Advertise Your Cards!

Thatcardartist7Thatcardartist7
edited March 2019 in Contests and Challenges
The concept here is simple. Before you can post your card, you must constructively criticize the card posted before yours. A person can have multiple cards, but I ask that you upload them one at a time, with at least a 5 post delay between each. Everything should be criticized from balance to wording to flavor. Cards are posted here to be scrutinized and improved. I've kept the description short and sweet, so have fun!

Comments

  • Thatcardartist7Thatcardartist7
    I'll open up the contest with a card that I've been wondering about since I let it out.

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  • sorinjacesorinjace
    edited March 2019
    I feel like everything this card does is cool except the very last ability to scry. It isnt necessary, and it feels crammed onto the card. Cool card otherwise!
  • MilaMila
    Well, I like he idea that you have to pay something to make the land enter the battlefield untapped and get something, if you don't. And discard for black and scry for blue is well-chosen.
  • Thatcardartist7Thatcardartist7
    Keep in mind, this is facilitated by one posting a card alongside their criticism. Much inspired by the tappedout.net commander advertisement forum. Eventually, a chain of advice will appear where everyone contributes and receives regularly.
  • MemoryHeadMemoryHead
    edited March 2019
    @Thatcardartist7 The Island / Swamp type might be a tiny bit over the top for searching with fetches, but I'll admit that it fits very nicely with the art and that I'm probably wrong. Also, there's a minor grammar error and it should be worded "If you don't, it enters the battlefield tapped." It doesn't need the name there, in other words.

    For the sake of keeping this going, here's a card:

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