@LordTachanka123 I don't understand what you mean by "photoshop some kor line slingers together". Can you explain it in other words?
@KorandAngels The last ability makes it too good. Think about a 4 mana sorcery that puts out four 2/2 tokens. That's already unrealistically powerful. I would probably change it to "-6: Manifest the top four cards of your library." You don't need to put my name in the artist box btw.
@MonkeyPirate2002 That would be difficult for these reason- There are so many things in that art. Art style is different. Direction of lights are different.
@MonkeyPirate2002 Like I said, the art is already full of things. If more information are added, I think it will ruin the art. Those backgrounds will make the character's shapes difficult to tell.
See? I think the choice would be either making the background super dark or bright. The artist didn't choose black background for no reason.
Went through a lot of stages, but kept the flying theme(Okay she started off with three themes, which really wasn't good. It was flying, gideon-warrior effect, and artifacts. she then went to lands and flying, but with the current +1, so really just lands. Then she became a flying commander.)
@LordTachanka123 The 2nd ability is interesting! I don't know how the first ability work though. So if you activated the +1, she gets the Landfall ability temporary?
@Ranshi I like the uniqueness, but I think there are more useful cards that do the similar thing with simpler wording, like Snapcaster Mage, Finale of Promise. But not all cards need to be so powerful/useful. It make me want to try some tricky wording, like adding the exiled card's effects to the copies(like Splice), or switching text boxes(no precedent for this). I don't know, your wording may be clearer and shorter. My brain needs some rest.
I was wondering if you could add a background to this image, like maybe a desecrated battlefield if that works? This might have the same problem as the previous image I posted.
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I think +1 ability can also say "Manifest a card from your hand."
Thanks for the help and also the art.
"Your opponensts" can also become "opponents"
Again, this is really cool!
It really just has to look different than the official artwork.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/complete/full/2020/9/29/1601426400611220.png
Ching Yeh; CW: Body Horror
Caelan Stokkermans
It's okay if the scale at the bottom doesn't appear in the image if it makes the overall picture look better.
@LordTachanka123 4th image doesn't show up.
I don't understand what you mean by "photoshop some kor line slingers together". Can you explain it in other words?
@KorandAngels
The last ability makes it too good. Think about a 4 mana sorcery that puts out four 2/2 tokens. That's already unrealistically powerful. I would probably change it to "-6: Manifest the top four cards of your library."
You don't need to put my name in the artist box btw.
That would be difficult for these reason-
There are so many things in that art.
Art style is different.
Direction of lights are different.
But I can do this:
If you do plan on using one of these backgrounds, I would like it if the moon was set to a similarish color.
Like I said, the art is already full of things. If more information are added, I think it will ruin the art.
Those backgrounds will make the character's shapes difficult to tell.
See?
I think the choice would be either making the background super dark or bright.
The artist didn't choose black background for no reason.
I think I can turn any characters into Kors, as long as they don't have dark skin and hair.
Before:
https://www.deviantart.com/crystalgrazianoart/art/Rogue-420311599
Already tried that but it didn't look good. But I might try that again later.
https://www.deviantart.com/jackal0ftrades/art/Water-Elemental-273684219
Background that I used: https://www.deviantart.com/erikshoemaker/art/Barlangis-II-501422432
You don't need my permission to use art I post here. You don't need to put my name in the artist box too
Went through a lot of stages, but kept the flying theme(Okay she started off with three themes, which really wasn't good. It was flying, gideon-warrior effect, and artifacts. she then went to lands and flying, but with the current +1, so really just lands. Then she became a flying commander.)
The 2nd ability is interesting! I don't know how the first ability work though. So if you activated the +1, she gets the Landfall ability temporary?
Umm...yeah, let's go with the temporary. Till end of turn. Also so she can have loyalty gain.
I like the uniqueness, but I think there are more useful cards that do the similar thing with simpler wording, like Snapcaster Mage, Finale of Promise. But not all cards need to be so powerful/useful.
It make me want to try some tricky wording, like adding the exiled card's effects to the copies(like Splice), or switching text boxes(no precedent for this). I don't know, your wording may be clearer and shorter. My brain needs some rest.
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/18nNKL
I was wondering if you could add a background to this image, like maybe a desecrated battlefield if that works? This might have the same problem as the previous image I posted.
Art is by Ching Yeh