The Kabbalah Set

As a studying and practicing occultist in the real world, I decided to pour my creative juices into incorporating a fun but probably overpowered set involving the Kabbalah and more importantly, the Tree of Life. It's a black and white set involving primarily of angels and demons. An image of the tree can be found here:
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/64/42/80/64428004c6338fbacec3c54874628e67.jpg
The demons hold the left pillar, the left hand path. The angels hold the right pillar, the right hand path. Together, in unison, they uphold the grand balance of the beautiful Tree of Life. The middle pillar is the equilibrium that leads straight to victory; the primary support.
The new mechanics that I will be introducing in this set is "Ascend" and "Descend". These mechanics resemble the planeswalker climbing the Tree of Life, conquering themselves to achieve enlightenment of the self and all things. The two cards linked below will explain these mechanics:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hod-lord-of-splendor-3?list=set&set=10494
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/netzach-lord-of-victory-2?list=set&set=10494
The entire set can be found here:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/chriswalt/sets/10494
Now this is my first time ever posting on the forums, so I don't know if you folks will find my efforts insulting or mediocre. Though, the point of me creating this was to express my creativity in something mundane I hold dear to my heart; and have a more tangible, symbolic way of teaching the esoteric knowledge hidden within the Tree of Life. If you have any suggestions for how to word my cards better to make them as "true" to the game of mtg as possible, or if you have other ideas or critique, I would much appreciate it!