@Faiths_Guide I stand corrected, after digging a bit in the rules. Still think it should be more clear you refer to the last chosen name, for the sake of clarity
Herald of Pride. It was my previously most faved card and I am really proud of it bc, I think it is one of the only cards to make good use of stagnant/second/last strike. (Most people used that effect to make sense of the user made “triple strike” effect) https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/herald-of-pride
@RuneMesa Wow, that's a lot of words! But I think it's a fun card. I think that card can use Gold token or Treasure token.
My wording suggestions for that triggered ability: "Whenever Ool Ashha deals combat damage to an opponent, that player may create up to four colorless Treasure artifact tokens with "{t}, Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." Then you may have that player gain control of X Soldier creature tokens you control. If you do, you gain control of target permanent that player controls with converted mana cost X plus four."
@Scott_Anderson I love the art! I think that card would be fine in mono blue. It's a powerful card. I think it's safe if it is {3}{u}.
@Ranshi922 I think creature type should be Avatar or Incarnation If it's an Angel, I think it should have flying. Last strike is real keyword now, I guess. If you see the reminder of Triple strike, it says Triple strike (This creature deals first-strike, regular, and last-strike combat damage.) But this mechanic is from Un-set. Also I think the triggered ability should say "until _____" or use counters. Otherwise it causes memory issues.
If I would fix the card, --------- Herald of Pride {3}{r}{w}, Creature - Angel Avatar, Rare Flying, last strike Whenever Herald of Pride is dealt damage, it gets +X/+0 until the end of your next combat step, where X is equal to that damage. [2/5] --------- It's a weak card though, compared to Baneslayer Angel.
@Tomigon, thx for the feedback. I am going to lower the cost so that it isnt weak compared to baneslayer, so it is very good for a rare. Also I am not going to make it an avatar as it- nevermind I will make it an avatar. I also meant to give it flying but completely forgot to.
@Tomigon, thank you for the feedback. Do you think I should just scrap the whole soldier token thing entirely? I like the idea of giving them treasure tokens, it doesn't empty as steps and phases end but it can still be destroyed by artifact removal which is nice. But I'm not sure if I should put a CMC limit on what Ool Ashha can take to your side of the field if I take away the soldiers.
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It would probably be rare, but maybe if it's a triggered ability that triggers whenever you name a card, it would be a fun build around me card haha
Thanks for the input. Formatting is the same as here.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/phoenix-winds-1
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/worlds-beyond-ken
Is this wording okay?
Thoughts?
@TheCenterOfTheUniverse: I think it should be dealing with exiled cards in general?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ool-ashha-merchant-king-3
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/herald-of-pride
Wow, that's a lot of words! But I think it's a fun card.
I think that card can use Gold token or Treasure token.
My wording suggestions for that triggered ability:
"Whenever Ool Ashha deals combat damage to an opponent, that player may create up to four colorless Treasure artifact tokens with "{t}, Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." Then you may have that player gain control of X Soldier creature tokens you control. If you do, you gain control of target permanent that player controls with converted mana cost X plus four."
@Scott_Anderson
I love the art! I think that card would be fine in mono blue. It's a powerful card. I think it's safe if it is {3}{u}.
@Ranshi922
I think creature type should be Avatar or Incarnation
If it's an Angel, I think it should have flying.
Last strike is real keyword now, I guess. If you see the reminder of Triple strike, it says Triple strike (This creature deals first-strike, regular, and last-strike combat damage.) But this mechanic is from Un-set.
Also I think the triggered ability should say "until _____" or use counters. Otherwise it causes memory issues.
If I would fix the card,
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Herald of Pride {3}{r}{w}, Creature - Angel Avatar, Rare
Flying, last strike
Whenever Herald of Pride is dealt damage, it gets +X/+0 until the end of your next combat step, where X is equal to that damage.
[2/5]
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It's a weak card though, compared to Baneslayer Angel.
I also meant to give it flying but completely forgot to.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/midnight-edict
Thoughts? Also, do you know if someone has done something similar to Mystify? Or has a better name, for that matter XD
Plz like this, I spent a long while mulling over the idea in my head and I am really proud of it!
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/allodoxaphobia-1
...but not as much as this card! Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lakki-tin-street-firebrand
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flame-weaver
Thoughts?
On Thornwood Beauty, it seems far too strong, especially in commander. Maybe I'm wrong? It feels just... way too strong
On Flame Weaver, that's a very strong effect. What if he's Legendary, and he has to deal combat damage to a player to achieve the effect?
How about this:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/revi-flame-reader