Also for the Krodia Pact I want to make the seven deadly sins incarnate, but it is your choice @Commander_Paratus ,so hear me out. It is also relevant that I announce the presence of other colors in the cards. ----------------------------------------------------- Gluttony, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/g}-Rare-Legend Demon Trample-During your upkeep sacrifice a creature and Gluttony gains a +1/+1 counter. If you can not sacrifice a creature sacrifice Gluttony. [3/3]
Lust, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/r}-Rare-Legend Demon All creatures able to block Lust must do so.-Whenever Lust blocks or is blocked by a creature you gain control of that creature at the end of the combat phase. [2/3] ~MAJOR CONCERN~finding art that does show the sexuality of lust while clearly not being porn.~
Greed, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/u}-Rare-Legend Demon Shroud-Whenever you would draw cards, Scry, summon tokens, or have a creature gain counters double that number then lose life equal to that number.-{1}{u}:Gain control of target artifact until the end of your turn. [1/1]
Pride, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/w}-Rare-Legend Demon Lifelink-Pride may only attack alone.-Pride gains +2/+0 for each creature blocking it until the end of the turn. [4/2]
~~~~~~~~Cards with no specific ability yet~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Envy, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b}-Rare-Legend Demon Menace-""""Does something with stealing cards from graveyards then does something with them"""". [2/2]
Sloth, Arch Sinner-{2}{u}{u}{b}-Rare-Legend Demon """"Does something with tapping all cards(maybe discarding some)"""". [0/1]
Ire, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{r}{r}-Rare-Legend Demon """"Agro, just burning down the haters"""". [6/1]
Envy should be (when ever this card deals damage to a player, that player discards two cards and you draw two cards)
Sloth should be(whenever this card is tapped, tap all creatures target opponent controls; {t}: target opponent discards a card.)(higher power and toughness suggested for mana cost)
Ire should be(haste; whenever this card attacks, deal 2 damage to all creatures an opponent controls.)
Do the sins. I wasn't saying I did them to deter you from doing it, I was just saying that they're a fun concept to do, so much so that I even did them. And I don't usually do themes or stuff like that. Sorry if you misinterpreted my words. I did not mean for that. Do the sins, they're really fun.
Hey sorry I have been gone for a while, school stuff. Anyways. . .
@Suicidal_Deity Wonderful Work on Cyntre the Twisted. Can't wait for the rest. And hey, say congrats to your wife!
@CrucibleOfHate Nice job on Domri, though I have just one question. I am not sure if his last ability means that each creature you control fights another target creature, or if the creature that came out fights another creature equal to the number of creatures you control. And I will make note to change it to -3 on the second ability.
@AlphaOmega I think that having 7 legendary demons in the Kroddia would make it a little confusing. I think that making an artifact like a the keyrunes and cluestones from RTR block but making one for each of the clans with one of the sins of each. Such as Pride for the Sergytia and envy for Driephria, something like that would be AWESOME!! And also, if I could get the links to the pictures, that would be just swell!
@Stormbreath Like I said to AlphaOmega, I think that we could do an artifact for each of the clans too. Such as Concentration for the Kroddia, Vigor for the Grundia, Wisdom for the Driephria, Patience for the Cytoria, and Generosity for the Sergytia.
Also, Wisdom goes infinite off of its own ability.
Concentration could be worded a little more smoothly. "At the beginning of each opponent's upkeep, if you didn't attack that player during your last turn, that player can't attack you this turn."
Generosity feels weird with black, especially on a draw mechanic. Also, too powerful for that ability.
Morality you can just say 'protection from black and from red'. And the second ability only effects black and red creatures, not mono black or red. Not sure if that was your intention.
So, Vigor. Name's already been done so we need to differentiate this one from that. Vigor means good strength and health, which are easily portrayed together in the form of +1/+1 counters...
What about
"Whenever Vigor taps or untaps, put a +1/+1 counter on it."
Then you can choose if you want it to gain keywords when it gets to certain thresholds. Trample, hexproof, remove a counter and regenerate. Whatever.
Patience...
At the beginning of your upkeep... At the beginning of your end step...
