These "Generals" and the Sliver Lords are very different; not for power reasons, but for going against a format where the cards are fundamentally simple. All of the Sliver Lords are very simple, things like "All slivers have flanking" and "All slivers get +1/+1". Also compare to Elves: simplistic phrases such as ":T:: Target creature gets +X/+X, where X is the number of elves on the battlefield.". Pauper exists as a very uncomplex but synergistically interesting format, and one that tests deck building skills. That is the point of the format, not to be overly complex.
This is the same issue with Funny Mental Devourer; it feels like a rare in a Modern Horizons set, not a common.
The tribal support added doesn't feel Pauper and the spirit of the format. They feel apt at rare or at a high level of uncommon, and certainly not common. Most of the generals feel more complex than Pack Leader, a rare in m21.
Of course, since the set is already closed, I probably am not helping by pestering you over an already closed project, thus I'll leave it at that and not comment further. I wish you the best for taking this feedback on board, and what future projects you get up to.
Anyone who has any feedback can be done directly on the specific cards. Debate without problems and adjustments are being made gradually, just avoid making general criticisms "as the format values its simplicity"
The lands artist guide will be made later to focus on the next stage.
Stage Four
After some comments regarding the grammar and the artist's own mention on the card, the cards will pass for a new review, and with it will be changed some abilities as well.
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Comments
These "Generals" and the Sliver Lords are very different; not for power reasons, but for going against a format where the cards are fundamentally simple. All of the Sliver Lords are very simple, things like "All slivers have flanking" and "All slivers get +1/+1". Also compare to Elves: simplistic phrases such as ":T:: Target creature gets +X/+X, where X is the number of elves on the battlefield.". Pauper exists as a very uncomplex but synergistically interesting format, and one that tests deck building skills. That is the point of the format, not to be overly complex.
This is the same issue with Funny Mental Devourer; it feels like a rare in a Modern Horizons set, not a common.
The tribal support added doesn't feel Pauper and the spirit of the format. They feel apt at rare or at a high level of uncommon, and certainly not common. Most of the generals feel more complex than Pack Leader, a rare in m21.
Of course, since the set is already closed, I probably am not helping by pestering you over an already closed project, thus I'll leave it at that and not comment further. I wish you the best for taking this feedback on board, and what future projects you get up to.
Stage Four
After some comments regarding the grammar and the artist's own mention on the card, the cards will pass for a new review, and with it will be changed some abilities as well.
Colorless
1. Ariela, Fauna Spiritual Lover by Thomas Chamberlain - Keen
2. Immortal First Experiment by Xiao Botong
3. Karionthe, Soul Devastator by Josh Calloway
4. Landless Devastator by Ignacio Bazan Lazcano
5. Nina, Queen of Flames by Oliver Wetter
White
6. Archangel of the Clearest Days by Kyle Pearson
7. Archangel Toolmaker by Fajareka Setiawan
8. Astral Devotee Sorceress by Maria Trepalina
9. Auratog by Jeff Miracola
10. Barbara, Rune Enthusiast by Tatiana Vetrova
11. Battle of Infantry by Wenjun Lin
12. Benevolent Warrior by Billy Christian
13. Bewitched Claws by Rudy Siswanto
