@shadow123 This seems like a very good card in a multicolor deck. The one thing I would change about it is giving it less of a life penalty, as having to give up one of your options can be a lot more damaging than people expect
@Mir-151414 I like it. Maybe change it to two instant or sorcery spells because I think 3 is a little too hard to achieve in most decks I know on a consistent basis.
Also since it's a rare and it has space at the bottom ( also to fill it in and make the card look better), maybe add another small ability like Flash or (2)U)(U), (T): Return target instant or sorcery card from your graveyard to your hand.
Do either (2)U)(U), (T) or (1)U)(U), (T). I'm not sure which mana cost would be better for his ability if you choose that.
@shadow123 it seems to me that in some formats the only way to rid the board of this card is with artifact creatures. And it’s equipment so it’s repeatable.
Annihilator 8 is unheard of. Even annihilator 3 is ungodly powerful.
I would say despite the CMC and activation cost it is too strong; degenerate in fact. These effects together are just too powerful.
@Fallen_Lord_Vulganos great concept and art! The third text box is too much. I would suggest "UB: exile the top card of target graveyard. Use this ability only once per turn as a sorcery."
And maybe start it at 0/1 and allow it to grow like a Lhurgoyf.
I like this as a */* creature with power/toughness defining ability. I think it should only count cards your opponents own in exile, and I agree with @Scott_Anderson that the activated ability is too strong as it stands.
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@Faiths_Guide: Your card feels like something that would be a good commander, but wouldn't see much, if any play in other formats. It restricts card options too much, as black, green and red all have their own cards to help them get more options. This one empowers your opponents too much, as cascade is an insanely strong ability.
Here's my card(Should be mono-black or black/blue hybrid):
@Fallen_Lord_Vulganos It's an interesting card that might be a bit pushed given the "or triggered ability" clause, but I think it can slide due to being multicolored. Flavor is definitely spot on - this captures the idea behind Price of Betrayal better than Price of Betrayal does in my opinion.
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@TheWanderer, A Fresh Start looks like a fantabulous stax piece, but I'll ignore it for now. It might fit better as a White/Blue card because it's putting permanents from hands onto the battlefield, but I'm not sure what's part of White's color pie anymore.
Clever design with Stand As One! My only suggestion would be to change it to "target opponent and target creature" to make it grammatically correct with Overload.
Ok sorry. I've never seen Nicol as a creature, that's kinda new. I think mass destruction (or at least a lot) is something every nicol bolas card should have, that seems very Nicol Bolas - y. But one question: How did NB return?
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This seems like a very good card in a multicolor deck. The one thing I would change about it is giving it less of a life penalty, as having to give up one of your options can be a lot more damaging than people expect
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Thoughts? Is the fact that it's a rare that costs 3 too much?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ascended-mind
I like it. Maybe change it to two instant or sorcery spells because I think 3 is a little too hard to achieve in most decks I know on a consistent basis.
Also since it's a rare and it has space at the bottom ( also to fill it in and make the card look better), maybe add another small ability like Flash or (2)U)(U), (T): Return target instant or sorcery card from your graveyard to your hand.
Do either (2)U)(U), (T) or (1)U)(U), (T). I'm not sure which mana cost would be better for his ability if you choose that.
This card I guess?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/gear-of-the-goat-lord-1?list=user
It looks good to me. 6 for a 5/5 and maybe a lot more.
You might consider changing the border to gold-artifact. And the cmc might look better with balanced mana symbols: 4WU or 2WWUU.
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Annihilator 8 is unheard of. Even annihilator 3 is ungodly powerful.
I would say despite the CMC and activation cost it is too strong; degenerate in fact. These effects together are just too powerful.
Too broken. Simply put. And we also have Stoneforge Mystic too. Reduce or change the annihilator 8 thing, dude.
So... for anyone else, any thoughts about this?
And maybe start it at 0/1 and allow it to grow like a Lhurgoyf.
Nightmare didn't fit in the type-line huh?
I like this as a */* creature with power/toughness defining ability. I think it should only count cards your opponents own in exile, and I agree with @Scott_Anderson that the activated ability is too strong as it stands.
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Here's my card(Should be mono-black or black/blue hybrid):
That should be blue. It's color-breaking in mono-white that's not even funny. And white also has plenty of wizards too. Enough said.
So, here's the card of mine:
It's an interesting card that might be a bit pushed given the "or triggered ability" clause, but I think it can slide due to being multicolored. Flavor is definitely spot on - this captures the idea behind Price of Betrayal better than Price of Betrayal does in my opinion.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/the-clandestine-machine
@TheWanderer, A Fresh Start looks like a fantabulous stax piece, but I'll ignore it for now. It might fit better as a White/Blue card because it's putting permanents from hands onto the battlefield, but I'm not sure what's part of White's color pie anymore.
Clever design with Stand As One! My only suggestion would be to change it to "target opponent and target creature" to make it grammatically correct with Overload.
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/vanillahs-trusty-sword
Anyone have any thoughts or suggestions about this?
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Is ur pic a mandalorian?
I'm still figuring out that part XD but he's made out of stars now...
Maybe he became eternalized?