Not sure on that one. I would suggest something along the lines of doing nothing grants you bonuses.
Driepheria Order-Driepheria's Stone of Sin (Sloth) {1}{w}{u} """{t}: add {w} or {u} to your mana pool-Tap * permanents some creature gains Luminescence,-1/+1''''
Cytoria Guild-Cytoria's Stone of Sin (Envy) {1}{b}{u} """{t}: add {u} or {b} to your mana pool-Something with heresy'''
Kroddia Pact-Kroddia's Stone of Sin (Ire) {1}{r}{b} """{t}: add {r} or {b} to your mana pool-sac *creatures and some creature gains Menace, +1/-1''''
Grundia Horde-Grundia's Stone of Sin [(Gluttony)* maybe Greed] Sergytia Alliance-Sergytia's Stone of Sin (Pride)
@Scuicidal_Deity- I want them to be white-blue, including all abilities, and I can up mana costs.
wisdom does not draw infinite, as it only adds a single card to the total.(like hardened scales). this also makes cards like howling mine twice as powerful.
Alter generosity's power as you see fit.
Morality-none of that was my intention. it has protection from black and from red, and it effects red, black, and red-black creatures with its power.
Vigor is good, and Patience could reward you with extra cards and life.
@AlphaOmega, They are GREAT!! Well done. My only concern is that I don't think that they don't need a colored mana casting cost, as with the tarkir banners and the ravnica keyrunes. They can just be 3 mana, especially since they enter tapped. Can't wait to see the rest!!
Comments
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cyntre-the-twisted
Two down.
Sorry, taking waaaaay longer than expected. Damn pregnant wife...
XD
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/flame-bellied-imp?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/unleash-the-hounds-4
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/shadow-brute
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/shadow-stalker-16
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Gluttony, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/g}-Rare-Legend Demon
Trample-During your upkeep sacrifice a creature and Gluttony gains a +1/+1 counter. If you can not sacrifice a creature sacrifice Gluttony. [3/3]
Lust, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/r}-Rare-Legend Demon
All creatures able to block Lust must do so.-Whenever Lust blocks or is blocked by a creature you gain control of that creature at the end of the combat phase. [2/3]
~MAJOR CONCERN~finding art that does show the sexuality of lust while clearly not being porn.~
Greed, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/u}-Rare-Legend Demon
Shroud-Whenever you would draw cards, Scry, summon tokens, or have a creature gain counters double that number then lose life equal to that number.-{1}{u}:Gain control of target artifact until the end of your turn. [1/1]
Pride, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b/w}-Rare-Legend Demon
Lifelink-Pride may only attack alone.-Pride gains +2/+0 for each creature blocking it until the end of the turn. [4/2]
~~~~~~~~Cards with no specific ability yet~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Envy, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{b}{b}-Rare-Legend Demon
Menace-""""Does something with stealing cards from graveyards then does something with them"""". [2/2]
Sloth, Arch Sinner-{2}{u}{u}{b}-Rare-Legend Demon
""""Does something with tapping all cards(maybe discarding some)"""". [0/1]
Ire, Arch Sinner-{2}{b}{r}{r}-Rare-Legend Demon
""""Agro, just burning down the haters"""". [6/1]
Remember this is just an outline
Sloth should be(whenever this card is tapped, tap all creatures target opponent controls; {t}: target opponent discards a card.)(higher power and toughness suggested for mana cost)
Ire should be(haste; whenever this card attacks, deal 2 damage to all creatures an opponent controls.)
I made the seven sins a while ago. Ha ha. Actually really fun concepts to put to paper. They translate nicely as Magic cards. Good choice.
Wisdom, Perfection
2wuu
whenever you draw a card, draw annother card. {2b,t}: draw a card.
2/5
Concentration, Perfection
3uuu
if you do not attack any opponent during your turn, opponents cannot attack you during their turns.
3/7
Generosity, Perfection
3wwu
2w,t: gain one life for each creature you control. 4b,t: draw a card for each creature you control
2/2
Morality, Perfection
2www
protection from black, protection from red. black and red creatures cannot attack you.
