Wow, I went through and saw all the other cool contestants and even though it doesn't count towards points I thought the stories were cool and I am just here with a magic bear.
@HeroKP since I can't find your cards anywhere on the site, I might as well post the criticism here.
The amount of loyalty counters a planeswalker has stays on him/her even when they transform. If you want the amount to change, make sure Aeon is exiled, then returned to the battlefield transformed under your control.
@HeroKP I guess that's up to @Aggroman15 to decide. He's running this contest. Why use the ligature Æ? Easier to use AE no? Also I feel like control players would use Æon as another Ensnaring Bridge and not use his abilities at all, just let him sit there and prevent anyone from attacking so you can win with your alternate win condition. Also your joke about the ten alternate Ravnicas is getting to me more than intended…I need to figure out all the planes! Are these correct? Dawnica: Azorius Shadica: Dimir Demonica: Rakdos Wildica: Gruul Pacifica: Selesnya Evolica: Simic Contractia: Orzhov Randomnica: Izzet Phyrexia: Golgari Theros: Boros
And as for control players not evolving hin, that's perfectly fine. You are only supposed to evolve him when you really need to, fitting with the flavour that sphynxhood is hard to gain and only given out in most dire times.
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Race: Human
Plane: Tetani (Plane I invented)
this represents Teri sparking. it is not an entry, just lore.
The amount of loyalty counters a planeswalker has stays on him/her even when they transform. If you want the amount to change, make sure Aeon is exiled, then returned to the battlefield transformed under your control.
I remade the card soon after posting it, should be more balanced now
Why use the ligature Æ? Easier to use AE no?
Also I feel like control players would use Æon as another Ensnaring Bridge and not use his abilities at all, just let him sit there and prevent anyone from attacking so you can win with your alternate win condition.
Also your joke about the ten alternate Ravnicas is getting to me more than intended…I need to figure out all the planes! Are these correct?
Dawnica: Azorius
Shadica: Dimir
Demonica: Rakdos
Wildica: Gruul
Pacifica: Selesnya
Evolica: Simic
Contractia: Orzhov
Randomnica: Izzet
Phyrexia: Golgari
Theros: Boros
I'm sorry it had to be done. It is my uncommom.
Your computer has died due to pun overload.
This is what happens when I am given access to the internet. I break it with puns
Beary Good Friends' mana cost is too high. It needs to be a a maximum of 3 mana.
You have all the planes figured out, well done!
And as for control players not evolving hin, that's perfectly fine. You are only supposed to evolve him when you really need to, fitting with the flavour that sphynxhood is hard to gain and only given out in most dire times.