I'll allow any of my cards to be used so long as they are accepted of course. My only request is that if anyone uses them, please list what cards, as this is very cool and id like to know what cards made it!
Do you guys think this would be a balanced commander? Should I take the blue out? I'm not the best at building decks or anything, so should this just be in it or could it be a good commander?
As i read the necronomicon i realized i made a typo
So it says that at the beginning of your upkeep you may cast x/x so and so What its suppose to say is you may cast X X/X so and so where x is the amount used to cast this card
and no i dont realy want to play i just showed some people my necromancy cards so if they think about making a necromancer deck they can barrow some of my cards.
"humans died" where X is the amount of Humans that died *X-Attack, X-Defense* Doesn't exist, you can only describe it as X, a good tip would be to look at real cards and see how they are worded
@EnvyReaper Thanks for your explanation that will help As for the X-attack/X-defense at the time I had a massive brain fart and forgot that it was Power And Toughness
@pjbear2005 Here are my ready cards, it would be awesome if you could review them for me. Also, I think that creature you made is a slightly overpowered commander, but it might be acceptable in other formats. The reason is that, it stops you from losing health from any creatures your opponent uses, while any time you damage an opponent, you gain health. I think you should leave the blue in it, or exchange it for green. Your choice. There are more powerful cards that are legal.
Death touch. When The Grave Keeper enters the battlefield, destroy all non-black humans, then create X 1/1 black zombie creature tokens, where X is the number of humans destroyed in this way. The Grave Keeper's power and toughness are equal to the number of undead you control.
@Servillius after Reaper told me about my card I asked my friend who played it longer than I and plays it more often than I (I do play but I don't have the time nor money to play as much) and he told me roughly the same thing
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https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fabled-pests
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rat-ogre-6
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/xirodor-tireless-companion
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/palace-lurker
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/transport-of-nightmares
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/clan-combatant
Validate Please
@PandaShoop I'll accept Rat Ogre and Transport of Nightmares (I'll make a new version since the mana cost is inverted)
A) 1v1
2v2
C) Three Way
D) Standard EDH
E) Showing Off
F) All of the above
(If that's alright with you.)
Do you guys think this would be a balanced commander? Should I take the blue out? I'm not the best at building decks or anything, so should this just be in it or could it be a good commander?
also I wanted to do the same thing
So it says that at the beginning of your upkeep you may cast x/x so and so
What its suppose to say is you may cast X X/X so and so where x is the amount used to cast this card
where X is the amount of Humans that died
*X-Attack, X-Defense*
Doesn't exist, you can only describe it as X, a good tip would be to look at real cards and see how they are worded
As for the X-attack/X-defense at the time I had a massive brain fart and forgot that it was Power And Toughness
Also, I think that creature you made is a slightly overpowered commander, but it might be acceptable in other formats. The reason is that, it stops you from losing health from any creatures your opponent uses, while any time you damage an opponent, you gain health. I think you should leave the blue in it, or exchange it for green. Your choice. There are more powerful cards that are legal.
This is what I think the text should look like.
Death touch.
When The Grave Keeper enters the battlefield, destroy all non-black humans, then create X 1/1 black zombie creature tokens, where X is the number of humans destroyed in this way.
The Grave Keeper's power and toughness are equal to the number of undead you control.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/the-ratmother
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/standard-bearer-of-the-swarm
Review?