To Become King

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  • Yall are blowing this chat up

  • Apologies, I guess I write too much.

    Also, I try not too.
  • np.
    Just saying, this went from 2 pages to 7
  • Ok, like Jonteman93 said, lets avoid unnecessary messages, okay?
  • Still, I think we should stop with the storytelling for a bit. Maybe pjbear did that intervention just to fix things up, hoping for us to stop. 

    Also it's kind of unfair towards the other contestants. It's like giving yourselves bonus points for the numerous stories, ya know?
  • And also yes, it's becoming a bit difficult to follow overall.
  • Yes, of course, my bad. I will refrain from writing until tomorrow.

  • Last card for the day.
  • @The-DM 1st thing, personally I want to make the cards for my characters, so if I could, thank you. Not you fault this time since I let you create the 3 brothers and didn't tell you otherwise. 2nd Somehow you completely nailed Ella's character, but with Zurel, he's a knight not a wizard. 

    I really need to elaborate more don't I?
  • Hm. I didn't expect a Knight. With his two uncles as wizrds, it just made sense. Ok, apologies. I will ask next time.
  • Also, you can continue story, just keep the off topic messages at the beginning or end of a story message, and try and compress multiple messages into one if possible. I just wanted to introduce some of the important characters with the intervention
  • All good, thanks for the effort though
  • Ok, here's my details and stuff: I'll keep it in one comment:

    Gender: Male
    Race: Human
    Occupation: Sultan, Mystic, Djinn-caller
    Age: 38
    Skills: Summoning genies, wind magic.
    Weaknesses: Absent-minded and naive.
    Traits: Mystical, airy.
     Alignment: Chaotic Good
     -
     "I see other people have arrived! I must not have noticed. Who are all of you then?"


    Gender: Male
     Race: Djinn
     Occupation: Vizier, politician, treasurer.
     Age: Unknown, possibly over 200.
     Skills: Mathematics, flight, intelligence.
     Weaknesses: Cares to much about money.
     Traits: Greedy, law-abiding yet scheming.
     Alignment: Lawful neutral/evil.
    -
     "Excuse my master. He is a bit absent minded. This is Abdiel of the Arid Desert. I am Tebdul, his Vizier."
  • "Pleased to meet you both. I am Amos Tai and my father is named Aios tai."
  • "A djinn!  And here I though you didn't leave your deserts.  The name is Derain, and it is a pleasure to meet one of your kind."  Another grin crosses the captains face, this one appearing less cruel than his others.
  • "I see, nice to meet you both. I am Harveth, and this is my advisor Adam. You kingdom is truly grand, I almost got lost coming here."
  • "Hello, my name is Janti. May we have a pleasant relationship."
    "I used to live in your kingdom.My name is Jazmyn."
  • Hey, can we have some more in depth bios for the siblings?
  • LordTachanka123 I'll get it out soon, I need to do it anyway. Thanks for reminding me
  • edited April 2020
    Zurel Orein
    Story Summary - Eldest child and son of King Leguin Orein. Raised in the castle by maids and his mother until she was assassinated. Trained with knights in the art of sword fighting. Sword into knighthood at the age of 16 after his mother was assassinated. Took the mantle of Tournament Host, to the dismay of the King's 3 brothers. He, along with 4 other became a council temporarily ruling Riyin until the tournament is completed.
    Gender - Male
    Race - Human
    Age - 25
    Hair Color - Blonde
    Occupation - Knight, Prince, Tournament Host
    Skills - Swordfighting, Charisma
    Weaknesses - Not Very Serious, Slightly Arrogant
    Elemental Sign - Air
    Alignment - Chaotic Good

    Elladora (Ella) Orein
    Story Summary - Eldest Daughter and third born child of King Leguin Orein. Raised in the castle by maids and her mother until she was assassinated. Studied in royal libraries, and occasionally joined Zurel in sword fighting. Become a high standing "maid" from age 13 to 17, while still studying. Studied air and mind magic from age 16 on. Assists her brother with his duties as a partial ruler and a tournament host.
    Gender - Female
    Age - 19
    Hair Color - Blonde
    Occupation - Princess, Advisor, Tournament Co-Host
    Skills - Minor Magic, Smart, Princess/Queenlike
    Weaknesses - Stern, Task First Attitude
    Elemental Sign - Air
    Alignment - Lawful Good

  • Elemental Signs will be explained once the tournament starts and it will be given to you.
  • Anyone else care to join before Sunday?
  • Is it fine if I use Ella for Janti's story?
  • I still have no idea what's going on.
  • First of all, are you giving the signs?
    Second of all, if your not, Janti should be fire.
  • LordTachanka123 You can use Ella for your story. But I am choosing the elemental signs.

    @KorandAngels It's more of just story going on. Janti and Amos got into a brawl and stuff happened, a few important characters were introduced and thats about it.
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