14. Blades of Dawn Freshness by Sean "Raiko" Tay
15. Circle Protection: Enchantment by Manuel Castañon
16. Conclave of Strategies by Klaus Wittmann
17. Delver of Runes by Anthony Guebels
18. Eternal Hope Priest by Lineage (game)
19. Fury of Angels by Joseph C-Knight
20. Goldsun Redeemer by Trefle-Rouge
21. Journey to Unknown by Sandara
22. Last Breath of Life by Viktoria Gavrilenko
23. Life Beyond the Spirits by Davide Brusa
24. Lived Spell by Dan Scott
25. Luminous Geist by Tsabo6
26. Mutual Redemption by Kim Sokol
27. Non-Folding Blades by Rayden Chen
28. Provider of the Inevitable War by Sebastien Grenier
29. Resale of Runes by Sandara
30. Selfless Savior by Ralph Horsley
31. Standard Bearer by Justin Usher
32. Winged Warrior by PetraImboden
Blue
33. Advanced Dominator Djinn by Kyle "Punk Art" Herring
34. Advanced Magic Master by Billy Christian
35. Balduvian Conjurer by Marta Nael
36. Boreal Mentalist by Madalyn Katzer
37. Cold Learning by dleoblack
38. Cystalline Elemental by Igor Kieryluk
39. Defender of the Frozen Trails by BattleGuyArtGamer
40. Denk. the Rector Canticle by League of Legends (game)
41. Desperate Barrier by tjota
42. Dissipation of Memories by Christine Mitzuk
43. Drafna's Restoration by Stas Yurev
44. Faerie Illusionist by Carlos Justino
45. First Flame Apprentice by Emiliano Cordoba
46. Floating Anesthesia by Yongsub Noh
47. Hieroglyphics Scholar by ekoputeh
48. Knower of Millennial Trees by Tan Bui
49. Manifestation of Pure Waters by merillizaART
50. Mind Exploration by akreon
51. Never More by 88grzes
52. Perception of Void by Shaun Jona
53. Priest of Animal Summons by Greg Rutkowski
54. Rebel Union Shinobi by toni infante
55. Royal Rebel Strategist by Russell Dongjun Lu
56. Sage's Dousing by Richard Sardinha
57. Stealing Witchcraft by Elvira Shatunova
58. Unilateral Alley by Katarzyna-Kmiecik
59. Water Titan by haryarti
Black
60. Black Market by RalphHorsley
61. Bone Picker by Yeong-Hao Han
62. Butcher Pangolin by Yiming Nie
63. Catacomb of Sorcerer's School by Kim Sung Hwan
64. Conqueror of the Forest by Judas chaban
65. Desperate Geist by Sidharth Chaturvedi
66. Forest Renegade by Michael Chang
67. Hira, Spirit Shaper by Nikita Kapitunov
68. Hound Watching Souls by Tim Guo
69. Intolerant Angel by Jason Nguyen
70. Late Blood Notes by Craig Morrison
71. Night Blade Warrior by Gerald Parel
72. Oubliette by Jim Pavelec
73. Ponder the Soul by Natalia Romero Núñez
74. Purgatory Angel by Donna Mae Dingding
75. Return of the Soul Gods by AnatoFinnstark
76. Sacrifice Beyond the Limits by Hanna Hetmanchuk
77. Seeker of the Dark Way by Marishka Kleyman
78. Self Destruction by David Astruga
79. Shadow Mercenary by Kyle Herring
80. Shadow of Desert by Grzegorz Rutkowski
81. Sign in Soul by FFVII (game)
82. Soul Disappearance by Lucas Leger
83. Soul Stalker by Diana Franco
84. Stalker Night by Bastien Lecouffe Deharme
85. Toxic Leopards by dleoblack
86. Ultimate Price by Karl Kopinski
Red
87. Abrade by Florian de Gesincourt
88. Angel of the Flaming Sword by Wallpapersfan
89. Ardent Goblin Instigator by Andrei Pervukhin
90. Bastion of the Many by Simon Bradley James
91. Birds of the Desert Paradise by Justin Conway
92. Cold Front Warrior by Greg Rutkowski
93. Euphoric Tavern by Antonio J. Manzanedo
94. Expansion Summon by Cobaltplasma
95. Final Sacrifice by James Strehle
96. Flame Mitigator by Tomasz Chistowski
97. Forest Fury Predator by Oliver Liu
98. Fragment Elemental by Rio Sabda
99. General of the Rebel Infantry by Steve Argyle
100. Immortal Abomination by Sekiro: Shadows Die Twice (game)
101. Inherent in Fire by Tiziana Federica
102. Kinka, the Inspiring Dwarf by robrey
