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It's Not The Rules That Matter - It's the Flavour
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For the flavor text catergory:
For the top-down design category:
One of the cards I posted was Insomnia:
And yes! It is a lack of sleep, specifically a condition that makes it difficult/impossible for one to fall asleep, resulting in detrimental effects on their health.
I try to represent that in the card by making it so that whenever the creature would be tapped (i.e. when it would "rest"), it instead gets weaker and stays "awake" (untapped).
Hope this clears that up!
Greek Mythology Top Down, using throne of eldraine flavor
Google the name if unfamiliar with myth
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/orzhov-enforcer-3
- The artist is Ryan Barger and the art originates from a real MTG card, Knight of Obligation. It's also a knight that's related to the Orzhov, funnily enough. Try to credit artists whenever possible.
- You've misspelled Homunculus in the creature types.
- The card's effect is mono-white in color identity. Black's aspect of the color pie doesn't include applying mana taxes to others in any form. As a result, the use of hybrid mana is incorrect here, as it allows me to play a card in mono-black with abilities that it shouldn't have access to. A cost of {2}{W}{B} would be better.
Welp.
This isn't that suprising, as most of my other works are pretty darn trash. I'm just not that good at cardsmithing.
Sooo.... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