@Yonkers11 Great works on finding challenges. If you put a little more thoughts in card design, that would make challengers happy. You have already so many points, so why don't you try to improve your design skills a little?
Here are some feedbacks on cards you made for Lujikul's challenges:
Demon of Rakdos, made for "Make a card that discards one or more cards as a cost." Basically menace only matters when the creature is attacking. So that triggered ability you made is pointless. And if I was the challenger, I would want to see what would you do with cards you discarded. So interactions with graveyard would be good idea for the card's ability.
Cleric of Ouchies, made for "Create a card that causes loss of life that isn't black or red." I don't think color pie break is what Lujikul wanted to see. I think colorless card is the easiest way to do this, but if you want to be creative, you could create colored cards with effects like changing life, swapping life, forcing players to pay life..
Also, I'd like to leave a hint here into finding my challenges! My last challenge has already been found. You'll recognize the connection between my first two challenges. Good luck to whoever wants to search!
ok @Tomigon, thanks for the info! And as for cleric of ouchies, mostly just basing him of Revaka, Wizard Savant (or something like that) from an old set.
Some interesting challenges were found. And I want to see more cards for them! So here are some bonus challenges. Basically the same challenges that were found, but I added some steroids.
Bonus challenge 1: "Make a card featuring the Ferret creature type." Additional rules: It must cost 4 or more mana, and it's base power and toughness must be 1/2 or less. It must have at least four lines of rules text. Rewards: 3 points and a favorite from me.
Bonus challenge 4: "Create a red sorcery with flash" Additional rules: If I look at your card and say "this can be simply an instant without flash", that card doesn't count. Rewards: 6 points and a favorite from me.
People can make only one card for each of these challenges. I'll announce one winner for each of those challenges at the end of April. And winners get the rewards. When you submit your cards, let me know which challenges you made your cards for.
Made for Bonus Challenge 1: Make a Ferret that costs 4 or more mana, and its base power and toughness must be 1/2 or less. It must have at least four lines of rules text. https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/moonlit-ferret
@TheGamingBolasChannel I'm sorry I don't know what you're referring to. Edit: If you're referring to Rynar, loss of life doesn't count as commander damage and your own commander can't deal commander damage to you. Rynar would be a bad commander because casting him from the command zone causes you to lose 5 life, but this doesn't count as commander damage towards you.
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Sorry, one person can hide only three challenges, if they are in old cards or not. This is for making things easy for us to keep track.
My card:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/devastating-avalanche-1
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/orzo-wasteland-courier
ah hah hah found it
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/manticore-cub?list=user
here ill ping you this time @East2West
I've already released a hint to those locations but no one found it yet xD
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/frenetic-knowledge?list=user
well I don't know if this is the one your hinting at but I found it.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/consult-the-depths?list=user
heres another one. but now I have to go to school. also get pinged @Lujikul
Great works on finding challenges. If you put a little more thoughts in card design, that would make challengers happy. You have already so many points, so why don't you try to improve your design skills a little?
Here are some feedbacks on cards you made for Lujikul's challenges:
Demon of Rakdos, made for "Make a card that discards one or more cards as a cost."
Basically menace only matters when the creature is attacking. So that triggered ability you made is pointless.
And if I was the challenger, I would want to see what would you do with cards you discarded. So interactions with graveyard would be good idea for the card's ability.
Cleric of Ouchies, made for "Create a card that causes loss of life that isn't black or red."
I don't think color pie break is what Lujikul wanted to see. I think colorless card is the easiest way to do this, but if you want to be creative, you could create colored cards with effects like changing life, swapping life, forcing players to pay life..
And I see some mistakes in your wordings. I recommend you to check out this- https://mtgcardsmith.com/blog/making-cards-more-relistic
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/secundus-of-two-souls?list=user
My card: https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/woodland-guide-2
Also, I'd like to leave a hint here into finding my challenges! My last challenge has already been found. You'll recognize the connection between my first two challenges. Good luck to whoever wants to search!
--Bonus Challenges--
Bonus challenge 1:
"Make a card featuring the Ferret creature type."
Additional rules: It must cost 4 or more mana, and it's base power and toughness must be 1/2 or less. It must have at least four lines of rules text.
Rewards: 3 points and a favorite from me.
Bonus challenge 2:
"Create a card that causes loss of life that isn't black or red."
Additional rules: It must not be colorless. It must not break the color pie. "Loss of life" must not be caused by combat damage.
Rewards: 4 points and a favorite from me.
Bonus challenge 3:
"Create a legendary creature that would be a "terrible" commander."
Additional rules: "Terrible" doesn't mean weak.
Rewards: 5 points and a favorite from me.
Bonus challenge 4:
"Create a red sorcery with flash"
Additional rules: If I look at your card and say "this can be simply an instant without flash", that card doesn't count.
Rewards: 6 points and a favorite from me.
People can make only one card for each of these challenges. I'll announce one winner for each of those challenges at the end of April. And winners get the rewards.
When you submit your cards, let me know which challenges you made your cards for.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/sinners-curse
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/spirit-of-trials
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/moonlit-ferret
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rynar-sworn-in-blood
Edit: If you're referring to Rynar, loss of life doesn't count as commander damage and your own commander can't deal commander damage to you. Rynar would be a bad commander because casting him from the command zone causes you to lose 5 life, but this doesn't count as commander damage towards you.
Great job! Afflict was a loophole that I didn't think of. It happens during combat but it's not combat damage haha.