103. Lightning Distributor Conduit by Musegames
104. Lizrock Desert Survivor by Filipe Pagliuso
105. Long Flame Hair Dancer by Breath-art
106. Rising Geist by Pavel Kolomeyets
107. Rouse Thoughts in Flames by Charro-art
108. Snow Run by Joakim Ericsson
109. Snow Tribe Air Force by Sansla Libor
110. Spark Devil by dleoblack
111. Typhoon Sand by Esger van der Post
112. Volcanic Axe Warrior by angel5art
113. Volcanic Earthquake by SWD3E2
Green
114. Angel of Animal Ancestrality by Sandara
115. Atento Collector by Alvaro Ramirez
116. Beast Trainers by Targete
117. Driven Nature by Anton Zemskov
118. Ent of the Elementals by Svetlin Velinov
119. Forest Intervention by Hangyo Jung
120. Forest Playful by Álvaro Calvo Escudero
121. Gaea's Touch by Gonzalo Kenny
122. Gorilla Healer of the Tribe by Mex Us
123. Growth of Oasis by Pyro Helfier
124. Katiar, the Charming Elf by Woo Chul Lee
125. Nature Minimalist by Mike Azevedo
126. Paradise Garden by James Strehle
127. Perspicacious Ape by Alvaro Ramirez
128. Poison Hemlock Alpha by Piotr Arendzikowski
129. Quest for the Strange Cocoon by yakonusuke
130. Quirion Ranger by Tyler edlin
131. Restore Trust by Artfall
132. Small Intimidating Threat by concept-creature
133. Spear Sovereign by Dong Bingyan
134. Strangleroot Geist by Jason Chan
135. Supernatural Form by machinegames
136. Swampy on the Prowl by Donato Giancola
137. Troll Charms Wild by Volander
138. Unexpected Truce by dleoblack
139. Unsuccessful Ambush by Raph Herrera Lomotan
140. Wurm Driven by Sands by Antonis Papantoniou
Gold
141. Adept of Spears and Spells by Tumo Mere
142. Announcer of Thousand Lives by Alexander Nanitchkov
143. Bad Omens Village by RhysGriffiths
144. Black Forest Apprentice by Dao Trong Le
145. Disciple of Intermediate Spell by Clint Cearley
146. Domesticated Feathered by ancarie-bluewolf
147. Enchantment Inquisitor by Kim Sung Hwan
148. Familiar of Rejected Souls by avvart
149. Familiar of Rustic Studies by andreiaugrai
150. Fearless Desert Warrior by Jessica Oyhenart
151. Forest Magic Apprentice by Brandon Dunn
152. Funny Mental Devourer by LJean
153. General Free Spirit by sakimichan
154. General of Angelic Kingdoms by janaschi
155. General of Angelic Rebels by Jie He
156. General of the First Lineage by BillingslyN
157. General of the Lance Infantry by Zack Cy
158. General of the Simian Tribe by hall Hsu
159. General of the Wizard Guild by Geoffryn
160. Golem Shifter Sands by Marcos Poncio
161. Hellfrenzy Elemental Dragon by Fabio Rodrigues
162. Incarnation of Locking Ness by JuanFra MB
163. Long-Tailed Rebel by Bogdan Tauciuc
164. Malicious Advice by Bayard Wu
165. Modeling of the Night by Jeffrey Smith
167. Pacific Lancer by Tiago da Silva
168. Prodigy of the Mists by Einar Martinsen
169. Stone Carved in Lava by Marco Espinosa
170. Storm Elementals by Jonas De Ro
171. Supreme Ambush by OmenD4
172. Suspicious Puppy by jxkingdom
173. Vanquisher of Generals by Stormfall: Age Of War (game)
174. Welcome to Infantry Post by SIXMOREVODKA STUDIO
175. Worshiper of the Sands by Jun Wei
You seem to have a lot of time on your hands.
Hybrid
176. Adept of Elemental Spells by Mikhail Palamarchuk
177. Angelic Protected by Svetlana Tigai
178. Demystify Nature by Greg Zdunek
179. Desert Warrior Manifestation by Hamsterfly
180. Dispute Between Two Worlds by Sergio Roman
181. Midnight Predator by SheltieWolf
182. Seraph Between Worlds by Rossdraws
183. Simian Refuge Sentinel by Simon Dominic Brewer
I don't know what you mean by that, but I would say organized would be the right word.
If it was to offend, it didn't offend me.
It was not meant to offend. I am amazed by that fact.
