My First Challenge: The Idiom Challenge-CLOSED

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  • YesterdayYesterday
    edited July 2019
    @AlexWright

    Oh hey. Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked them so much.

    I guess I'll post some cards then -
    Essence Gorger
    Dreadhorde Dragon
    Mother Nature
    Father Time

    I hope I'll join some more of your contests again soon.
  • RanshiRanshi
    Favorite whichever cards!
  • riib11riib11
    @AlexWright

    Thanks for hosting the contest, was fun, and also for the honest criticism!

    I'd appreciate it if you favorited these, please:
    - https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/wanderearth
    - https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flying-colors-1 (more rules-correct version of Flying Colors)
    - https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mortal-egress-1
  • sorinjacesorinjace
    Congrats to the winners of this contest!
  • sorinjacesorinjace
    @AlexWright your feedback on my card would be appreciated thanks!
  • AlexWrightAlexWright
    @Sorinjace sorry it took me so long to get back to this challenge. Here's some feedback:

    As a card, I think that the card is super flavorful. The art and flavor text mix very well and create a very cute card. However, it was very underpowered. Six mana and triple white for a slightly better Blind Obedience without extort feels bad.

    As a challenge entree, the card wasn't terribly unique. Lots of cards make things enter the battlefield tapped, and this was simply another one of those but with cool art and flavor text. I felt like that wasn't enough.

    Anyways, I hope that wasn't harsh and that my criticism was at least helpful (feels pretty weird giving criticism to the guy who is basically the king of this site.) Happy Smithing Sorinjace.
  • AlexWrightAlexWright
    edited July 2019
    Also, @Sorinjace, I need to get rid of this challenge, so please reply when you have read my critique so I know when I can get rid of this. Thanks!
  • sorinjacesorinjace
    Thank you for the feedback! I am in no way the "king" of this site, but thank you for the nod of respect. I will lower the converted mana cost on the card then, I guess when I made the card I wanted it to be simplistic and straight to the point, and it felt very powerful to me as a card. Anyhow, I will give it edits asap. Thank you so much!
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