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(Kor'angiel is a fighter/support.)
Kor'angiel (Or just Kor) is a loyal member of the boros legion. As an angel, he is in a high-ranking position, but is willing to serve as a simple soldier, a trait which surprises the other angels.
Kor is the only known male angel in ravnica, and keeps his gender hidden from Aurelia to maintain his place in the guild.
Kor formed spontaneously from the spirit of a dead planeswalker. the planeswalker, named La'ayiv, was killed by the fading from existence of a plane he was exploring at the time. Kor remembers his life as La'ayiv, and misses his spark. However, He enjoys his wings and maintains fervent to the boros despite his past life.
Yes, but maybe you should work on story, your story kind of seems, eh, like why did Rulias join because he saw his friends being bullied?
@KorandAngels
You should work on capitalization and punctuation, there are many capitalization issues in your card, the story on the other hand, is actually very unique, but also would you mind explaining how they are a support? Also you should add a cost along with the tap-to-kill-black feature or this might net you a 2
This is Kilea, a neutral good orzhov healer.
Kilea was born into a wealthy orzhov family, both of her parents living pontiffs, and many of her ancestors were spirits at varying ranks in the hierarchy. Initially, she accepted the way of life offered to her, as the idea of immortality appealed to her. She became a high ranking priest, but, after about a decade after ascending to spirit form, she began asking questions. Is this life really this good? Wouldn't it be better to help the living? Using her healing magic, she perfected spells that drew on the power of the dead to heal the living, and then left the orzhov, to find a new, better, way of life.
-Revised-
(Fixed. he is now a fighter/support. same story as first post.)
@pjbear2005: 4
Your card is good but there are some major eyesores that I don't like, so I will give the card a 4, there is a spelling mistake where instead of putting "with" you put "wth", but the favorite part of your card I like is that its mechanics that can help anyone make sense with the backstory, and it really helps flesh out what the Support role means
@Bowler218: 2
I am sorry to say this but this card/backstory is kind of bad, card not so much, backstory a lot, for the card, I love the flavor and the mechanic and the balance, but the card image is so bad quality that I can't help but stare and cringe at it, not your fault though, but for the backstory, it is never explained why he joined the Boros after getting kicked the crap out of by bullies and getting in trouble for defending himself(?) And it feels very flat
@pstmdrn: 4 EXTRA CONSIDERATION (Making it a Fighter)
I gave you this rating because all though your backstory and card would have netted you a 5, you still haven't changed the +2/+0 to a +0/+2
@TigerGecko66: 4
Although I like the flavor and story, your card has major formatting issues, for the second ability it should be [1 colorless], [tap]: Remove three spirit counters from Kilea, Spirit Caretaker, regenerate target creature.
And for the first ability there is no way to play it as you can't use it as an action by a card, or as an effect as it needs spirit counters, here is what you should put:
[tap]: Remove two spirit counters from Kilea, Spirit Caretaker, all creatures you control get +0/+1 until end of turn.
@Mantis17: N/A, sorry bud but you can't have two contenders, you have to pick one, I would personally say your first one because it helps flesh out what the Tank role is, and it also gets the extra consideration due to you filling the criteria, but it is your choice
@KorandAngels: 2
I like your card and your interesting story, along with the art and the flavor, but your card is a little too op, for 4 mana you get a card with 2/2 (Not bad for the whole flying and lifelink thing) but then you have the massive side buff and the ability to wipe out most black creatures, and then you have an op card, I would say bump down the damage effect to 2 damage, I would rather have your card give the other creatures lifelink then give them a massive buff
What is like about your card is the fact that that the artificial toughness matches up with the fact that he is using Shaman form, but what you need to do is swap around the green and blue cmc symbols because they are not in the same order as the card border color, which indicates the correct order for them, also you need to work on your storytelling, as you really didn't put up a story, try asking @pstmdrn or @pjbear2005 for help in making a story
Dual color order varies with "distance"
It goes like this
WU
WB
RW
GW
UB
UR
GU
BR
BG
RG
Three Color has "Variations" based on Primary Colors thus Wedges and Shards
Wedges
The primary color within a Wedge is the color that is enemy to both of the other colors.
Abzan - WBG- Primary color is black. Tarkir clan color is white.
Jeskai -URW- Primary color is red. Tarkir clan color is blue.
Sultai -BGU- Primary color is green. Tarkir clan color is black.
Mardu -RWB- Primary color is white. Tarkir clan color is red.
Temur -GUR- Primary color is blue. Tarkir clan color is green.
Shards
A shard is a series of three colors in an unbroken chain on the color pie. The middle color in a shard is its primary color, allied to both of the shard's other colors.
Bant -GWU- Primary color is white.
Esper -WUB- Primary color is blue.
Grixis -UBR- Primary color is black.
Jund -BRG- Primary color is red.
Naya -RGW- Primary color is green.
This is Kilea, a neutral good orzhov healer.
Kilea was born into a wealthy orzhov family, both of her parents living pontiffs, and many of her ancestors were spirits at varying ranks in the hierarchy. Initially, she accepted the way of life offered to her, as the idea of immortality appealed to her. She became a high ranking priest, but, after about a decade after ascending to spirit form, she began asking questions. Is this life really this good? Wouldn't it be better to help the living? Using her healing magic, she perfected spells that drew on the power of the dead to heal the living, and then left the orzhov, to find a new, better, way of life.
Changed to be better formatted. The removal of XX counters allows you to give your creatures more than +0/+1, as intended.