Card makover Contest

For this contest I want you to rewrite an already made magic card. I get a little frustrated when I see old cards that have texts like "This creature is not affected by summoning sickness", i leaves me thinking, just write haste in there it's shorter and sounds cooler. Then I remember that word hasn't been invited yet. So your challenge is to find an old card that needs the most fixing up and do just that (You may give the card new art if you can find something better). Post a link to the original card along with yours. Contest ends on the 22nd.
Example
Original: http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=24579
Restored: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/alexis-cloak?list=user

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