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• MrRansom

  March 2015

  Here is one: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/spellbind-remorphist?list=user#.VQW-P9btMxA
  
  Can the wording be any more succinct?
• Corwinnn

  March 2015

  Succinct is a tremendous word in my book!
• Corwinnn

  March 2015 edited March 2015

  @MrRansom
  OMG that's too funny, I just used succinct, and then I came here to post a card!
• Looverse

  March 2015

  I feel like I may have worded this wrong. Any help. Original poster or otherwise.
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/death-pact-5?list=user#.VQdxI9LF-30
• theimmortaldeath

  March 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/deep-thought-manticore-2?list=user
• MrRansom

  March 2015

  This card needs some flavor text, I know that, but otherwise... Does it work?
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mad-mist?list=user#.VQ4QOoJdU8o
• MrRansom

  March 2015

  Wording help?
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/gift-of-yields?list=user#.VRDIXYJdU8o
  
  Thanks!
• Looverse

  March 2015

  Does this card even work?
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/agalope#.VRQmMvzF-30
• Odieville2

  April 2015

  Here.
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/student-rosalina?list=user#.VS7RAvYtHDc
• Damnation

  April 2015

  @Odieville2
  How does this need help with wording? It's just a blue 2/2 with haste for six. It's not that hard and is on the simple end of Simple-Confusing. Not even mythic rare.
• Odieville2

  April 2015

  @Damnation Thank you for helping. I should only lower the mana cost, though.
• Tomigon

  April 2015 edited April 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/zengaku-omniscience-1?list=user#.VTGtPUvY91M
  
  Name, ability, flavor text, I want you to check them everything. I'm not good at English.
• Maringam

  May 2015

  Ransom, sorry to be so late, but yeah, that works. (for both)
  Agalope, I have no idea, but I don't think so. Be more specific.
  Odie, It works, but it a pretty terrible card. 6 for a 2/2 haster? In blue? Nah.
  Tomigon, I like it. All good, pretty sweet all around.
• Corwinnn

  May 2015

  @Maringam
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/waking-nightmares?list=user#.VWcMj5VFCP8
• Maringam

  May 2015

  Enchantment-Aura
  Enchant creature
  Enchanted creature can't attack or block, and its activated abilities can't be activated.
  When Waking Nightmares enters the battlefield, return target creature you control from your graveyard to the battlefield. When that creature leaves play, sacrifice Waking Nightmares.
• Corwinnn

  May 2015

  @Maringam
  TYVM!
• Memnarchitect

  June 2015 edited June 2015

  @Maringam @Corwinnn
  
  Necro for small correction: Eliminate 'you control' from the second-to-last sentence. No player controls anything in any graveyard, and it already has to be from your graveyard.
  
  (I appologize if I'm over-stepping my boundaries.)
• Corwinnn

  June 2015

  @Memnarchitecht - Thanks!
• strongbelieves

  June 2015

  I'm also stickler about rules, wording and standardization. I check the wording of all of my cards against existing cards before making them, I check their effects against existing cards and sets and formats for balance purposes, I check MTG lore for flavor and inspiration, I even check what order the colored mana symbols appear in when there are multiple mana colors associated with a cost.
• Gandalf9010

  June 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/call-to-kin#.VYPFsxNViko
• CascadingCuccos

  June 2015

  I can't help but feel that the wording is way too long on this.
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/turn-to-darkness-1?list=user#.VYREAqZ33NU
• Tomigon

  June 2015

  I feel the text in "hunt" ability might be wrong..
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tessa-dawnray-archer-4?list=user#.VYs1A0vY9D0
• greenman

  June 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/garr-venow#.VY37tflVhVI
• Gafratt01

  June 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/magistrates-machinations ?
• Maringam

  September 2015

  Sorry about all that inactivity everyone!
  
  I AM BACK!!!
• Maringam

  September 2015

  OK: Everybody but @greenman, you're good to go.
  
  @greenman, you seem to be going for a Doranish ability, so probably use the wording:
  
  Each creature's base power becomes X, where X is its toughness.
  
  Each creature's base toughness becomes X, where X is its power.
• Corwinnn

  September 2015

  WELCOME BACK!
• ImBadAtBalancing

  September 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/set-aside-difference
  How about this? It might be off, but I'm not really sure where.
• MrRansom

  September 2015

  @Maringam, Good to have you with us once again!
• Latinas

  September 2015

  @Maringram
  Not so sure about this one.
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fatikus-blessing?list=user