@crawdadswelcome - such excellent art as always. Thanks for posting!
@DARKSTEEL - 2CMC mana rocks are pretty rare these days, so I don't know how likely it is we'd see one with upside, albeit limited, any time soon. I can't think of one in standard at the moment. Perhaps it's fine though. Remember to capitalise "Add" and there are also some words in the flavour text that should be capitalised too. Finally, a temple makes it sound like a land. A better choice might be a monument or something similar. Thanks for posting!
@TenebrisNemo - Interesting card! The mechanic might be doing a little too much but then again it's someone else's mechanic so I won't dwell on that. With the number of dismembered moving parts, this feels really borderline between common and uncommon. Flavour is absolutely spot on though as usual. I feel like an unkeyworded uncommon version would be great!
Here's! The Undertale Theme I am not sure, whenever if it should be uncommon or rare because it's unique. However, I made it common because it gives a small effect as possible.
@FourEyesIsAFish - Hi and welcome to MTGCardsmith! Thanks for posting your card.
The card is interesting but I'm curious about these belief counters. Are they part of a set where belief counters can be gained and lost? Otherwise it could just be that Young Selkie isn't a creature unless it has a +1/+1 counter on it.
After watching a lot of the recent Zendikar Rising Drafts, I've started to have a much greater appreciation of the balancing required for commons, and it's really helped me (I think) in making the commons for my set, Planar Collapse! So here's some of the commons I've made recently trying to build on my new knowledge!!
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https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/heated-mine?list=user
EDIT: I re-did the card. Here's the new version:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/copse-lurker
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/emydid-militia
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hogsback-strigga
Here's a few I've made with original art.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dust-11?list=set&set=55645
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/keep-down?list=set&set=55645
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/spears-attack?list=set&set=55645
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/robot-blast-attack?list=set&set=55645
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/papyruss-spare-1?list=set&set=55645
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/betrayed-3?list=set&set=55645
Here's! The Undertale Theme I am not sure, whenever if it should be uncommon or rare because it's unique. However, I made it common because it gives a small effect as possible.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/young-selkie-1?list=set&set=56543
Hope ya'll enjoyed any of these!
Edit: Changed mana cost to {2}{w}.
You've got the mana order wrong...
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/malice-contestant?list=user
Using Dread by @Animist
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/door-to-the-heavens?list=user