@shadow123 It's weaker than Bump in the Night. If I would change something... --------------- Apple on Eldraine {b} Instant, common Target opponent loses 2 life. If that player sacrificed a Food this turn, they lose 4 life instead. --------------- ..so that it's not completely useless against decks that use no foods.
@Fantastickill7 It's alot like Klothys' Design except for White. It's a lot more powerful than Klothys', being an instant AND untapping creatures. Maybe you should make it cost a little more.
@JSoria a few criticisms. 1. instead of saying "A +X/+X counter" it should say "X +1/+1 counters." 2. Undergrowth does not reference a specific creature type, so the random Human in the ability doesn't make sense. 3. It's a bit too underpowered for its mana cost. I suggest making it at least a 2/1. 4. It's what we in the magic community like to call a big dumb idiot. without trample or some kind of evasion, it can just be chump blocked and eventually removed. for an evasion ability, I suggest menace, since it fits the general aura of the card and won't make it too good. Right now, it just doesn't seem like an uncommon, especially in limited formats or any non graveyard deck. Even graveyard decks wouldn't pick this up, because it has no evasion and needs Humans in your grave to even work.
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@ouser94501 Overwhelming comment, in the good way I mean. I actually redone it and updated on the post, thx for the advices I'm still to new to get all the keywords for the abilities, synergies, and everything.
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@Temurzoa You should only be posting up to two cards, but I’ll still give feedback on all of them as a cycle.
Everything except Consortium of Connection and Ambition seems ridiculously powerful. Some of these cards can easily achieve their sacrifice ability using other cards, then do something crazy very early on. It is nice when it comes to creativity and flavor though.
@shadow123 - I don't understand the flavor of Masked Consultant. I think scrying has nothing to do with masks, deception, and lies. Ryynari on the other hand has a cool effect, good flavor, and a neat artwork.
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@TenebrisNemo - I really like the flavour of that card. In my mind, having a creature sacrificed to this fallen angel in order for it to regain humanity is like a redemption arc for her - as with her being directly involved in a (possible) innocent's death, she realises the errors or her evil and casts off her wings. It's also a very balanced card at uncommon that would probably be a good limited pick (I don't know, I don't draft). I also like the Humanity mechanic and would love to see more - especially cases where it is an upside (trading a lower p/t for some effect) that you activate instead of opponents.
@Orzhova - Thanks! I am eager to use the mechanic again soon.
@ArchieTaylor - The last ability could cause memory issues and its text needs adjusting; some parts in it are redundant or wrong. For example, lands are colorless and the "enters the battlefield tapped" clause is useless, since the land is already on the battlefield. I'd suggest something like this instead:
{g/u}{t}: Put a (name) counter on target land. That land becomes a colorless land named Woodland Stream with "{t}: Add {g} or {u}" and loses all other abilities.
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@Fantastickill7 - I think Faiths put it there so the "indestructible" clause wouldn't move onto the next line in the text box. Putting a dot there prevents that.
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It's weaker than Bump in the Night. If I would change something...
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Apple on Eldraine {b}
Instant, common
Target opponent loses 2 life. If that player sacrificed a Food this turn, they lose 4 life instead.
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..so that it's not completely useless against decks that use no foods.
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Faved both.
I don't feel that Profane Blood Rite has enough synergy... the abilities don't really work together.
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It's alot like Klothys' Design except for White.
It's a lot more powerful than Klothys', being an instant AND untapping creatures. Maybe you should make it cost a little more.
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Next up, I saw the comments on The Nameless Mist and tried to make this Outer God simpler and easier to understand. Leave a favorite and/or comment then post up to two of your own!
P.S. I forgot the whole "Eldritch isn't a creature type" thing. I'll fix it on the next one of these I make.
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Overwhelming comment, in the good way I mean. I actually redone it and updated on the post, thx for the advices I'm still to new to get all the keywords for the abilities, synergies, and everything.
How come I can't see that image?
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Everything except Consortium of Connection and Ambition seems ridiculously powerful. Some of these cards can easily achieve their sacrifice ability using other cards, then do something crazy very early on. It is nice when it comes to creativity and flavor though.
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@Orzhova Nice! I commented and faved it.
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Baliden Stony Guardian is super OP...
his ability should be other creatures at least... and he's super underpriced.
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If anyone knows a better way of wording this card please pm me.
Haha! That's a funny one, but also mechanically interesting. I commented on wording in the cards comment section.
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@ArchieTaylor - The last ability could cause memory issues and its text needs adjusting; some parts in it are redundant or wrong. For example, lands are colorless and the "enters the battlefield tapped" clause is useless, since the land is already on the battlefield. I'd suggest something like this instead:
{g/u}{t}: Put a (name) counter on target land. That land becomes a colorless land named Woodland Stream with "{t}: Add {g} or {u}" and loses all other abilities.
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there's a "." inside of indestructible you have it as "indestruc.tible