Artifact
184. Axe of the Blue Snowfall by Lewis Hewison
185. Blacksmith Inn by Chivy
186. Blades Beyond Peace by Preston Stone
187. Carriage Plains Elementals by Ruan-jia
188. Dam Metallic Hawk by Marius Millar
189. Disoriented Golem by Veli Nyström
190. Golem of Past Generations by Olivier Raymond
191. Grisp of Unnatural Beauty by Ian Llanas
192. Guardian of the Ice Pinacle by Paul Canavan
193. Heart of Heaven by Tom Bagshaw
194. Holy Spear by Yu-Han Chen
195. Last Pinacle of Ice by ESPj-o
196. Last Tome of the Desert by Ivan Sevic
197. Mystic Sword by SIXMOREVODKA
198. Shuko by Tim Hildebrandt
199. Sword of the Pure by Christopher Scoles
200. Wizard's Construct by Pablo Dominguez
Artists' Guide (Stage Four)
Lands - (1/2)
201. Ketria Outgrowth by Tyler Smith
202. Raugrin Coast by Klaus Pillon
203. Zagoth Wetland by kisoo lee
204. Savai Canyon by Max Schiller
205. Indatha Lowland by irfan cg
206. Plains to Dominate by Katy Grierson
207. Island to Dominate by Ausonia 23
208. Swamp to Dominate by David Paget
209. Mountain to Dominate by Lorenzo Lanfranconi
210. Forest to Dominate by Svetlin Velinov
211. Primitive Refuge by Martin Deschambault
212. Untouchable Plains by George Johnstone
213. Colored Saline by John Wallin Liberto
214. Forest Tabernacle by Vladimir Manyukhin
215. Fresh Air Retreat by David Revoy
216. Cold Stone Path by Tomas Honz
217. Frozen Volcano Inactive by Leo Xiong
218. Wintry Cemetery by Andres Rios
219. Slippery Ice Rise by Jacek Ogonowski
220. Frozen Lake by Clyde Cabiedes
221. Condensed Vacuum by Piotr Dura
222. Unknown Identity by mrainbowwj
223. Awakened Wastes by Robin Chyo
224. Snow-Covered Wastes by Raphaelle Deslandes
225. Desert-Covered Wastes by jason scheier
Artists' Guide (Stage Four)
Lands - (2/2)
226. Peace Identity by Amanda Assumpção
227. Appraisal Identity by Milan Vasek
228. Chaos Identity by yang qi917
229. Passion Identity by Florian Herold
230. Nature Identity by Sylvain Sarrailh
231. Awakened Valley by James Barrow
231. Hillside Awakens by Reiko Groß
233. Mangrove Awakened by Roman Tishenin
234. Awakened Cliff by Michael Bakker
235. Awakened Grove by Wlad Salzer
236. Desert-Covered Plains by Robert Berg
237. Desert-Covered Island by Slawek Fedorczuk
238. Desert-Covered Swamp by Tris Baybayan
239. Desert-Covered Mountain by Kan Liu
240. Desert-Covered Forest by Jeff Bartzis
242. Strategic Infantry Post by Ding Xiong Leong
243. Simian Advanced Refuge by Avant Choi
244. Sorcerers School Plateau by Arson Liu
245. Mountain Temple of Elements by Artur Gurin
246. Lighted Lawns by Gene Raz von Edler
247. Secret Hot Springs by Dasom Hyun
248. Cave of Rotten Runes by John Wallin Liberto
249. Ethereal Air Mountains by Martin Teichmann
250. Roots of Seasonal Ambar by Geoffrey Ernault
Promo Cards (12 cards)
1. Ariela, Fauna Spiritual Lover PROMO by Andrew Theophilopoulos
3. Karionthe, Soul Devastator PROMO by Viktor Titov
5. Nina, Queen of Flames PROMO by 라이트박스 LightBox
14. Blades of Dawn Freshness PROMO by Patrycja Wójcik
24. Lived Spell PROMO by Rogier van de Beek
40. Denk, the Rector Canticle PROMO by Livia Prima
79. Shadow Mercenary PROMO by Bayard Wu
88. Angel of the Flaming Sword PROMO by Kim Sokol
124. Katiar, the Charming Elf PROMO by DonatoArts
151. Forest Magic Apprentice PROMO by Tatiana Hordiienko
158. General of the Simian Tribe PROMO by jeremy chong
188. Dam Metallic Hawk PROMO by Thibault Girard
Master Set with 250 cards. Make Pauper greater and stronger. And new mechanics like Trade, General, Bard and Soul Guide.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/CassZero/sets/55407
Pauper Collection Tokens - Master Set (21 card)
All tonkes create from cards of the Pauper Collection.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/CassZero/sets/53009
Pauper Collection Promo Arts - Master Set (12 card)
Alternative art of some cards.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/CassZero/sets/53591
Pauper Collection Lands - Master Set (50 card)
Only a separate tab from the main collection (these are included in the 250 cards.)
https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/CassZero/sets/53153
Downgrade
9. Auratog by Jeff Miracola
30. Selfless Savior by Ralph Horsley
35. Balduvian Conjurer by Marta Nael
56. Sage's Dousing by Richard Sardinha
61. Bone Picker by Yeong-Hao Han
86. Ultimate Price by Karl Kopinski
87. Abrade by Florian de Gesincourt
134. Strangleroot Geist by Jason Chan
198. Shuko by Tim Hildebrandt
Reprints
31. Standard Bearer by Justin Usher
43. Drafna's Restoration by Stas Yurev
72. Oubliette by Jim Pavelec
121. Gaea's Touch by Gonzalo Kenny
130. Quirion Ranger by Tyler edlin