@Revan *Claps hands excitedly* I love nonsense poetry, so references to Jabberwocky are very much appreciated. Although, the art and name of Tale of Wonder suggest Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, when in fact Jabberwocky appeared in Through the Looking-Glass... Regardless, the flavor of creating the son, the Jubjub Bird, and the Bandersnatch are all spot-on, and given the restrictions on the Jabberwocky's abilities, I think it's fairly well balanced given that it comes on the fourth turn of a 3-color saga.
@TheWanderer I know the Jabberwocky is in through the looking glass, but I couldn't come up with a good Idea for the art of Tale of Wonder. So I went with what you see. I appreciate the feed back though. Thanks.
@TheWanderer Aurum Enforcer looks and feels like a nice, simple common. Gaius I heavily approve of, great job. everything about him is awesome, and I don't see any faults.
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@Mir-151414 Baterok sounds like he is in the service of Sauron, and I like that. Interesting that you gave a red-black creature lifelink. I don't think it breaks the pie though and actually works quite well. And it wouldn't be a Demon without some sacrifice. Good job
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@Mir-151414 Looks like a suitable Dimir commander for a sneaky assassins theme, and it's pretty good with paying life. Next up: And/or (Note: The messenger is meant to be a diplomat theme, as you can tell.)
@WarriorCatInAHat Kamino Cloning Facility seems slightly bland with its abilities; maybe try spicing them up a little. Flavor wise I like it a lot. I just think that you could maybe make the mechanical aspect a little more interesting. Its a good card though.
For reference, here's a version I made. I went a different route than you did, and I am not comparing yours to mine.
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@ArchieTaylor, though you can't see it, in the artwork for the card there's a demon that's rather chained up, and there's zombies crawling around it. Unfortunately that couldn't make the cut, but what you said totally makes sense. Cool. So, does the 'reign' ability refer to the caster of the curse, the player that curse is played on, or any player?
The 'reign' ability refers to the caster of the curse. The idea was to possibly play it on yourself, then you would just be the monarch and the other abilities would cancel each other out.
@ArchieTaylor I see nothing wrong with Conceited Coronation. This could be used in very interesting ways. I don't think WoTC has enough Curse cards. Nice job.
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Besides a few grammatical errors (the "the" on the second ability and the "construct" on the third ability need to be capitalised) J4ck is a pretty interesting "Anything tribal" style card. I like it.
I've been trying to work on a new mechanic. shown here is a pretty benign example, and the logical extreme. Leave a like and/or a comment, then post up to two of your own!
@Revan Tipoca City is pretty good, but it does'nt quite have the same theme as Kamino. Kamino is more focused on the actual tokens, while on Tipoca they are kinda like a little bonus.
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What think you guys? I guess this is some sort of a draft.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/takapet-lord-of-the-wastes
This card is nice and simple. Not to much crazy stuff going on. I like this card. I would definitely play this.
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*Claps hands excitedly* I love nonsense poetry, so references to Jabberwocky are very much appreciated. Although, the art and name of Tale of Wonder suggest Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, when in fact Jabberwocky appeared in Through the Looking-Glass... Regardless, the flavor of creating the son, the Jubjub Bird, and the Bandersnatch are all spot-on, and given the restrictions on the Jabberwocky's abilities, I think it's fairly well balanced given that it comes on the fourth turn of a 3-color saga.
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Your thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/baterok-herald-of-the-eye
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Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flaroka-the-mist-mage
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And/or
(Note: The messenger is meant to be a diplomat theme, as you can tell.)
Concerning Paradise Messenger, remember that excluding conjunctions, all words in a card's title should be capitalized.
Also, don't forget to credit the artists! Both cards are cool, but they would be much more popular with other users if you included the artists.
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/humble-origins
I like how Humble Origins helps your commander, but that pretty much means it's only useful in EDH. Not neccesarily a bad thing, but sacrificing a land just to draw a card? Just want to say thats a bit underpowered.
Any thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kamino-cloning-facility-3
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/clone-trooper-47
For reference, here's a version I made. I went a different route than you did, and I am not comparing yours to mine.
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for Tipoca City's last ability, how exactly does that work, how can a creature be a copy of 3 target creatures? Especially in terms of p/t.
What do ya'll think?
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/barok-suppressed-by-chains-1
oops, I read it as you create a token that's a copy of three creatures XD
Any feedback?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/conceited-coronation
Cool. So, does the 'reign' ability refer to the caster of the curse, the player that curse is played on, or any player?
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I've been trying to work on a new mechanic. shown here is a pretty benign example, and the logical extreme. Leave a like and/or a comment, then post up to two of your own!
Tipoca City is pretty good, but it does'nt quite have the same theme as Kamino. Kamino is more focused on the actual tokens, while on Tipoca they are kinda like a little bonus.
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/raging-mythosaur
@WarriorCatInAhat I left feedback on your card.
My card:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/telepathic-dismissal
Thanks for helping sort that out
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