3/3
(Ones that I have no idea how to do)
Vigor, Perfection
Patience, Perfection
O.o
Do the sins. I wasn't saying I did them to deter you from doing it, I was just saying that they're a fun concept to do, so much so that I even did them. And I don't usually do themes or stuff like that. Sorry if you misinterpreted my words. I did not mean for that. Do the sins, they're really fun.
I'll do gluttony, greed, pride, and maybe lust( @Suicidal_Deity can you please find suitable art for lust.)
Art link: http://orig03.deviantart.net/0d29/f/2012/280/1/9/gluttony_by_mgnz-d2cc62e.jpg
@Suicidal_Deity Wonderful Work on Cyntre the Twisted. Can't wait for the rest. And hey, say congrats to your wife!
@CrucibleOfHate Nice job on Domri, though I have just one question. I am not sure if his last ability means that each creature you control fights another target creature, or if the creature that came out fights another creature equal to the number of creatures you control. And I will make note to change it to -3 on the second ability.
@AlphaOmega I think that having 7 legendary demons in the Kroddia would make it a little confusing. I think that making an artifact like a the keyrunes and cluestones from RTR block but making one for each of the clans with one of the sins of each. Such as Pride for the Sergytia and envy for Driephria, something like that would be AWESOME!! And also, if I could get the links to the pictures, that would be just swell!
@Stormbreath Like I said to AlphaOmega, I think that we could do an artifact for each of the clans too. Such as Concentration for the Kroddia, Vigor for the Grundia, Wisdom for the Driephria, Patience for the Cytoria, and Generosity for the Sergytia.
Thanks Again!
Sure.
Also, Wisdom goes infinite off of its own ability.
Concentration could be worded a little more smoothly. "At the beginning of each opponent's upkeep, if you didn't attack that player during your last turn, that player can't attack you this turn."
Generosity feels weird with black, especially on a draw mechanic. Also, too powerful for that ability.
Morality you can just say 'protection from black and from red'. And the second ability only effects black and red creatures, not mono black or red. Not sure if that was your intention.
So, Vigor. Name's already been done so we need to differentiate this one from that. Vigor means good strength and health, which are easily portrayed together in the form of +1/+1 counters...
What about
"Whenever Vigor taps or untaps, put a +1/+1 counter on it."
Then you can choose if you want it to gain keywords when it gets to certain thresholds. Trample, hexproof, remove a counter and regenerate. Whatever.
Patience...
At the beginning of your upkeep...
At the beginning of your end step...
Not sure on that one. I would suggest something along the lines of doing nothing grants you bonuses.
Hope this helps.
Art link: http://i99.beon.ru/img196.imageshack.us/img196/8057/d2dckekaikotaki.jpg
Driepheria Order-Driepheria's Stone of Sin (Sloth)
{1}{w}{u}
"""{t}: add {w} or {u} to your mana pool-Tap * permanents some creature gains Luminescence,-1/+1''''
Cytoria Guild-Cytoria's Stone of Sin (Envy)
{1}{b}{u}
"""{t}: add {u} or {b} to your mana pool-Something with heresy'''
Kroddia Pact-Kroddia's Stone of Sin (Ire)
{1}{r}{b}
"""{t}: add {r} or {b} to your mana pool-sac *creatures and some creature gains Menace, +1/-1''''
Grundia Horde-Grundia's Stone of Sin [(Gluttony)* maybe Greed]
Sergytia Alliance-Sergytia's Stone of Sin (Pride)
GTG
wisdom does not draw infinite, as it only adds a single card to the total.(like hardened scales). this also makes cards like howling mine twice as powerful.
Alter generosity's power as you see fit.
Morality-none of that was my intention. it has protection from black and from red, and it effects red, black, and red-black creatures with its power.
Vigor is good, and Patience could reward you with extra cards and life.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/grundias-stone-of-sin
These are mine
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ambush-faerie
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/faerie-deceiver?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cyntres-thrall?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/chief-armeon-the-wayfarer
Orren, Grundia Pathfinder
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/orren-grundia-pathfinder?list=user
Number four and five. Whew...