I was thinking about that, but then it would be strictly worse than Maelstrom Pulse and Utter End. Maybe 3 would work? That way it's still worse than Pulse, but it is an uncommon.
@Gelectrode For the instant speed, definitely at 3 mana. However, that means you can just cast it during their end step or after they're tapped out, and it's a really good removal spell.
As for the flavor text, that is true; maybe if it instead talked somehow about the cycle of life and death?
For Gluppa, is it meant to bend Black-Bordered rules by having two creatures the same player controls block or be blocked by each other? If not, either have it only exile creatures you control or "return the creature under your control" (Though that would obviously be more powerful)
Also, a syntax note: "her" has only ever been used for planeswalkers (Origins Nissa & Liliana as well as Liliana's Defeat), so maybe change it to "its" (This notes depends on if you want to follow WOTC's rules to the letter)
@DoctorFro, watch your grammar. There should be a comma after "dies," "a period after {1}, a comma after "do," and a comma after "token." But I like the weird flavor of it:
MAYOR: Not again! Another elitist died! Detective, can you figure this out?
RATHAD: I shall certainly...investigate the matters.
MAYOR: Very good! Wait, why is there a glowing red letter on my forehead?
Search you library for a creature card with lower power and toughness than that creature, reveal it, and put it in your hand. Then shuffle your library.
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...thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/gluppa-the-lily-livered
For the instant speed, definitely at 3 mana. However, that means you can just cast it during their end step or after they're tapped out, and it's a really good removal spell.
As for the flavor text, that is true; maybe if it instead talked somehow about the cycle of life and death?
For Gluppa, is it meant to bend Black-Bordered rules by having two creatures the same player controls block or be blocked by each other? If not, either have it only exile creatures you control or "return the creature under your control" (Though that would obviously be more powerful)
Also, a syntax note: "her" has only ever been used for planeswalkers (Origins Nissa & Liliana as well as Liliana's Defeat), so maybe change it to "its" (This notes depends on if you want to follow WOTC's rules to the letter)
Commented on Gluppa.
Any thoughts on my Earthshaker?
For those unfortunate souls who don't know, it's from Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/angel-humanitys-pride?list=user
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/priest-of-the-eternal-dusk
edits have been made to Rathad
MAYOR: Not again! Another elitist died! Detective, can you figure this out?
RATHAD: I shall certainly...investigate the matters.
MAYOR: Very good! Wait, why is there a glowing red letter on my forehead?
RATHAD: I...don't have a clue, Mr. Mayor.
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/gix-the-visionary
Gix makes very happy...as a commander player I approve this message!
...and Clan watermarks too!
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rogue-ascetic
A pair
How would I word this so that it says less power and less toughness
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Search you library for a creature card with lower power and toughness than that creature, reveal it, and put it in your hand. Then shuffle your library.
Thoughts @Faiths_Guide?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/sacrament-of-slaughter
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