@Mellow_MC A lot of the time, when an ability triggers on a creature you don't control being tapped they'll include the clause "if it's not attacking" just to scale it down a bit. With something like drawing a card for each tapping creature, you're probably good to include this clause. That also keeps go wide strategies from just swinging in with a bunch of creatures and getting a ton of free damage in. I also wonder if stun counters, but without any way to tap the stunned creatures, actually hurts the ability, since those creatures are going to either avoid tapping, or just remained tapped if tapped already, making you less likely to get the pay off. As a commander, this is a tricky build, since you miss blue, the best color at tapping down opposing creatures, and it seems as likely to kill you as to help you in 60 card formats, since it doesn't come down until late, and then your opponent can likely wait to tap anything until it benefits them, or even kills you. It seems a challenging card to make work, but, that also could make it a really interesting card to build around. If you're looking to make a tapping creatures you don't control themed deck in Orzhov, this is a really good top end or possible commander.
Here's a card I made that I'm positive can be broken, and have thought of some possible issues, but, I'm not sure how to get an "anti-leyline of the void" effect without it also enabling a bunch of insane nonsense. Let me know if you have any ideas to reign it in:
@Mellow_MC Funnily enough, my first draft of Rime was going to be orzhov as well, but I wanted it to be azorious to allow for blue color identity availability and changed the emblem ability. Anyway, Seela is kinda overpowered, though much better balanced than some of your other cards. It should probably be a mythic. As for non-balance feedback, it is an interesting design that makes your opponents reconsider their attack and can really work as a nice finisher for control.
wooowww holy heck Chagren that looks like a legit card I would pull from a random deck lol! Only thing I find a little odd is “as though it had flash”, idk why but I feel like it could have been worded differently
I am Undertale Fan, but I made it MTG friendly. Thoughts? Lore: This Sans is only the skeleton who has no nickname as he is from the orginal timeline. He has nothing but a purpose to judge humans for actions he/she have made. Compare with others his kind, he is weakest entity, yet a lot of stamina and agility makes it up for him. His ability in additional do more damage to these who do wrong doings more than these who do good doings.
Lore: In alternate timeline, which Sans - for some reasons - gains memories of what human have done in different timelines and he couldn't do anything about it. So, to prevent this history repeat itself, he takes his friends and his kinds to make himself strong while force human to remain weak. His nickname is Murder or Dust as this timeline is called Dusttale.
The character in the card art is featured in “HATSUNE MIKU: COLORFUL STAGE!” and hands down is one of my favorite characters. It took me like 15 minutes to try and make a proper card of her haha
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I also wonder if stun counters, but without any way to tap the stunned creatures, actually hurts the ability, since those creatures are going to either avoid tapping, or just remained tapped if tapped already, making you less likely to get the pay off.
As a commander, this is a tricky build, since you miss blue, the best color at tapping down opposing creatures, and it seems as likely to kill you as to help you in 60 card formats, since it doesn't come down until late, and then your opponent can likely wait to tap anything until it benefits them, or even kills you. It seems a challenging card to make work, but, that also could make it a really interesting card to build around. If you're looking to make a tapping creatures you don't control themed deck in Orzhov, this is a really good top end or possible commander.
Funnily enough, my first draft of Rime was going to be orzhov as well, but I wanted it to be azorious to allow for blue color identity availability and changed the emblem ability. Anyway, Seela is kinda overpowered, though much better balanced than some of your other cards. It should probably be a mythic. As for non-balance feedback, it is an interesting design that makes your opponents reconsider their attack and can really work as a nice finisher for control.
Lore: This Sans is only the skeleton who has no nickname as he is from the orginal timeline. He has nothing but a purpose to judge humans for actions he/she have made. Compare with others his kind, he is weakest entity, yet a lot of stamina and agility makes it up for him. His ability in additional do more damage to these who do wrong doings more than these who do good doings.
Lore: In alternate timeline, which Sans - for some reasons - gains memories of what human have done in different timelines and he couldn't do anything about it. So, to prevent this history repeat itself, he takes his friends and his kinds to make himself strong while force human to remain weak. His nickname is Murder or Dust as this timeline is called Dusttale.