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http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/yoko-the-illustrated?list=user#.VQUnhZVFDIU
The art made me think that she absorbs a creature onto her skin, and then she sends it out to do battle on her behalf.
The problem I have with it, is that it doesn't feel quite right.
Tell me what you think, and if you have any suggestions let me know. I'm off to bed, so feel free to look at it whenever you have free time, I'm in no hurry!
Here is one: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tempestuous-elemental-2?list=user#.VQWSf9btMxA
Not sure I got my wording right.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/iris-the-minds-eye?list=user#.VQWXAmTF8qo
Thanks!
-http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/world-cleanser-hydra?list=user#.VQZ6Jp3F8XA
-http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mind-dancer-legionnaire?list=user#.VQZ6ep3F8XA
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/disloyal-lich?list=user#.VQbic9LF-30
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/performer-of-sorrow?list=user#.VQboSEvY91M
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/death-pact-5#.VQb4W9LF-30
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/self-sacrifice-3#.VQfhgY6UfD8
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/lucky-dice#.VQgCWY6UfD8
You didnt link anything.
APOCALYPSE YUMIGANI
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/apocalypse-yumigani-2?list=user#.VQgwCY7F-So
AZRIALA, ARCANE MASTER
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/azriala-arcane-master-2?list=user#.VQgwOI7F-So
... I already left comments on both those cards, mate. Also, I'm pretty sure Tomigon pointed you elsewhere for wording, and to me for feedback rather.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dammerg-goldclad#.VQg88vnIaDM
Seriously, did you read the OP? And if you read the comment on your card you'd see i commented, jeez.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/royal-enforcers?list=user#.VQme4tLF-30
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tij-kings-justice?list=user#.VQme8dLF-30
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/vera-griffin-eye?list=user#.VQmfANLF-30
Done.