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  • Red_TowerRed_Tower
    Slightly bummed to have to wait an extra day, but gives me time to write my "invitation received" segment haha. I'm really excited to start interacting with some of the other characters, too. A super interesting 'dramatis personae' if you will.
  • WarriorCatInAhatWarriorCatInAhat
    yeah
  • ChoyBoiChoyBoi
    Would anyone like to be my friend?
  • WarriorCatInAhatWarriorCatInAhat
    sure
    mostly because I have no soul for you to steal but sure
  • SpellPiper2213SpellPiper2213
    I'd be okay with that
  • TheDukeOfPorkTheDukeOfPork
    Super bummed not to make it in, but maybe next time. :)
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    surely @TheDukeOfPork I hope you stick around.
  • SpellPiper2213SpellPiper2213
    Same here
  • UsaernameUsaername
    edited March 2021
    @Tonysparks really digging your story segment! I have two things I'd like to touch on, though. Firstly, Arn refers to Imilia as being from the consul of Baltenainne. This is incorrect, as she is the consul representing the school of Baltenainne. So not very big, but still useful clarification. And secondly, even if you don't do any writing for Imilia herself, I'd still appreciate it if you talked to me about what your plans are. As an example, your story completely retcons an interaction that happened, which directly goes against what I had planned for that story segment. Say for example, I had future plans for the messenger, then your retconning throws things out of wack. Now, luckily, I decided against having the messenger as a more important character, and I think the idea of it being Arn is very cool, but again, please consult me in the future. 

    Same goes for everyone, which is why I'm posting it here. I'd be happy for you all to use Imilia, but she's hard to write and has rather specific goals, so please consult with me. Also try to avoid retcons like that. Just some general advice from a second-time rodeo goer. Cheers.
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    Apologies in advance and I'll fix that
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    edited March 2021
    I can remove that seg if you want 
  • UsaernameUsaername
    no no goodness no I love it, please keep it. Just some notes for the future is all
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    Yea sorry again for the lack of notice
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    edited March 2021
    I made the corrections to representative. Again if you really needed that character I'm open to removing that segment. That part was just Arn fooling around not a chapter.

    Your messenger looked the least connected to your story other than Sturgar's and he had the perfect plot hook, that's why I choose it. Other than that I am open to some corrections if I butchered your character.
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    Darn I actually feel so bad about it haha I was really trying as much as possible to avoid interfering with other people's story will building on the lore.

    I'm going to leave the app for a while and watch some YouTube or something stupid :D
  • UsaernameUsaername
    nah dude trust me you pulled it off really well actually! I didn't need the messenger at all, so you're good
  • ChoyBoiChoyBoi
    Nooooooo I forgot to post my story. and write it too
  • WarriorCatInAhatWarriorCatInAhat
    edited March 2021
    anyone wanna have their character interact with mine
    I'm writing a lore/story thing
  • ChoyBoiChoyBoi
    Sure @WarriorCatInAhat

  • CassZeroCassZero
    I made a topic just to not get lost in my character's story. If I marked someone there it was by mistake. Thanks.  :)
  • WarriorCatInAhatWarriorCatInAhat
    @ChoyBoi
    okay how
  • ChoyBoiChoyBoi
    Just write me in @WarriorCatInAhat

  • WarriorCatInAhatWarriorCatInAhat
    okay but
    how?
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    Like what I did with Imilia
  • WarriorCatInAhatWarriorCatInAhat
    edited March 2021
    yes but
    H
    O
    W
    like what do you want me to do w/ your character
  • ChoyBoiChoyBoi
    Ig say hi or smth
  • UsaernameUsaername
    @ChoyBoi @WarriorCatInAhat I think it'd be better for this to continue in direct messages, but I'll ad my two cents and add some advice to people which is that when writing others' characters, if you're unsure of exactly how to do it, try to narrow down their most forefront trait and use that. for Conscience, it seems to me to be her rich-girl superiority complex.
  • ChoyBoiChoyBoi
    At last!! Someone understands her
  • UsaernameUsaername
    I'm excited for if/when she and Imilia meet. They're pretty similar, but also very different 
  • TonysparksTonysparks
    I can see the similarities. ^
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