Help- Need Commander Feedback!

GelectrodeGelectrode
in Custom Card Discussion
Hello everyone, I just finished a cycle for a possible 2016 Commander list.

http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/Gelectrode/sets/5050

Because I don't know if they are balanced or not, I would like feedback for them. As a prompt, for each person who gives feedback on one of my commanders, I will give feedback on up to two commanders of your choice and could possibly favorite one or both of them.
Thank you for looking at my plea for help!

Comments

  • L0NEvvolfL0NEvvolf
    edited December 2015
    Done, feel free to browse my cards and comment. I have a few commanders lurking throughout.
  • Suicidal_DeitySuicidal_Deity
    Tossed a couple comments on yo' cawds. Not all... I apologize.
  • fabiocbinbutterfabiocbinbutter
    The adversary mechanic is great for commander. However, I am a big proponent of not making your really cool cards be "dead" in regular deckbuilding situations. If it were up to me, I would reword the ability to just be based on having a legendary creature, and not a commander. (I know that some will disagree, but anyway that's my opinion)
  • GelectrodeGelectrode
    Okay- just got some time to throw back some feedback
    @Suicidal-Deity's Lady of the Roil
    http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lady-of-the-roil?list=user

    Other than the minor grammar issue (you should have capitalized "shuffle" and "sacrifice"), I thought that it was a very cool card. I appreciated the concept of getting rid of lands you controlled for greater power. If this was a real card, I would have wanted to play it as a commander. One small thing that bothered me was that it was 5cmc, which I thought was too expensive for its abilities.
    Other than two minor things, I give the card 8/10.
  • GelectrodeGelectrode
    @L0NEvvolf's Onx, Oracle to the Infinite
    http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/onx-oracle-to-the-infinite

    I thought this card was very well done and would be very useful in many circumstances. Not only does it rob your opponent of any advantage they would be getting, it enables you to steal the advantage itself! And even better: IT"S INSTANT SPEED! You can also "steal" attacking creatures during combat by blocking it with Onx.
    There is only one minor grammar issue in the card: instead of "{x}: Play the top card of target opponents library with converted mana cost X or less," it should be "{x}: YOu may cast the top card of target opponent's library with converted mana cost X without paying its mana cost."
    Overall, I give it 9/10.
  • GelectrodeGelectrode
    @fabiobinbuter- I agree with you, maybe it should be Legendary creature instead of Commander. However, the set is centered on the format Commander, so it would make sense if it was focused on other Commanders. Maybe I could reword them for a set focused on Legendary creatures so it would be more useful...
  • ChaseTheHumanChaseTheHuman
    edited December 2015
    The green one and the black are my favorites,the others aren't worth the cost/Setback.
    But the 3 cost green ones Draw a card is to good for green... Unless you have a green requirement like ferocious. The scry part is OK but not green feeling enough cost wise.
  • Sorins_ThirstSorins_Thirst
    Commented a bit
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