Original: Erode (This deals damage to creatures in the form of erosion counters. It gains "At the beginning of your end step, if this creature has five or more erosion counters on it, sacrifice it.")
My version: Erode (This deals damage to creatures in the form of erosion counters. Whenever the fifth erosion counter is placed on a permanent, its controller sacrifices it.)
Here's my version of Fury by @Battlesocke: Fury(This spell costs {x} less to cast, where X is total amount of combat damage dealt to players this turn.)
Comments
Fixed spelling error pointed out by Avalanche17
Using Enlightened by @Jarnefeldt
7/15, Half way there! (ok, a little less than half, but close enough)
Original: Erode (This deals damage to creatures in the form of erosion counters. It gains "At the beginning of your end step, if this creature has five or more erosion counters on it, sacrifice it.")
My version: Erode (This deals damage to creatures in the form of erosion counters. Whenever the fifth erosion counter is placed on a permanent, its controller sacrifices it.)
Thanks to @Memoryhead and @Kingtalk for helping out with balance!
I made a small edit to the mechanic, allowing it to be used by non-creature permanents.
(____) Slayer by Dechujoh64 & Lastjustice
Thank you Sammy for pointing out an error with the keywords.
By "Deadline: 10/19/19," do you mean the 19th is the last day to make entries, or the 18th is the last day and the 19th is when its cut off?
Fury (This spell costs {x} less to cast, where X is total amount of combat damage dealt to players this turn.)
One more to go
Slightly modified rules text for additional clarity, used without the keyword name.
Slayer
Used in unkeyworded form
Jump-Scare
Renamed “Reiterate” for more neutral flavor, added 'Exile up resolution' clause (like Flashback) to minimize repetitive gameplay.
Jump-Scare was edited to work with instants with less redundancy