@WarriorCatInAhat Was that a legitimate entry to be reviewed, or was that a joke/spam placement? If it was real, I would say that there are some hypothetical issues with it, but it is an un-card, and therefore (at least by me) un-critiqueable as for balance and fairness. I will mention that if it is all permanent types, it will automatically go away, as planeswalkers with no loyalty do tend to do that.
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@Dizzydude - Here's how I think the last ability should be put to be in proper MTG language:
If Temizoa, Lakeside Protector would deal combat damage to a player, you may prevent that damage instead. If you do, draw a card and untap target creature you control for each 1 damage prevented this way.
Here is mine:
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@Fallen_Lord_Vulganos I personally would've made the last ability "until your next turn" instead of "for the rest of the game"
I also would've made quipped creature have flying, menace or trample, and made it +2/+2 instead... that way it has some added advantage to actually dealing damage to a player... this is all just my personal opinion.
Also that discarding part of your card seems busted. Like, let's discard this badboy Arixmethes for 12 card draw and gain 12 life. On turn 3 or 4 at least.
@Fallen_Lord_Vulganos yeah I realize that now... maybe if I moved the gain life to the second ability and the lose life to the first. would that be better?
@Fantastickill7 I would have made a scarecrow one of his subtypes, he looks like one. And you should make 'Discard a creature card' into 'Sacrifice a creature'
Any thoughts on these two guys? Open Sea Killer Monstrous Gooberfish
@Fantastickill7 It would have great tribal synergy, except for the fact that there are'nt many dwarfs in mtg! Unless you're planning to make a dwarf-themed set, the first ability does'nt help to much. But the rest of the card is pretty intresting.
What do yall think? The card was inspired by Master of Cruelties (An actual card, not custom)
@Fantastickill7 super artwork. The two effects are great in terms of Dwarf flavor.
I'm not sure you need to go so high on the cmc. Maybe it's a 4 instead of a 5, at 2RW?
The Forge mechanic is troubling me since there's no tap in it. Maybe it can only be done once per turn and/or whenever you can play a sorcery? That way you have to plan ahead instead of dumping whatever you have left at the end of your opponent's turn into treasure.
@WarriorCatInAhat True, there aren't very many... but I find that if you can have a legendary Dwarf that gives other Dwarfs, and Vehicles +1/+1, then there can be an Enchantment that gives them +1/+1 and firststrike.
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Was that a legitimate entry to be reviewed, or was that a joke/spam placement? If it was real, I would say that there are some hypothetical issues with it, but it is an un-card, and therefore (at least by me) un-critiqueable as for balance and fairness. I will mention that if it is all permanent types, it will automatically go away, as planeswalkers with no loyalty do tend to do that.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/the-flying-dutchman-11
I commented on your card.
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https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/joshira-preemptive-protector
is the next card to be peer edited
along with
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/caleuche-1
Made this for @Temurzoa
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/temizoa-lakeside-protector
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I was kinda bored I just wanted to make something weird. I also deleted it.
If Temizoa, Lakeside Protector would deal combat damage to a player, you may prevent that damage instead. If you do, draw a card and untap target creature you control for each 1 damage prevented this way.
Here is mine:
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Thanks for the feedback I agree,
I guess I just haven’t gotten to that stage of making cards yet.
Faved.
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/naglfar-5
Uh, I don't really know about it, but the discard and the token generation part seems busted tbh. Hope it helps?
And thoughts about this?
I personally would've made the last ability "until your next turn" instead of "for the rest of the game"
I also would've made quipped creature have flying, menace or trample, and made it +2/+2 instead... that way it has some added advantage to actually dealing damage to a player... this is all just my personal opinion.
Any thoughts on this?
Also that discarding part of your card seems busted. Like, let's discard this badboy Arixmethes for 12 card draw and gain 12 life. On turn 3 or 4 at least.
like "1BG: discard a card, draw a card, you gain 3 life?"
I would have made a scarecrow one of his subtypes, he looks like one. And you should make 'Discard a creature card' into 'Sacrifice a creature'
Any thoughts on these two guys?
Open Sea Killer
Monstrous Gooberfish
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/open-sea-killer?list=set&set=49016
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/monstrous-gooberfish-1?list=set&set=49016
Oh... duh... so obvious...
thanks
Open Sea Killer's power/toughness are a little big considering that it has devour 1, maybe 5/5 or 6/6 would be better.
What do ya'll think? Art by me
It would have great tribal synergy, except for the fact that there are'nt many dwarfs in mtg! Unless you're planning to make a dwarf-themed set, the first ability does'nt help to much. But the rest of the card is pretty intresting.
What do yall think? The card was inspired by Master of Cruelties (An actual card, not custom)
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/xaclythos-the-despairer?list=user
I'm not sure you need to go so high on the cmc. Maybe it's a 4 instead of a 5, at 2RW?
The Forge mechanic is troubling me since there's no tap in it. Maybe it can only be done once per turn and/or whenever you can play a sorcery? That way you have to plan ahead instead of dumping whatever you have left at the end of your opponent's turn into treasure.
Thanks!
there was supposed to be a tap in there... must have forgotten it XD
True, there aren't very many... but I find that if you can have a legendary Dwarf that gives other Dwarfs, and Vehicles +1/+1, then there can be an Enchantment that gives them +1/+1 and firststrike.
Thoughts? This is something I'd never really worked with, and thought would be cool.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/miyato-the-spell-sharer
I have my doubts about this card
The spell reflection thing is pretty neat. She's not hexproof (yawn) but you can have a measure of retribution.
I like everything but the name.
What about "mystic mirror" ?