! Am I right in thinking I'll need to make some other account to leave comments on cards? Disqus or something?
I don’t think Graxin is a mythic. In addition to that, this card also seemed completely mono-green. There is no blue element that adds to the card. I like the art for the flip side though.
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Before you post your cards that you want feedback on, you need to give the card before you feedback FIRST by commenting on it and giving constructive criticism or liking it. Then you may post up to two of your own. So could you please post a comment on my card above or like it then post up to two of your own?
I sure hope this doesn't seem excessive.
Thoughts on these?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ferian-fallen-one
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hemi-mistress-of-storms?list=user
Man! I really like those!
After the mana symbols, you must put a comma before the tap symbol and after the tap symbol, there should be a colon before the ability.
Example:
{2}{w}{g}, {t}: Populate.
The first ability should be worded like this: Create a 4/4 green and white Wolf creature token with trample.
The third ability should also say: As long as you control three or more...
You only use numbers on counters or with life.
This card could also be bumped up to mythic, it is too powerful for a rare.
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This is a remake of the card @SteampunkDragon helpfully critiqued. Is it any better?
You've already received some feedback, but I left a wording correction on your card.
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More heat from me. Post a comment on it and/or favorite it if you like it before posting your card(s):
mostly concerned about the card's syntax
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Favorited. Only thing I might consider changing is creatures to nontoken specifically on the last ability.
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I’m kind of new to the forms, so I hope this is ok:
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I don’t think Graxin is a mythic. In addition to that, this card also seemed completely mono-green. There is no blue element that adds to the card. I like the art for the flip side though.
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