It's a lot slower that way @Tonysparks Also, @TenebrisNemo when we do have fights, I'd like it if you wouldn't mind having Kaigan offer handshakes before the match with "good luck" and afterwards offer a hand up to his opponent if he wins or a hearty "good match" if he loses.
I'm sure you all noticed that Arn's character is sadistic in nature unless he is pissed then he becomes a full psycho. So whether he lets you live or not is random.
@ChoyBoi in that vein, no one knows of Imilia's necrometry. Also, wouldn't Imilia know about Conscience's magic, given that she tested her with it? Also Arvell didn't make the cut
@ChoyBoi seems like kind of a stretch to me. Even if Tresa did have similar abilities (which she hasn't demonstrated) she would have no way of knowing that Imilia practices it. Necrometry is a rather taboo magic form, and only Imilia has figured out about using a marionette as a focus
I like your story but I'm a little offended about how Hadid was more guarded than Arn ( a cunning prankster who has lived for centuries, who is a master at hunting and covering his tracks but ill chuck that up to Arn being overwhelmed with bloodlust.)
@Tonysparks with all due respect, when you make your character a pseudo-immortal quasi-god with a seemingly unreadable persona, you're going to have to take a few concessions
@ChoyBoi I don't want to police your story, but ngl it feels a little cheap. Imilia would have mental defenses similar to Hadid's, and while albeit not as powerful, she would definitely be able to detect anything crawling around in her mind, and make sure to strengthen her defenses. Having a side character who's entire ability set is 'there are no secrets' really removes a lot of possible storytelling possibilities.
@Usaername you are right, but that's the point of Arn, to be chaotic. He can't be sorted into piles or put in order, because order is the opposite of chaos. Arn might be evil at times and at times chaotic weather it be for better or worse.
If you don't mind since you are editing. Please make Arn look less stupid. Maybe hint at him sensing something is off but ignoring it due to his craving for violence.
@Tonysparks keep in mind that @ChoyBoi is writing from the point of view of a character. It's subjective, not objective, so Tresa thinking Arn is stupid shouldn't be that much of a problem
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Also, @TenebrisNemo when we do have fights, I'd like it if you wouldn't mind having Kaigan offer handshakes before the match with "good luck" and afterwards offer a hand up to his opponent if he wins or a hearty "good match" if he loses.
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seems I have to explain. Tresa has shadow magic, a part of it that allows movement between shadows and seeking information in minds.
Mental defenses.
Fair. I'll edit.